Date: Oct 29, 2016 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 20
So glad Justin got all his memories back! Max is a devious one isn't he? Can't wait to see what he has in store for 'Liddy's' family. lol
Date: Oct 29, 2016 2:33 pm Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad that Justin remembers everyone and everything. Now he and Brian are armed with the information to help them succeed this time around. I'm also glad that Brian explained the Mel/Lindz dynamic to him. Lindsay truly ruled her household with an iron fist in a velvet glove. Him and Justin's resolve to just be 'Brian and Justin with their three kids' was sweet.
Lindsay has some damn nerve!! Trying to rule Max in his own gallery?! REALLY TRICK?! REALLY? OOOooh I can't wait for the show! I'll bet she'll wish that she kept her family in Pittsburgh and went into hiding by the time Mad Max and Jay get through with her lying, scheming ass. I'm glad that Max called her on her comment about Justin's memory. The bitch backpeddled but it didn't change the fact that Max caught her out there. It was as good as an admission that she knew Justin's past before he became Jay. She needs to worry about that instead of where Sam's painting will be placed.
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 29, 2016 8:47 am Title: Chapter 20
I cannot wait for the show. Lindsay is such an idiot. YAY, Justin has his memory!
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 20
Justin remembers and they will be happy together. But we have to wait and find out what will happen at the show with Sam and Liddy. That should be fun. And how they get even with Deb and Mikey.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2016 4:14 am Title: Chapter 20
It is wonderful that Justin's memories have come back cause now no one can play him about how Brian was five years ago, they can both move forward with their three kids and live their lives with no one having power over them ever again.
I hope Mel steps up and starts acting like a parent to Gus or she will be facing the wrath of Brian and Justin together.
I can't wait for the opening of this show I want the press to get every word and every photo, it is so nice that Mommy and Daddy Peterson are going to be there, to have them basking that their daughter has a successful hetero relationship right before the hammer swings is priceless.
Once Lindsay goes down then they can go after Deb and Michael it is getting close to all the dominoes falling and for them to pay All Douchebags need to rot preferably in a cell.
I am biting my nails trying to figure out what happens next? ;)
Date: Oct 29, 2016 4:01 am Title: Chapter 20
Absolutely loving this! Thanks for the great story :)
Date: Oct 28, 2016 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 19
I am really enjoying this story. I love strong Justin.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 19
That chapter was gorgeous! Loved it all. Nice intro with Lindsey and Sam. I was giggling knowing full well that Sam is in on the plan and all of Lindsey's plans are going to go south in a big way.
Now....to the gut wrentching part of this chapter. That chat between Gus and Justin. Really lovely. Gus opened up, sharing his fears, his anxiety. I'm so glad they had that talk. gus's fears are natural with 2 families coing together like these 2 did. some blood, some not and inbetween. It's not the blood that matters and I think Gus is understanding that. Glad that justin was able to ease those thoughts.
adn that "little chat" between Justin and Mel. It was a long time coming. Really disappointed that she'd done anything up til now. Just giving excuses. Justin laid it out on the line for her. Basically shit or get off the pot. Now it's up to her.
He went straight ot his childhood home. He's really starting to remember isn't he. YAY!
Excellent chapter!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:20 am Title: Chapter 19
Brilliant update. Happy to see Justin giving Mel what she needs, a veral thrashing.
Hate to see Gus so sad and confused regardiing his mother's.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to more!
JoAnn
Date: Oct 28, 2016 1:03 am Title: Chapter 19
Omg poor Gus...he broke my heart...thank God Justin stepped up and their cool now. And good for him telling Mel off, she needed that. Hopefully she'll start putting Gus first.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh my. He's remembering and I love how he lit into Melanie. Poor Gus.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:10 am Title: Chapter 19
Damn, Justin is kicking butt and taking names. Poor Gus. I can understand Mel's point about healing, she was lucky to have Brian take care of Gus.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 19
YOU TELL HER JAY!!!! Poor Gus feeling left out😟. I cannot wait for all the shoes to drop.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2016 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 19
That was a beautiful gut-wrenching moment between Justin and Gus that is one scared confused little boy who just needs reassurance that he is loved and won't be abandoned.
Justin telling off Mel made me cheer (I Wish That Had Happened On The Show) she is just making excuses for why she abandoned her son that she wanted so badly, I mean she was so cold to Brian to get him to sign that million dollar insurance policy and his rights to Gus that I couldn't stand her.
Lindsay and Michael made her life Hell Gus was not the cause of it plus Brian did what she didn't think he was capable of, he stepped up as a parent and took responsibility for his son while she ran away (Not surprising she did that on the show after she cheated).
It is not Gus's fault that Mel became a doormat for Lindsay he was a baby, love isn't suppose to make you lose your spine, it is supposed to give you the strength to face any battle head on.
I hope she shows up to ease Gus's pain I think if she doesn't she will have to face the wrath of Justin again.
Lindsay should enjoy her moment in the spotlight cause it will soon be her last. lol
:)
Date: Oct 27, 2016 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 18
Max and Emmett have a great talk. We are all on the same page now as to how Max really feels about justin/Jay. No questions now. Am also gald that Max is realizing whre his place needs to be now that Brian is here. Not that Brian wants to usurp Max's place, but Max needed to get thet Brian needs to be given a chance. I think going forward that Max and Brian are going to be excellent friends. Brian will be able to go to Max for advise and a bit of a history lesson on Jay, and Max will be able to understand more of who Justin was through Brian.
I think once Justin and Jay "merge" so to speak, there will be more of a sense of peace for them all. I don't honestly don't think there's any concern as to whether Justin will cause Jay to question Brian's allegience. Jay is too stong of a personality. Jay remembering Justin will just balance them more I think.
Just love this.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 27, 2016 1:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
Awww his memory is coming back. i hope the past does not bother him with doubts about Brian.
Date: Oct 27, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 18
Love them walking down memory lane! Fabulous chapter! Glad Emmett & Max had that talk too.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2016 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wanderful chapter. I like how Max told Emmett what his relationship with Justin is and that he hopes that Emmett is in his future. Justin seems to be remembering and Brian is all for that. He's not going to insist, but we know he wants Justin, Aiden, Gus, and Jewel together in his life.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2016 3:32 am Title: Chapter 17
Love what Justin did with the comic book can't wait to see his reaction. Payback time.
Date: Oct 26, 2016 2:48 am Title: Chapter 17
Shame Michael he's such a dick
Date: Oct 26, 2016 1:14 am Title: Chapter 17
Two new updates Fantastic! Can't get enough of your fics.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 26, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 17
Justin had to regulate...lol he is awesome and fierce, I'm loving it. Deb and Co. are so out gunned it's crazy. Daphne is a ride or die friend which is good for Justin but that much worse for tacky trio.
That was an excellent ending to Capt. Astro. Can't wait til Mikey gets the pieces.
This was a fast paced intense and funny update. Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2016 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 17
So much accomplished. You let us in on why the detective Brian hired never reported anything. That's one PI who's about to lose his license I bet. And you hit Michael where it will really hurt. Destroying his prized possession. Good job.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2016 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 17
Justin/Jay was smart to go talk to Deb he got the information he needed so now all the players will get theirs right between the eyes.
Brian having that conversation with Max is something I wish had happened on the tv show, everyone spent so much time meddling in Brian and Justin's relationship they had no time for their own, it is easy to dictate how one should act in a relationship when your own is falling apart or you never had one in the last thirty years.
Tearing up the comic book is going to destroy Michael and like Justin I am cracking up it is just the start of what Michael deserves.
They should be running out of town but Deb and Michael are going to stay thinking that they still have control of the situation, witnessing their downfall will be glorious and the start of Brian and Justin putting the past behind them and moving forward into their future.
I Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! :)
Date: Oct 25, 2016 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 17
Deb and Michael have no idea who they are dealing with in Justin/Jay. He is too damn much!!! LMAO!! This is the one time I'm super happy of Michael's oral diarrhea! Justin played their asses like a piano and got the twit to sing like the proverbial canary. Deb won't be able to help her baby backpeddle out of this one!
The conversation with Max and Brian was one that definitely had to happen. I'm glad that Brian acknowledged the core issue between him and Justin- lack of one-on-one communication. Between Brian's standoffishness and the others meddling, I understand why Justin was confused about his place in Brian's world. Don't like it at all but I certainly understand it. I'm glad that Justin is willing to try again and asked Max for the space to do so. Is it wrong for me to want them to live at Justin's place? Deb, Michael and Hunka Burning Drawers aka Lindsay doesn't know where it is and while Brian and Justin are working on being a family, they will need some place that can represent peace and normalcy for the kids. If not there just some place else to give them time to regroup. I have a feeling that once Justin sends that comic (which YES, i laughed hysterically while reading), I have a feeling that Deb and Michael will start inducing the drama full-force again.
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle