Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 45

He remembers. That's so great. Michael buying his own stuff is just hilarious. I wonder where these two will go now that they are homeless. 

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 12:57 am Title: Chapter 45

Hahaha! Michael buying his own toys! From his mother!!! Justice prevails! 

Author's Response:

Almost prevails...there's more to come on that!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 45

finally caught up in reviewing....whew!! Incredible weekend for updates! thank you!!

M&L are off to their temporary lodgings. Hope they enjoy it while it lasts. their meal tickets are pretty much done for I think. finally. Neither will even have their parents to fall back on as they all know the truth as well. Well, Deb has always been in teh know, byt Nancy and Ron certainly had their eyes opened! I wonder what they have up their sleeves? sounds like they may be going on a vacation for the sole purpose of Lindsey not being able to contact then, forcing her to figure somethign out on her own. Pffffffffffft....like that's going to happen. 

Ivan the Terrific is on the job! Now that he know's everything, he's not just doing a favour for a friend...he's going to be out for blood. 

M&L really area peice fo work. Neither really give a shit about the kids, at least not to the extent they are claiming. It's not like they are REALLY looking for custody. they simply want the moneys involved as well as it seems, and excuse to fcuk with B&J's wedding. 

Soooooooooo...Miriam knows "Nuken". Is she related to Faal?

HEHEHE, the idea of Arnold and Bernadine at the diner is actually very amusing. they are certainly getting an eyeful!

Apparently step 2 occurred as well! not only are they given a huge bill that they racked up duringtheir stay at the hotel, but they've also been served....again. LOL! On top of that, David and Cahrles are moving into Shadeyside adn will reap the benefits of the new renovations.

best of all though........I know that Deb has been selling Michael's stuff on Ebay, but OMG....He's been buying it back without even knowing it!!!! Priceless! Oh you wonderful woman! what a terrific brain you have!

Can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!

cheers,

Elaine

Author's Response:

You're welcome.  My muse has been whispering deliciously evil things in my ear so I have to write them down.

M&L's sense of entitlement comes to the fore again and bingo on their delaying tactics but that bites them in the arse too.

She's not related to Faal but she is based on Soirsagrey/Meriam Maatje, a fellow KD reader who is Dutch and a lovely lady.

Bernadine started off, a bit like David, as a 'nasty' person but she has a good heart inside that WASP countenance and as for Arnold he's a bit like Ted, doesn't say much but when he does people listen.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 45

so much good stuff in this chapter... the Petersons finally getting the info they should have known, Charles and David moving in all in front of the idiot twin, and the PROM!!!!

but I think my favorite is that Michael has been buying his own shit on Ebay!!!! that is priceless!!!!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 45

We now join the Chronicles of the Pain-in-the-Ass (PITA) Association starring Lindsay Peterson and Michael Charles Novotny already in progress:

HOT DAMN!!!! WHAT A CHAPTER!! First, can I just say that I LOVE the frenemies Arnold and Bernadine! Although they don't like the Petersons, they are still willing to put their animosity for them to the side and help them out of the pit of obscurity Lindsay is heading for. They are just simply decent people. I had to love that they were even willing to brave the Liberty Diner to do that and without undue prejudice towards people who live their lives differently than themselves. Their reaction to Kiki was priceless!! 

As for Mel: Thank goodness she figured out Lindsay's endgame and called Adam. Then he has the forethought to bring Judge Millner up to speed on the situation and asking him to enlist Meriam to hear Michael's case. LMAO!!!! Bitch and Mitch are simply NOT READY for what's coming. The supoenas was a brilliant idea because Melanie was right on point when she said that Lindsay- who in turn would advise Michael- to wait to respond as close to the date of Brian and Justin's wedding since it is more than obvious now that they are NOT invited. Triflin' HO

Then we have Joshua, who already has a few axes to grind in Michael's spine simply for being the asshole that he is (apologies to assholes everywhere since you have purpose whereas Michael has none but to be a turd). I'm glad he and Phil had drinks and without pressing the attorney for the client names, gleaned the gist of what the Dumbass-tic Duo were trying to do. Since he's well versed in most of the cases, he in turn he enlist Ivan to get the story about Hunter. Ben and Deb trying to comfort him was touching and very well-written. I felt the anguish and anger from all three of them. Now Ivan has an even bigger axe to grind after hearing Hunter's story from beginning to end. And the piece de resistance is that Michael will have to prove WHY he should not be removed as Hunter's foster parent. WHOO-WEE I can't wait for that showdown to happen! I'm especially looking forward to Michael trying to explain why he feels that Hunter owes him anything when it was really Ben who pushed for the adoption and all subsequent events.

Bitch and Mitch's Hotel Blues has me ROLLING!! Entitled and spoiled doesn't even begin to describe the Idiot Brigade. Somehow I get the feeling that they thought Michael was being original in trying to put one over on the Hotel Manage. I'll be that that $3400 room service bill opened their collectively closed eyes real quick! Mansions on Fifth became the land of Money Pit for Michael and Lindsay and it serves them right! 

Then to top it all off, Zee waiting inside the house was EVERYTHING!! And knowing that Michael once again, has disregarded something important in favor of his self-centered desires was the icing on the cake since it left their dumbasses homeless! I can't deny that I wished Michael had tried to attack Zee again or that Lindsay did. I would have cheered aloud if Faal had laid his stupid ass out! Then the process server hands them the supoenas for which Charles happily witnesses their receipt of the documents. What an amazing move-in day present for him and David! But Deb's arrival was the true scene stealer!! She just knew her son wasn't going to be able to resist the temptation to indulge in one of his many addictions. I couldn't stop cackling!!

Justin recovering his memory has me in tears! The timing of it is pure perfection as well since amid all the chaos of their battle with the Bitch and Mitch, this is a major victory. Emmett fainting has me a little concerned but it could just be overexcitement for Baby and the idea/ fact that Brian actually danced at a high school prom with his beloved.

All in all a SPLENDID chapter! Thank you for my morning 'gift' as I try to deal with the fact that it's Monday and I would rather be anywhere but here in my office at work. I was definitely transported to a happy place- even if it was only for a little while.

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 45

The blunder twins never learn....they have gotten exactly what they asked for. And how wonderful is it that Justin can remember the prom! But I have a feeling that there is still more to be said there.