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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2018 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 46

I am gaining weight just reading about the food.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 46

I don't know if cooling and warming lube exist, but it seems very fun to play with!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2017 12:14 am Title: Chapter 46

What does Ted know that all the others don't?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2016 5:04 am Title: Chapter 46

Oh the trials and tribulations of Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer they really don't believe in the old saying: People In Glass Houses Shouldn't Throw Stones.

Barely two months into a new year and they have been tossed on their Asses several times, smacked down several times and still they act entitled.

I can't wait for the court case to start Phil might need to reconsider his profession after dealing with these two.

I wonder what Ted is or has done to make sure that Lindsay can't use Canada as an option to get the kids.

I like Faal's parents they are a hoot I especially liked when they insulted Lindsay, Zee with knives is scary, but then again Zee not revealing her ultimate plan for Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer has me even more scared.

Ron and Nancy putting the whiny twins up in a hotel is a ploy right?

They are going to leave them with the bill right?

Best part was Justin and Brian celebrating the fact that Justin remembers Prom and that Brian always looking out for him.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

But they don't throw stones, they throw boulders.

He's reconsidered it alright and but don't worry a WASP flies in and makes it all nice for a bit...before they start in again but it makes his life oh so much easier

Our Ted has come up with a couple of fine roadblocks for Lindsay...

Zee is slowly backing her into a corner so she has no choice but to come out blazing and make a catastrophic error in judgement, remember who Zee went to school with.

Oh yes they celebrated and then some...more happy prom to come.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 46

Love your new banner.  So great.



Author's Response:

Isn't it!  I was happy dancing when Marny did it for me!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 46

 Sounds like Ted knows something good?

Fantastic, thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

 



Author's Response:

Oh he does and oh it's good!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 46

I think my brain reacted a bit like Emmett did. While I may not have physically fainted, I think my mind just kind of drew a blank. Oh I hope it's permanent! I'd hate for him to have those lovely memories, just to have them dissapear again. Weird how the mind works. If they went away again, would he remember that had them, even for a short time? That would be awful. 

What an AMAZING surprise for Faal and Zee!! Oh I can't wait to read more about his parents. Faal's mom??? OMFG! Classic! Absolutely classic! I died laughing at what she said to Lindsey! Adn his dad!?! BAHAHA! "this is it" callign Lindsey an IT rather than "she". omg..so so very funny!

Ron and Nancy...not so sure they'e going to stand strong. I sure as hell hope so! Will he foot the bill for the hotel or will he have her pay for it? And honestly, how bloody stupid is ron for giving Linsdey Phil's home address!?!! I mean holy shitballs! Phil is gonna make him pay for that one that's for sure. 

Definitely looking forward to the judges getting all this shit dealt with. Neither one of them is going to put up with any of L&M's crap. Yet 1 more thing to anxiously look forward to. (insert evil laugh here)

I never even considered Lindsey takingthe kids to toronto. Mind you, it seems she hasn't either. It's not like she'd be able to look after either one of them, nor would Michael if he tagged along. He couldn't legally anyway. what does Ted know??? 

I will await the next update with bated breath!

Cheers

Elaine



Author's Response:

No more prom angst, I promise, there is prom memory to come but it's all good...s

Ah yes Hugo and Martha [his parents] are very, very protective of their daughter and Lindsay of course makes an error in underestimating that...

Yeah the run up to New York weekend is going to be eventful to say the least...Ted is a very clever man...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 46

Oh Ted... what have you done that will make everyone happy... well EXCEPT for the idiot twins LOL



Author's Response:

Ooh that will be telling...you'll have to read on to find out...please!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 46

Brian and Justin - It's so nice that Justin has his memories back and will be painting them while he can.  Hopefully he gets to keep them.

Zee and Faal -Zee had a lot of fun telling L&M they no longer have anyplace to stay.  Charles and David brought a little surprise for them.  Faal's mom and dad, from South Africa?  Why did Faal's mother offer to give money to L&M?   So everyone's at Britin and explainations all around about Charles and David moving into Shadyside.  I take it that Hank is spending time with Josh, Carrie and Sarah?  As always the food is out of this world.

Lindsay and Michael -  I laughed so hard at learning that Michael has been spending his money buying back his own stuff.  Serves him right.  For now they are homeless, though Ron seems to have offered to pay for their stay at the Marriot?  Not a good move. Then he compounds his error by giving them Phil's home address. Then they actually thought they could have lunch at Britin?

Phil -  Poor guy, at the moment he's stuck with dumb and dumber as clients, but once they pay their sizable bill he's out of there.  No more Peterson's to demand his services. 

Mel, Ben, Steve and Hunter - Ben and Steve are doing well and even Eli realizes it.  Then Steve brings up the fact that Lindsay could take the kids to Canada since she has a house there.  A scary thought.

Ted - He only has one mention in this chapter but a big one as he tells Mel she has nothing to worry about.  He's the man.



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin: There is more prom things to come...nothing bad but final closure

Zee and Faal: She was being sarcastic and leading up to the 'fucks I give' punchline and whoops that should've said Treehouse not Britin.  

Lindsay and Michael: oh yes they shouldn't have done that...suggesting the hotel or giving the address, that is going to bite them big...and again that was supposed to be Treehouse not Britin...might actually need to get a Beta

Phil: he has a vigilante from an unexpected quarter

Mel, Ben, Steve and Hunter: worry thou not because...

Ted: is more than the man, he's a vengeful accountant who feels he's paid his dues and should not be looked sideways at...!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2016 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 46

Well one thing can be said for Bitch and Mitch is that they do not give up... The arrival of Hugo and Martha was absolutely hiliarious.

Martha: 'Faal let me look...'

Lindz: 'Look?'

Martha: 'For the fucks I give to a meddling trollop!'

Hugo: 'Wait- is this it? You never even had a chance."

I couldn't stop laughing imagining the incredulity and embarrassment on Lindsay's face! Like Hugo, it is oh so tempting to want to smack the fire out of Lindz and her entitled attitude makes me wish I could 'Flat Stanley' myself all over again! Ron really needs to take a stick to her and paddle her ass but good. Lindsay has definitely reached the stage where Corporeal Punishment would be most effective.

As for that little Whiny Fuckturd Michael.... 'I'm through being pushed around!' MITCH PLEASE!! He is like that vicious mosquito that you have to use a swatter, shoe, can of Bitch be Gone and a flame thrower to get rid of. Unfortunately two ass whippings from Zee and Jenny didn't help him learn to stay in a child's place- even if he is a grown one. I have a feeling that if he keeps up, the men are going to hold a class called 'How to Get Away With Whipping Michael's Ass and Where to Hide the Body 101.' I think Phil would probably be first in line to take it. I really wish they would kidnap Lindsay and Michael then seal them up within the house in Canada. Perhaps then they can whine each other to death and everyone else will finally have some peace.

As for Justin..... LAWD Dom Justin is HOTTTTTT!!!! He sure manhandled Brian in a way both of them will never forget. And yet the subject matter made it poignant and about so much more than the sex itself. Justin finally knowing that Brian was there every night and that Brian loved him even then makes all that they have endured and will continue to go through worth every heartache and tear shed; every smile and every argument had a purpose and throughout it all, they have made it. Even their brief separation through Lindsay's machinations served to make them solid. Definitely an emotional read as well has a HOT one!

Meriam!!!! I can't wait for her to put her gavel in Michael's ass- metaphorically of course LOL And I suspect that Edward is going to have the same BIG FUN giving Lindsay what she truly deserves. I wonder if Phil will really try to fight the subpeoenas? Based on his anger and their blatant disregard for his private time, I suspect that he won't. No, I think his goal in this has officially changed from raking in the dough to getting rid of the human vermin as quickly as possible. If it hasn't, I think his wife will make sure it does! 

Another SPLENDID chapter, Nicole. I can't wait for the next one!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

I loved writing that bit about Faal's parents...and you are bang on about Michael...the mosquito and the not learning from his ass kicking...he forgets that he's messing wtih Hunter who is Matt's boyfriend and he is very protective of his boys...

Dom Justin had to come out to play for that...it grounded them and bought them some closure a bit, but there's more prom things to come...all good and nice, no more angst.

Seriously!  I started chapter 47 BEFORE I read this re the wife...there is a bit of a Phil surprise to come.

Thanks for your continued support and kind reviews

Happy reading and big hugs

Nicole

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