Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 30
BAHAHAHAHA! Oh man...what a great ending! Was in fits of giggles at times I must admit. Michael is such a fool. Imagine going against the advise of your attourney. And Deb....smacking an officer of teh court! Those 2 really take the cake. Lindsey...well...she sure was able to manipulate the system to her advantage. She got off relatively easy really.
Wonder how Michae copes i prison for 10 years. LOL!! Deb has no house now. No real job to speak of...what happens to her now? Do we care?? LOL And Lindsey. Hmmmm. Probably find some rich old fart to look after her.
Am so glad you gave us a peek into the legal remifications of the stuped trio. Very enjoyable I must say!!
Loved this story!! Enjoyed every update!
Congrats on ending yet another excellent story!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 07, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 30
I love this story very much.
Michael is the biggest stupid man on earth.
Is it going to be a sequel?
Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 30
LMFAO!!! Mikey is so smart he talked himself into a nice long vacation. He lied and assumed that no one could disprove him. But ultimately, when you hit someone in the head with a pipe, isn't it always assault, can you explain it away? Well, Mikey's explanation didn't work.
Deb was lucky she didn't get more time for violating parole for her contempt of court. Lindsay, well she'll be miserable because her parents will see to it.
All the babies are born and happiness rules. The family has a Jewel and a Gem!
Look, I love your writing but something essential is missing, we need..... a Christmas story with all the kiddies... Oh, please, please just a one shot of Christmas with the Kinney.
Thanks so much for making me laugh, sniffle, hope, and simply have good time while this kooky election was taking place!!!
Date: Nov 07, 2016 3:55 am Title: Chapter 30
OMG!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!!! Oh God my sides HURT so much right now from laughing! The Three Stooges couldn't have effed this up more than the Truthless Trio! Deb was lucky all she lost was her house. She should have gotten time for an accessory after the fact since she also knew that Michael (OMG there I go again Laughing my Ass OFF for real!) committed the crime. At the very least she should have gotten time for assaulting 2 officers especially dealing with NYPD. The probably took pity on her thinking she's suffered enough for giving birth the the trainwreck called Michael Charles Novotny (oh damn.....*again LMAO!).
As for Lyin'-lips Lindsay, I also think she should have gotten more than a year but I can live with her sentence a little bit. She'll be a known felon which is definitely a punishment since she won't be able to go back to live with mommy and daddy in the WASP nest. Lindsay as a social pariah is definitely justice.
As for that Whiny Witless Wonder called Michael.....OMGGGGGGG!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!! His lawyer should sue him...hell EVERYONE including the judge should sue him for loss of brain cells and a severe drop in their IQ for having to listen to him. I feel sorry for the prisoners and corrections officers that will have to listen to that schmuck for the next 10 years. They should just throw his ass in solitary confinement and forget he's there..SMH!
Great finish to a GREAT STORY Star!
WRITE ON,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:46 am Title: Chapter 30
I don't know whether to laugh, shake my head or run screaming from all the stupidity of one Michael Novotny, I feel for his attorney who is probably wondering what he had done in a previous life to get such a moronic client.
Of course Deb and Lindsay did not help the situation any they should have gotten the same sentence as Michael.
I wonder what is going to happen to Deb and Lindsay while Michael sits in jail, Lindsay has mommy and daddy but Deb has no one, I wouldn't be surprised if she tries to get Brian or Justin to take care of her???
Thanks for that glimpse at what happened to all three of them it was terrifyingly funny lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:42 am Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for letting us see what happened to Mikey, Lindsay and Deb. Mikey seems to have a change of pleading insanity, because you can't plead stupidity. Deb's problem was she couldn't keep her big mouth shut. She's lucky she only lost her house. Lindsay got away with a lot of this. The justice system is not always fair it seems to me.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 30
Now that's the Michael we know and love, an idiot from beginning to end. I wonder if his attorney can sue him for effecting his closure rate with his stupidity.
Thank you for letting us get a glimpse of their life after Jay.
Again, I loved this story.
Date: Nov 06, 2016 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
You Go Baby! Strike one!
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 06, 2016 2:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sweet! I hope his memory comes back reigniting all the passion and love of the past.
Later ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2016 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this fic! I can't wait until Brian and Justin are reunited. I can just see the two of them raising their kids, and all that will ensue...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 05, 2016 6:09 am Title: Chapter 29
HAPPY family scene😃
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 5:11 am Title: Chapter 29
Wonderful chapter and everyone that means anything got to go to Paris! Brian even got to go to Italy.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 7:45 am Title: Chapter 28
Thank you for another chapter but it's not enough I want more more mor plz...... No seriously loved it.....
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:14 am Title: Chapter 28
Baby carrots, LOL! Awe a Gem(ma) to go with their Jewel.
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 1:48 am Title: Chapter 28
Justin is so - I don't know what. If my husband had offered to help while I was pregnant I'd of been in dog's heaven. They have another girl in the family and this one's a Gem which matches Jewel. Good thing Max and Emmett were around.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 1:38 am Title: Chapter 28
A new baby girl! Sweet Gemma...I have to ask...how do men give birth without a vagina?! lol
Date: Nov 03, 2016 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 27
Omg I need more plz plz plz give me more..... Fab story
Date: Nov 03, 2016 1:08 pm Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter! Max and Em have Anna. I laughed aloud with Max's thoughts during childbirth. I think all of us have had those same violent thoughts during that moment in time!
Now Brian and Justin are having their own child together. The kids asking for another baby (or a babydoll) was adorable. I could understand both Brian and Justin's frustrations with each other but I'm glad they worked it out. I'm also happy that Mel has been sticking around and is redesigning her life the way she wants to live it. How long will Michael be in jail? I'm sorry that we didn't see the trial BUT I can live with that since he's in jail.
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 03, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 27
How sweet... it's a girl!!! Ok, seriously, eating before the hospital is so essential lol. Hours of labor on an empty stomach sucks.
Justin and the kids were so cute! Now we get another baby (and a baby doll).
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2016 4:06 am Title: Chapter 27
Max and Emmett have a baby girl. That Jewel is something else thinking she could take the baby home. Justin's going to be a father again and isn't it interesting that Mel is the one to get through to him that it's Brian's first time going through this. What did happen to Mikey? Did I miss the trial? Love this story.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in awe of Michael's stupidity! I mean Holy shitballs!!!!!!!!!!! WOW. All 3 caught up in their own machinations. No wonder there were so many hits on youtube for that video. LMFAO! Priceless. thankfully all 3 went down. Shame that Lindsey got a reduced sentence, but that's the way of things in the legal world and at least it got Michael nailed to the wall!
both weddings were lovely and thrilled that they finally happened!!
Had to laugh at the end part with Eric. serves the little asshole right. Emmett is one ballsy character! Love him! Eric was definitely shown teh door adn in public even! well desrved.
Brilliant chapter! Everything seems to be ending up exactly the way it should and looks like you're tying everythign up in a pretty red bow.
cheers
Elaine
Date: Nov 02, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, I wanted see Mikey arrested in his footie Captain Astro pjs... Lol
Max's inscription was so perfect. I love Emmett and I love stories that find him love and happiness. I wonder if they'll live in NYC or the Pitts?
I hope Mikey writes to Brian cuz they only let them use small pencils and the writing would totally look childlike... Lol I'm so cruel to the ding bat.
Debbie should have gotten the deal and Lindsay hard labor.
I guess the next wedding is our boys. Awwwww.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 26
Yay!! More Max and Emmett. I see the end is near and I cannot decide if I can't wait for the end or don't want this ride to end. This has been a major bright spot, for me😃.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 3:09 am Title: Chapter 26
It's official. The Kinney Clan is one big family. And there's a new Dick going around with delusions. Loving this.