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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2017 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 48

Hunter can thank Jenny for being  Markus and daring speaking the truth.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:43 am Title: Chapter 48

The first step is done. Can they keep Michael locked up forever? Just a thought. 

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2016 6:33 am Title: Chapter 48

Wonderful, amazing chapter. I love this story. Each chapter is a roller coaster, I'm either laughing, crying or wanting to beat the fuck out of the bitch and the weasel.

Lorie



Author's Response:

My mission is complete, but wait there's more...

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2016 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 48

BUUUUUURRRRRRNNNNN!!!! Lol



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As the greatness that is Jenny would say!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2016 2:15 am Title: Chapter 48

Holy GUACAMOLE!! Michael  and  Lindsay are such a waste of skin this court proceeding was such a farce that I understand why Phil did what he did.

No child should ever look at their parents with contempt and loathing , our parents  are supposed to be our heroes, protectors, loyal cheering section and who we model ourselves on.

Michael and Lindsay could never be that due to their selfish and grandiose  behavior, they see their children as pawns to get them closer to Brian  and keep them in The Inner Circle, Michael and Lindsay put more value on their social standing than their kids.

Phil had to put a stop to the madness and give Hunter the peace he deserved, how could Phil look his daughter in the eye knowing he continued to fight for a moron who doesn't love anyone but himself.

If he gets fined he is willing to take the hit as long as it gets him away from Michael and Lindsay!

Ron and Nancy are not going to enjoy the fallout from their machinations Millicent is gunning for them now.

Lindsay should have really paid attention to Jenny on the stand because they still have the emancipation hearing and Jenny was just getting started.

Lindsay you are out in the cold with Michael and the world is about to get a lot colder The Wasp Gangstas are coming lol

Brilliant Chapter, Just Loved It!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, have thoroughly enjoyed writing the slap downs, there's more to come

MissMerlot

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2016 1:50 am Title: Chapter 48

best judge ever...

I don't know how Phil held it together that long.  So happy for Hunter, and almost time for Lindsay to get her due too.

The moron mix are just completely and utterly delusional and clueless... no help for them!

 



Author's Response:

Phil is right on the cusp...

MissMerlot

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2016 12:23 am Title: Chapter 48

What an emotional update, Fantastic!

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn



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You're welcome once more, so happy you're sticking with it.

Nicole

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2016 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 48

YIHAA!!! Mickey out for the count!! Somebody should take that little mizer of a man and chop of those dreades arms of his. I think that was the straw that made the judge snap and have him removed for contempt. Those crossed arms! Such a pity he didn't stomp his feet right there and then. For I think she would have him dragged out of her courtroom. That man is too stupid to be true. 

As for Lindsey? Hypocrital coniving little cow. She can threaten who ever she wants. Her stinger has been removed. She's no longer a wasp but a gnat in everybody's ear. I'd love to get a newspaper and squash her. But wait a minute! Brian just did that didn't he by telling her he bought the gallery as a wedding present for Justin. Ooh that must have stung our stingerless wasp.

Bravo to Jenny who has become a very grown up teenager. She has more wits in her little finger than her father has in all of his stupid head. The former wasp outclassed by a teenager. Respect to Jenny.

Thank you for another wonderful update that birightened a dull day and rook my mind of the pain right now.

I love you to pieces.

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

You're welcome my darling friend.

Love you too 

Nicole xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2016 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 48

First I have to say that I feel so sorry for Phil, but I think the Judge does as well. 

Things Michael did wrong: 1) didn't read what his lawyer gave him.  2)got on the stand.  3) opened his mouth.  4) allowed Lindsay to be his witness.

If necessary Brian would have gotten on the stand to rebuttal everything Mikey said.

You did a great job on this hearing.



Author's Response:

Thank you I was a bit worried about writing that.

Poor Phil has to suffer some more I'm afraid.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2016 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 48

I'm thinking between Brian (and Kinnetik), Zee & Faal and now Milliscent, they're going to own a good part of the Pitts! Well, at least the good parts. Lol. Ron and Nancy, while this is there intention, may not be as fortunate.

 

I'm wondering if seeing Hunter about the hearing was really Lindsey's motivation for going by the Brownstone? She mentioned “among other things” Hmmm. Interesting. Who knows with her. At least she once again got her ass handed to her. I never seem to tire of reading those parts. ;)   " “Martha darling, can you go ask Matt where he keeps the shovels there’s a shit on the doorstep.”  Oh that was classic!!  I'm curious as to what Lindsey thinks Zee has to lose? Where on earth does she come up with that? It’s beyond me.......She still seems to think she has "power" of some sort. uh huh....

Michael was a joke! Nonsense and utter bullshit right from the start. Twisting and manipulating everything  to serve his own purpose. Outright lying no less! He tried too often to sway from the truth, only for Ivan to bring back around again. He still continues to call Brian “my best friend”. Even in court. He’s just digging himself in deeper and deeper. I admit to almost cheering when Michael was sent to the cells!

Lindsey was no better. Try as she might to do or say what she could to “help” Michael, she too had everything turned around on her; Was forced to acknowledge some truths. And still claiming a type of ownership of Brian. That Michael is one of her and Brian’s best friends…

Jenny as a bigger pair that Michael will ever have! Between admitting to speaking out in court, and being a witness. She’s amazing! What a terrific young woman she’s growing into. Now if only Michael and Lindsey could’ve appreciated her. They’ll soon learn not to take everything and everyone for granted. They’re going to lose a lot, and have done too.

Another cheer for Phil! What a stand up guy. Yes…he’s putting his name on the line, risking a possible fine etc., but so well worth it. Now just the Emancipation left to deal with and he can permanently kick these 2 to the curb. Their legal bill is going to be interesting! If I remember correctly, neither ron nor Nancy will be contributing to those fees. Hehehe.

And Lindsey finally hears the truth about Bloom Gallery. And told by Brian himself no less. She can’t turn that around now can she? ;)

Yet another fantastically brilliant chapter. Thoroughly enjoyed every word.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Elaine, they do try but they fail and do so spectacularly.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2016 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 48

WOW! That was a slap down. Now if someone could just hit Lenz with a car all would be right.



Author's Response:

Tempting as that might have been, it's preferable to have her alive to suffer 

Hope you stay with me...more fun to come, well not for them of course!

MissMerlot

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