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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2017 6:28 pm Title: Chapter 44

The WASP world is going to kick Lindsay out very soon. I hope she chocked on the champagne.

So happy Jenny tackled Michael. Even if she's delighted Hank is coming to live near her, it must hurt to have such a father.

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 44

Wow. Now even the Petersons finally seem to realize what a bitch their daughter is. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 44

Very glad I'm not on teh receiving end of Zee's pitbull actions. Definitely would want to stay on her good side. She's wonderfully evil. hehehe.

Lindsey of course has pulled the wool oever her parent's eyes. But apparently not for long. Interesting conversation that Bernadine overhead at the shop between L&M. The great thing is, Mel didn't once reaact in anger or anything! she wsa totally calm and actually laughted at Lindsey.

Over the moon for Mel! Amazing! YAY!!

also had to cheered really loudly when Jenny plowed into Michael adn screamed at him! I feel bad for her that it came to that point, adn that she actually over heard what Michael said. And that she called him a cunt?!?! WOW. I don't see any kind of bridge happening now. There's no way Jenny will ever forgive Michael.

Shame we'll never see the video compilation being put together. LOL. Would be worth the laugh!! :)

Step 1 in gettng Michael adn Lindsey out of Shadeyside is underway. 1 step further in showing that neither have a place to live, making their quest for custody nullified. Oh Zee is so wonderfully evil! Just love her to bits!

Nancy and ronald had a very rude awakening regarding their darling daughter. the tide certainly turned at record speed once everything that Bernadine said was backed up by Phil. Life is going to get even worse for L&M.

OH I meant to say a couple chapters back...the idea of ryder and Ben together......very nice. 

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Yep Zee is starting to bite back...she comes into feed when she needs to but also lets others share the meal.  She scares the devil sometimes with her calm approach to absolute evisceration of a body.

Of course I had to have good news for Mel to lead to good news for Jenny in the romance department...

Jenny had to have the white out and lose it, it has been a long time coming since...I will balance this out a bit in a later chapter.

The Petersons and that Novotny aer about to enter hell.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

PS: I'm reading the Game they Play too isn't it great.  I love Ryder!

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:05 am Title: Chapter 44

So great!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 44

I think this is going to hurt



Author's Response:

Oh hell yeah.

Hope you stick around to find out how much!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:14 am Title: Chapter 44

Fantastic Chapter the only dislike is what jenny did to her father 



Author's Response:

Thank you and I understand your dislike and I was in two minds about it as I've said in previous revieews, but it had to be done and I will balance it out in later...hope you stay with me.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 44

Fantastic!  Well the Petersons have had an eye opening.

Thanks for sharing, looking for next update!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Thanks JoAnn, I am so enjoying writing this.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 44

GO JENNY!!  I don't condone violence against a parent but since Michael can't even be referred to as a substitute parent I don't see the harm of her knocking him on his Ass. (That was so funny I gotta read it again:))

Not surprised after they got served last weekend they would expect a free meal the next, time for these two nitwits to wake up and realize you are no longer welcome anywhere, Hell everyone would rather invite Hannibal Lector than eat another meal with these two vile people. (The free meals, free car service is OVER!!)

Ron and Nancy had to be told the truth after all they are paying for her stupidity, Bernice could have been really mean and just gossip to everyone behind their backs, but she felt Ron and Nancy needed to be told that their entitled little princess is hated wherever she goes. 

Just because you were born into a life of privilege doesn't mean it can't be turned against you or taken away.

Michael and Lindsay have a lot of money to shell out to people in the next few weeks, Ron and Nancy should walk  away and let Lindsay fight her own battles.

Happy that Mel will be working at White & Sullivan Charles, David and Hank will be moving back to Pittsburgh, the preparations for the wedding are set, Emily and Francine are working on the flowers and making new friends.

Lindsay and Michael think they have the power or clout to get back to their rightful places, they can't comprehend that life is not a fairytale and that when you throw dirt on others it comes back  to you tenfold.

The next few weeks leading up to the wedding should be very interesting, amusing.

 

 



Author's Response:

You and me both, I don't condone violence at all but she had a white out moment and this has been building up since Christmas, I hope to balance what she did a bit in a later chapter.

They're going to learn and learn hard and they've not been throwing dirt they've been throwing rocks.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 44

YES... Mommy and Daddy are not going to be the resource Lindsay expects anymore... 

Love the renovations are being done so the idiot twins can see what they are losing...

So happy for Jenny that Hank is moving near!!!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you are still enjoying it, the beginning of the end, and watch out for unexpected but nice visitors who are very firmly in Zee's camp.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 44

We now tune into the Downfall of Bitch and Mitch already in progress....

Quite the eventful chapter and I'm soooooo glad it was!! Ms. Entitled Wannabe-Rich-Bitch is going down faster than the Titanic! LOL Although I can't stand Nancy and Ron, I'm glad that Beradine and Arnold were undeterred in giving them the unadulterated TRUTH about Lindsay. They can't dispute what was told to them by the Williamsons or their own lawyer! I'm also happy that they told Nancy that the reason Lindsay isn't accepted or at the most barely tolerated isn't because of that 'phase of her life' but because she's a spoiled heifer. NO ONE likes to eat from the table where the cow isn't palatable- in this case that cow is Lindsay. It's going to be interesting to see what Nancy and Ron do with the information that's been given to them especially since they have been lied to, humiliated and taken advantage of and at least one couple in the WASP nest knows it. 

As for Zee, that was EPIC! I could just see the look on Nancy's face when she found out just how much of a gain Jennifer has now that Ron's fired her. Lindsay and her machinations once again prove to be a detriment to her parents. I bet now Nancy is wishing she would have swallowed instead of begetting Lindsay...LOL As for the woman herself, she is certainly about to feel every bit of the wrath she promised Brian and Zee would and it's coming from all directions.

As for Soprano Boy......LMFAOOOOOOoooooooo ROFLMAOoooooooooo LMAO LOL!! I spit my coffee and couldn't catch my breath for about a good five minutes from laughing so damn hard! Even now the residual chuckles have me wary to put my coffee cup to my lips! That was EPIC, CLASSIC and long OVERDUE! Understand that I would normally never condone a child clobbering their parent but Go Jenny! Michael really doesn't have a case where Hunter is concerned especially since he never really supported the young man. It will be fun to watch if he still tries to pursue fighting the dissolution so that all of his own dirty laundry will be aired publicly, including his brief association with Rita Montgomery.

And they Dumbass-tic Duo is about to be homeless!!! It's hilarious that they think the renovations on the property are being done for their continued comfort. Will Zee serve up the eviction notice while they are in the hotel? Also, I bet Michael is constantly buying back his own possession from Deb....LOL So he's about to be BROKE, BUSTED and DISGUSTED again!

Poor Phil having to be hounded by Lindsay and Michael! I wonder if now that Ron knows what his money is paying for- which is defense of his guilty daughter- will he stop paying the bill and either let Lindsay continue to use his lawyer or ask Phil to stop representing the harridan? Personally I opt for the second one. Any further assistance on his part is going to result in abject public humiliation. No way can they keep all of Lindsay's legal troubles silent- something is bound to get out, specifically the emancipation suit from Gus and Jenny. Also that bogus countersuit Lindsay is trying to push would also be a surefire way for her secrets to get out. Mel has just become a partner in a firm that is more than well-known but notorious for their Win-Loss ratio in Legal circles....SMH Hanging out with her fellow Entitlement Whore Michael has given Lindsay a STUPIDITY LEAK of EPIC proportions.

LAWD, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

WRITE On, Nicole!!

HUGS,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

Nichelle, as I have said to BlueMyst a couple of times...I wrote the chapter before I read this review, so ding-ding on Michael and his toys.

They are in a slow leaking boat in shark and pirahna infested waters and there's already blood in the water...hee hee.

Yes Soprano Boy finally got what she screamed at him at Christmas.  I was in two minds as to whether or not to let her at him in that way but with all the frustration and hurt she had she just had a white out moment, there is more on this to come.

Happy reading

Hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 44

What a super fantastic chapter.  I learned a new word.  Myrmeric pyriformis.  Zee out wasped some wasp.  Ron has no idea what havoc his daughter has spun.  He just listened to her and did what she asked.  The fact that it cost his wife wasn't in the cards.  Lindsay tends to twist things.  Running into Mel as the super market led to more interesting exchange of information.  First Lindsay thinks she can move back to the brownstone, then she assumes that she'll be allowed to use the loft.  What planet is she living on?  Lindsay doesn't realize that pissing off a judge is not a good thing.  And a fellow wasp heard it all.  Love the call between Emily, Francine, Emmett, Brian and Justin.  It helped that Emily heard what Brian told Lindsay after the court case ended.  So all's good from that corner.  You have to feel for poor Phil having to deal with the Terrible Twosome.  Michael with his mindset that Hunter owes him and Lindsay with her sense of entitlement.  Then we hear that Mel is told that she'll no longer be working for her law firm and I'm thinking WTF.  But you fix it by getting her a partnership with a better firm and giving her job to Charles, which brings David and Hank back to Pittsburgh, which is good for Jenny.  Speaking of Jenny, our sweet, adorable Jenny who speaks her mind and mows her sperm donor down when he has the never to say that Hunter almost killed Ben. It was more like Michael not listening when Hunter suggested a different treatment that almost killed Ben.  Gus is really pissed too.  I'm still quaking from Lindz and Mikey thinking they can push there way into a free meal.  Love the finishing touch were Butch eats the shoes.  At least once Deb found out about what Mikey said, she sided with Jenny.  Can't wait for L and M to find out who will be moving into the property once it's renovated.  Evil to let them stay at Mansions on the Fifth.  Too good for them.  Ron and Nancy now know just what their daughter has been up to.  Can't wait to find out if she takes Bernidine's advice.  The only people we didn't hear about was Ben and Steve.  How you keep up with everybody is amazing.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it although I did give you a bit of a jolt...but I will always make sure everyone but them is happy.

Their behaviour towards Phil gets worse.

If you like insects do feel free to google bulldog ant/mymerica pyriformis...I'm not to bothered but regretted clicking on the picture of them feeding.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 44

So, now that Nancy and Ron have had their eyes forced WIDE open, I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to what Nancy is going to do to her daughter.

Love the hit Jenny gave Michael.  He deserved it for all the grief he has caused her.

Keep writing!!!



Author's Response:

Oh yes and then some.

I wasn't sure about getting her to wallop him but I felt she needed to.

Thanks for the encouragement.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

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