Date: Aug 13, 2017 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 54
Ah ah ah, Michael as a janitor and Lindsey as manager! I bet the garbage will pile up and the tenants will have some difficulties to get them working.
Date: Jan 25, 2017 10:32 am Title: Chapter 54
I really do hope they don't get anywhere with their appeals.
Date: Dec 29, 2016 4:51 am Title: Chapter 54
Just curious...have you abandoned this story? I hope not...it was always my happy place at the end of the day.
Author's Response:
Nope, just had a bit of a break...for Christmas...C55 is being posted in about 10 minutes xx
Date: Dec 27, 2016 4:34 am Title: Chapter 54
pretty decent story, your OCs are fleshed out.
1 nitpick, plantains are not bananas. (jamaican, very much know what i'm talking about as we grow them both here)
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Re plantains, my mum's Jamaican so I know that but Michael and Lindsay are idiots so I had to get it down to their base level or they would've kept up with questions. Off to torment them some more....heehee
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2016 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 54
It's a shame that Ron isn't going to be able to curb L&M. I can't believe Ron is going to finance their appeals. Will he have any money left once he does that? Now I'm not sure exactly what Ted, Mel and Luc have planned or for whom. Is it Ron or Michael? Planning the wedding breakfast won't be easy with Justin trying to find out what's on the menu.
Date: Dec 26, 2016 2:50 am Title: Chapter 54
I know it is a chapter to set things up... but nothing horrible happened to the whiney wonders.. I almost felt disappointed.
but knowing the NYC weekend is only a week away is exciting!
Date: Dec 26, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 54
I really love this story!
One bit of constructive crit? Martine's name seems to have changed to Miranda in some chapters.
also, as an observation, I can tell you are not an American writer as you use "whilst" instead of "while" along with other non American terms. It by no means affects the storytelling as a whole but it does sometimes detract as I had to figure out what you meant.
But I like it and look forward to an update!
Date: Dec 26, 2016 12:00 am Title: Chapter 54
Can't believe Ronald is still helping Linz and Mikey, thought he was against them, or did I miss read?
Still Fantastic as always.!
Happy Holidays to you and yours, may your days be filled with peace, love and happiness!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 25, 2016 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 54
I really love this story!
One bit of constructive crit? Martine's name seems to have changed to Miranda in some chapters.
also, as an observation, I can tell you are not an American writer as you use "whilst" instead of "while" along with other non American terms. It by no means affects the storytelling as a whole but it does sometimes detract as I had to figure out what you meant.
But I like it and look forward to an update!
Date: Dec 24, 2016 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 54
Love Lindsey father taking no shit I've been enjoying your fics just want to say merry Christmas
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 54
Okay so Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer have now been joined by Mother FrostBitch (Yes You Can Use It lol ;)) hope Ron finds a lawyer before Millicent and Zee come after them?
Then again with New York coming up aswell as the party Melody is planning for her husband's birthday perhaps he should just continue his plan and just watch what happens?
Is Mother FrostBitch coming to the party with Stuck-up Heifer and hopefully Captain Asshat?
It seems the Sperm Donor Zee is unfortunately related to is about to get his comeuppance too :)
The Next Few Chapters Should Be Quite Epic :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2016 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 54
Ron appears to be backpeddling. But soon he'll learn that trying to help is going to hurt. NY is coming soon and sould be fun. Will it be L&Mless? Loving this.
Date: Dec 24, 2016 10:54 am Title: Chapter 54
Ah yes....this just keeps getting better.