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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2017 11:22 am Title: Chapter 58

Beautiful chapter!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 58

This was the most perfect wedding. And now I'm hungry. Great job. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 58

So a few chapters to catch up on for reviews. Sorry. Holy shit though girl........these have been absoluetly brilliant!

SO so so glad that Ronald really and truly finally grew a pair! I was worried there that he was going to let things go and fall back into his old ways, especially with Nancy in his ear. but nope...he truly set it all up properly! Excellent!! and Nancy was put in her place as well. I think she's finally woken up as well. Took long enough. I guess she really realized that hubs was serious. that he'd drop her like a hot potatoe of she didn't fall in line. I'm curious as to what he wrote in teh letter to Nancy when handing her those papers. either way, I'm glad they are both seeing Lindsey for what she truly is. AND that Zee has the full go ahead from both of them to do as she sees fit. Oh man....Lindsey thinks she has it bad now?!?! Oh I can't wait!! What makes it even more exciting is that she's completely unaware! she's so bloody entitled that she doesnt' see her own inevitable demise. She and Michael both! adn erally...where the hell does Michale get off? He questioned Ronald's contract? He wondered why he didn't get snything from Ronald? SERIOUSLY?!?!? I mean WTF?! Oh I really really can't wait until those two are permanantly stomped on and competely flattened!

OMG!! That whole plan with undermining Luther??! I never once saw that coming! Frigging brilliant! My jaw dropped a mile when I read that! and the outcome..well, satisfaction doesn't even come close to what I was feeling. I wanted to be there. To watch every nuance and every reaction up close. Wanted to hear every word and every word. I wanted to experience Luther's fury and his demise. And naturally everyone's celebration. What a wonderful family they all are. How incredibly supportive. 

The wedding was lovely! So sweet and heartfelt. O loved justin's touch of anxiety there and it was Brian who was calm. Just goes to show how far the man has come. He sooooo wanted this! The fact that other got engaged and married and remarried. What a wonderful and memorable weekend for them all.

Now....for what's ahead. OMG...I simply can't wait. I'm guessing (and admit kind of hoping) that since L&M didn't make it to the wedding (thank goodness) that they will still arrive at the Reichman party? Cause that coupld be potentially HILARIOUS!! What will it take for them to finally get it? To really get that NOBODY wants them around, that they aren't entitled to ANYTHING. That they need to stop expecting everything to be handed to them and to maybe...oh I don't know...work for it? the fact t hat they even hired people to act in their place at the apartments is just nuts and am wondering what's going to happen once Ronald finds out?

Cheers,

Elaine

 



Author's Response:

I think you might like C60 a bit...

Nicole xx

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 58

absolutely beautiful... just beautiful!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 58

The way they keep making friends it's no wonder the guest list for the family has grown.  Lindsay seems to be making friends with her employees- NOT.  I'm sure that poor Roberta is wishing she'd never taken the job.  I'm just wondering why Lindsay is planning on going to New York?  Luther Stark got his comupance.  Nobody in his family wants him around it seems.  The wedding went really well.  The food had me salivating.  And there was no one around to try and stop the wedding.  Loved that Reverend Tom was there to officiate.  Now we have more weddings to plan since Ben and Steve have decided to tie the knot, not to mention Zee and Faal renewing theirs.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 58

You did warn us about the tears.  This was truly amazing.  Love the street light idea. 



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Thank you, typing and snivelling was not fun but I got there, glad I did them justice

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 58

Beautiful and filled with love.

Steve and Ben marrying and Zee and Faal renewing vows.

Fantastic , thanks for sharing.

JoAnn

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh yes, that was great to write.  Two more chapters to go and I might be saying goodbye to this verse

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 3:30 am Title: Chapter 58

This chapter is the most beautiful one of all,particularly on the wedding part..Great job MissMerlot,thanks for sharing this to us😙😙😙

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Thank you.  Hope you enjoy the rest, two more to go.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 2:04 am Title: Chapter 58

Damnit you made me cry...but they are happy tears.



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I'm so pleased.  Now prepare to cheer for the Stark smackdown

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 58

Luther got his Ass handed to him before he was kicked out of the board room if he was smart he would walk away but I don't think that man was ever smart.

The Wedding was Beautiful!!

I got teary-eyed when Justin freaked out and Brian came to help him, their vows were so beautiful and the lamppost being there so everyone could sign it and it will be shipped to Britin is extraordinary!

The food sounded delicious and I wish I was there in person lol

Good for Steve for not wasting time and wanting to put a ring on Ben's finger I am surprised he waited as long as he did lol

Faal and Zee are going to renew their wedding vows too

All is almost right in the world, just got to finish dispensing some justice to Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer then all will be Serene. ;)

This Chapter Was Heavenly and the perfect start to 2017 :)



Author's Response:

Glad I did them proud.  And yes justice Stark style is coming...

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