Date: Sep 05, 2022 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 30
This was a great story from start to finish!! I loved it!!
Date: Apr 17, 2021 8:53 am Title: Chapter 30
did read it again
Date: Jul 16, 2019 5:36 am Title: Chapter 30
Great story......
Date: Jan 31, 2019 11:57 am Title: Chapter 30
love it, just great
Date: Aug 27, 2018 3:53 am Title: Chapter 30
I really liked this. I never cared for Lyndsey or Michael. so I like a good story when they get what they deserve. Thanks for writing and sharing what you are very good at.
Date: Jul 14, 2018 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 30
I loved it! Sweet, father Brian who doesn’t hide his feelings is awesome. It was fun and I couldn’t stop reading. Good job!
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2018 8:29 am Title: Chapter 30
I read this story with great pleasure. I like Justin brave and independent who does not fall for the crap of Michael Lindsay and Debbie. Great story. i love all your storie waiting for the last ones to be complete impatienly.
Date: Jul 04, 2018 12:13 am Title: Chapter 30
Wow wow wow I have just read all the chapters till this one, sorry I didn’t comment on them I was so engaged with each chapter. I like the way you have woven the original script into the beginning and made a totally AU story. I love any story that has Deb, Michael, Lindsay as the villains lol.
i look forwRd to the next chapters
Date: Jul 01, 2018 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 30
Great story. Thanks for competing it and for updating "Life" and "He's Mine".
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2018 12:27 am Title: Chapter 30
I really enjoyed this story- great final chapter! I can just imagine Michael, Lindsay and Debbie behaving exactly in the way you described in court- I can literally picture their faces during the whole chapter- Perfect :)
Date: Dec 17, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 30
Just finished this great story and waited until the end to review. It was wonderful. I really love all of your writing. It makes me laugh, it makes me cry and just plain makes me feel good. Happy Holidays to you.
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2017 10:50 am Title: Chapter 30
This story was so much fun to read- a definite favourite! I loved the way you told the story and I never wanted it to end. I really liked the part where Brian told Max to step back and Max realised he shouldn’t try to run Justin’s life, you got the balance of their friendship just right.
Date: Feb 28, 2017 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 30
That was a very good, emotional and funny ride!
Thank you for sharing all your stories!
Date: Jan 07, 2017 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 30
I don't even want to know how pissed Michael will be when he gets out. Thank you for writing this story. I really liked it.
Date: Dec 20, 2016 5:54 am Title: Chapter 30
Perfect ending. But Lindsay should have gotten more time... and Deb was such a bitch!
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2016 3:03 am Title: Chapter 30
Wow! I'm so impressed. Finishing your 10th story already. Way to go. Thanks for writing all these wonderful stories for us! TAG
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 30
BAHAHAHAHA! Oh man...what a great ending! Was in fits of giggles at times I must admit. Michael is such a fool. Imagine going against the advise of your attourney. And Deb....smacking an officer of teh court! Those 2 really take the cake. Lindsey...well...she sure was able to manipulate the system to her advantage. She got off relatively easy really.
Wonder how Michae copes i prison for 10 years. LOL!! Deb has no house now. No real job to speak of...what happens to her now? Do we care?? LOL And Lindsey. Hmmmm. Probably find some rich old fart to look after her.
Am so glad you gave us a peek into the legal remifications of the stuped trio. Very enjoyable I must say!!
Loved this story!! Enjoyed every update!
Congrats on ending yet another excellent story!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 07, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 30
I love this story very much.
Michael is the biggest stupid man on earth.
Is it going to be a sequel?
Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 30
LMFAO!!! Mikey is so smart he talked himself into a nice long vacation. He lied and assumed that no one could disprove him. But ultimately, when you hit someone in the head with a pipe, isn't it always assault, can you explain it away? Well, Mikey's explanation didn't work.
Deb was lucky she didn't get more time for violating parole for her contempt of court. Lindsay, well she'll be miserable because her parents will see to it.
All the babies are born and happiness rules. The family has a Jewel and a Gem!
Look, I love your writing but something essential is missing, we need..... a Christmas story with all the kiddies... Oh, please, please just a one shot of Christmas with the Kinney.
Thanks so much for making me laugh, sniffle, hope, and simply have good time while this kooky election was taking place!!!
Date: Nov 07, 2016 3:55 am Title: Chapter 30
OMG!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!!! Oh God my sides HURT so much right now from laughing! The Three Stooges couldn't have effed this up more than the Truthless Trio! Deb was lucky all she lost was her house. She should have gotten time for an accessory after the fact since she also knew that Michael (OMG there I go again Laughing my Ass OFF for real!) committed the crime. At the very least she should have gotten time for assaulting 2 officers especially dealing with NYPD. The probably took pity on her thinking she's suffered enough for giving birth the the trainwreck called Michael Charles Novotny (oh damn.....*again LMAO!).
As for Lyin'-lips Lindsay, I also think she should have gotten more than a year but I can live with her sentence a little bit. She'll be a known felon which is definitely a punishment since she won't be able to go back to live with mommy and daddy in the WASP nest. Lindsay as a social pariah is definitely justice.
As for that Whiny Witless Wonder called Michael.....OMGGGGGGG!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!! His lawyer should sue him...hell EVERYONE including the judge should sue him for loss of brain cells and a severe drop in their IQ for having to listen to him. I feel sorry for the prisoners and corrections officers that will have to listen to that schmuck for the next 10 years. They should just throw his ass in solitary confinement and forget he's there..SMH!
Great finish to a GREAT STORY Star!
WRITE ON,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:46 am Title: Chapter 30
I don't know whether to laugh, shake my head or run screaming from all the stupidity of one Michael Novotny, I feel for his attorney who is probably wondering what he had done in a previous life to get such a moronic client.
Of course Deb and Lindsay did not help the situation any they should have gotten the same sentence as Michael.
I wonder what is going to happen to Deb and Lindsay while Michael sits in jail, Lindsay has mommy and daddy but Deb has no one, I wouldn't be surprised if she tries to get Brian or Justin to take care of her???
Thanks for that glimpse at what happened to all three of them it was terrifyingly funny lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for letting us see what happened to Mikey, Lindsay and Deb. Mikey seems to have a change of pleading insanity, because you can't plead stupidity. Deb's problem was she couldn't keep her big mouth shut. She's lucky she only lost her house. Lindsay got away with a lot of this. The justice system is not always fair it seems to me.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 30
Now that's the Michael we know and love, an idiot from beginning to end. I wonder if his attorney can sue him for effecting his closure rate with his stupidity.
Thank you for letting us get a glimpse of their life after Jay.
Again, I loved this story.