Date: Nov 01, 2016 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great Chapter!! The Dynamic Dummies are all getting their just desserts. Even with Lindsay's reduced sentence, she should still get at least 10 years since Captain Malfunction will be facing at least two charges of his own. Not only did she blackmail Michael and Deb but she is also an accessory to attempted murder; that should count for quite a bit of hard time.
As for Debbie: Throw the book at her!! What kind of... LAWD HAM TURKEY I don't even have words for her brand of thievery and selfishness! How dare she ruin her brothers good name posthumously?! She deserves every single bit of jail time AND a special spot in the ninth circle of Hell for what she's done.
Michael....Well there will be no getting out of or away from any of his misdeeds this time! LMAOOOOOooooo By his own mealy mouth admission, he is guilty of it all. He will defintely be somebody's MITCH in prison- not that I think he'll last that long. Between that ever-present whine and his attitude of entitlement, someone is bound to stuff him in a dryer, turn it on high and put Captain Malfunction out of everyone's misery.
Max and Em's wedding made me tear up. It was so sweet. Justin's reflections after the wedding was over was also very touching. There's a new dynamic to Max and Jay's friendship now and I don't think either of them are sorry there is. They have found family at long last!!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2016 4:59 am Title: Chapter 25
I'm always pleased when I see another chapter. This one gave the evil threesome a look at jailtime. How funny that Mikey posted it all on You tube without watching it first. Lindsay is getting off much to easy. Max and Emmett are finally joined in matrimony. Hallaluhah!
Date: Oct 31, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omg! that was bloody HILARIOUS! Oh I'm so glad Max and Emmett saw that! No wonder there are so many hits on that video! WOW! I absolutely cannot wait to see the fall out from all of this! Hooray for Youtube!! BWAHAHAHAH! Oh I can't stop laughng over it all.
All three are going to go down! I thought the snub at the gallery was epic. This has it beat by a country mile!
I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter in this!
Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 31, 2016 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 24
OMG what incredibly awful stupid evil people! So glad evil will out and loving that it's on video!!! That's of course our authoress strutting her stuff.
Max and Emmett are too cute!
Cant wait to see what else is in store.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2016 3:18 am Title: Chapter 24
Taken down by their inability to keep a secret and YouTube thank goodness Michael started his blog, they just wrapped themselves in a bow for the police.
What A Bunch of Dumbasses!!
Date: Oct 31, 2016 2:57 am Title: Chapter 24
Brilliant plan to use YouTube!!! Now there is videotaped evidence against the co-conspirarors! Deb can't get Michael out of hot water; Hell she can't get herself out of it either because of her admission to identity theft! Then there is Lindsay's admission of knowing where a missing person was and knowing that a crime was committed and how she did nothing. OMG! Max is right that they all shot themselves in the foot... and the ASS too! LMAO!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2016 2:22 am Title: Chapter 24
Max is not going to be bored for much longer. Those Utube videos are gonna come back to haunt the evil threesome.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 23
Fantastic. You made a very special partner for Em.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 30, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 23
Wow! Yay Max & Emmett are pregnant! 'Get to the point Kinney before I die' lmao
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 23
Lindsay is so pathetic She thought she had the upper hand and found out she has nothing, I can understand Justin wanting to follow her outside and tell her off but it is better to get let her think she still has some allies in Pittsburgh.
Mel has finally started growing her back bone and has truly seen Lindsay for the worthless cow she is.
Max finally got to set the right mood to properly propose to Emmett and now with a baby on the way and two weddings to plan they really need to get rid of The Idiot Brigade once and for all.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Oct 30, 2016 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 23
My heart is weeping with joy right now!!! Oh Max and Em are not only getting married but having a baby! YAY!!! That child is going to be FABULOUS <in my Em voice> So happy that Em is finding happiness at last!
Mel's public diss of Bitchzilla was PERFECT! It's about time she started standing up for herself again.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 23
I can't get over Lindsay. "Mel, it’s so good to see you. Do you think we could talk? I want us to be able to be friends again.” She's got some nerve. Max and Emmett are going to be parents. A dream come true.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I was hoping someone smack Lindsay before they let her leave the gallery..but for now i'm so excited about the wedding but let Maxie & Emmett do the wedding first so no one can steal the attention from our boys when it's their time to walk the isle...Please another baby soon for them...ðŸ™ðŸ™ðŸ™
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:11 am Title: Chapter 23
Man, I wanted Justin to go after her and tell her "Look what all your lies and sceeming got me... Brian and this ring you insignificant poser!" Or maybe hit her with a cream pie (chocolate silk pie is too difficult to make and too yummy to waste on her). Sam did a good job at embarrassing her. All in all, I still want jail time... Lol
Max and Emmett are so cute. I love Brian's gift. And Emmetts reaction... awwwww!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:58 am Title: Chapter 22
That was funny how Sam let Lindsay know that she has been replaced and that she will never again have access to The Art World, all her enemies got a good show and the story is going to spread like wildfire, by morning she won't have a leg to stand on and her name will be the butt of many jokes. (Mommy won't be able to save Lindsay's reputation due to the fact that she will be to busy trying to save her own)
Sam gave the press just the sort of gossip they will be salivating over for awhile they are going to be digging into her past quite thoroughly, sex sales and the fact that Lindsay/Liddy was whoring herself out should make for some interesting fodder lol.
Good that all three idiots will be together should make it easier for them all to be arrested.
Brian handled Lindsay with just enough decorum so that she knows her words have no affect on him and he gave nothing away about what awaits her in Pittsburgh.
Feel bad for Max his plans didn't work out the way he wanted with Emmett hopefully the second time will be better.
Time to finish taking out the trash :)
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:57 am Title: Chapter 22
LMFAO!!!!!!!! I cannot stop laughing like a damn hyena in heat! That was magnificiently done! Doors slamming in Cruella DeWhore's face is the least of her worries. Then she tried to make Brian feel as worthless as she does by telling him about Justin and how he may have aborted Aiden or given Brian's child away....LOL Brian sure told that trollop that her attempts at ruining the night for him and Justin weren't going to work. The public kiss as reporters looked on and snapped pictures was a wonderful touch to "The Fall of the Floozy!" That would probably make a very nice headline and there are certainly hundreds of pictures to go with that. OMG! I can't wait for the fallout from this very public ass-whooping.
And now she's on her way to Pittsburgh where she thinks she's going to enact revenge and wreak havoc. Uh-huh Ms. DeWhore! Everyone that matters has your number and I'll bet they're willing to play and beat you at your own game. Michael and Deb would be smart to climb up out of Lindsay's business...but we know they are NEVER smart!!
WRITE On Star!!!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 22
Evidently Lindsay wasn't embarrassed enough. She had to try to get back at Brian. Luckily it didn't work. Poor Max. I hope everything is okay or... is he pregnant? That would be icing on the cake!
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:28 am Title: Chapter 22
WHAT A B***H!! I was this close to feeling sorry for Lindsay, then she opened her mouth. Awe sweet Max & Emmit moment. I can't wait to see what happens when everyone gets back to Pittsburgh.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 12:50 am Title: Chapter 21
LOVED THIS UPDATE!!! At first, I thought Mel was deliberately trying to start a fight with Justin. But as the conversation went on, I understood what she was doing- a little reminder of his WASP upbringing. She prepared him to deal with Lindsay's passive-aggressive tactics using herself as a model. My respect for her just rose a bit higher. Hopefully she will really take Justin's advice about learning to live again to heart. The 'Mel' I know would never opt to live as a zombie. It's time she rediscovers that fire she had.
As for Bitchzilla: I can't wait for her downfall to begin! She really is a piece of work in all her gold digging glory. I actually feel sorry for Sam having to deal with her. I can appreciate that when Lindsay tried to make Jay insignificant, Sam spoke up on his behalf. I wonder if Nancy will change her tune regarding Jay's work when she witnesses Jay and company break her daughter. Nancy and Lindsay are fair-weather people but they both have to know that any attempts to undermine Justin's career and life will be met with a well-planned, throughly-executed revenge. I can't wait for that lesson to be meted out.
The reunion and proposal was EVERYTHING I could have hoped for. Brian and Justin on the same wavelength is always a thing of beauty to watch. I'm looking forward to the reactions of the Peterson-Novotny factions as Brian is placed even further from their reach!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 12:17 am Title: Chapter 21
Love the fact they bought rings for each other and that they aren't letting The Idiot Brigade stand in the way of them having a life together with their family.
I think Max could be pregnant?
I love the fact that Max bought a ring for Emmett it is time for Emmett to get a shot at happiness and Max is perfect for him.
I just wanna see Lindsay go splat all over the front page of all the newspapers with Mommy Dearest's face right beside hers.
Lindsay is so awful that you can't help but feel bad for Sam and can't wait for them to get to the show so everyone can cheer Sam on along with Justin, Brian, Max, Emmett and anyone else who has an axe to grind against Liddy/Lindsay.
That chocolate silk pie sounds delicious I can understand why Justin was pissed at Sam.
Time For Lindsay to Go Down! :)
Date: Oct 29, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 21
Awww, I feel all warm and squshy after that. Max is knocked up, way to go Emmett!! Awww, see I'm still emoting.
Lindsay/Liddy is as they'd say in the old days, a trip. A one woman wrecking crew that has met her blonde match. Her downfall is going to be awesome.
Date: Oct 29, 2016 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 21
Love that they both had rings for the other! Max & Emmett are perfect for each other.
Date: Oct 29, 2016 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 21
Fantastic double update. So love your fics, can never get enough.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 29, 2016 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 21
I love the visual of the boys gaging and Jewel awww'ing over Max and Emmett. So happy that Emmett is getting his happy ever after.
Waiting for Lindsey/Liddy to get her ass kicked by Justin.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2016 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 21
Yay, they're getting married and hopefully Emmett and Max too. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the show. I even feel sorry for Sam in a way. Very fun chapter. Pie and a little monkey and Mel spending time with Gus.