Date: Oct 25, 2016 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG!!! That was PERFECT! I hope you show Michael's reaction. That is going to hurt worse than any prison time or other punishment anyone can dish out. I LOVE THIS JUSTIN, I cannot say that enough.
Most times in this fandom you get protective Brian and abused Justin. This Justin, I would be afraid to cross in a dark alley and I like that😉.
Keep this up, I am loving this story!
Date: Oct 25, 2016 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
So happy that Brian and Justin are at the loft. Although it wasn't very much, Justin's feelings of familiarity are counting for quite a bit and will surely add up into a more complete picture. But I agree that they should work towards beginning anew even as the past may show little by little. They are both completely different men from five years ago.
LOL! Justin/Jay is even confounding Max a bit. It's good that Emmett is able to give the other gentleman of how Justin was versus what he is now. Both facets of his personality live inside of Justin (we've seen glimpses of Justin's steely side in the series too) and I really loved the last line by Justin/Jay himself. 'I want to be Justin but Jay still has some work to do," definitely sums up what needs to happen in order to deal with Dumb, Dumber and Bitchzilla.
So happy that Sam made contact with the Travelling Trollop. I can't wait to see how her Highway to Hell turns out!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 25, 2016 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow! Justin is going to go off on them! Uh oh....where is Brian?
Date: Oct 25, 2016 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
Each day, several times a day, I look to see if there's an update. lol. So anxious to see what is going to happen next. Every chapter has a morsel that whets my appetite, then I have to wait for the next one. :)
A few feelings of familiarity for Justin at the loft. Will he eventually get these memories back or will he and Brian simply forge ahead with this new realtionship? Both are intriguing aspects. Thankfully no one knows they're at the loft so they can have privacy.
I am in a state of giggles re: Lindsey adn Sam. Knowing that Sam is in on this plot to bring her (and the other 2) down is hysterical! She's going to stop with her machinations re: Deb and Michael thinking Sam is her route "in". Little does she know that he's really her very own "highway to hell" Oh what a trip she's gonna take. Can't wait!!
Sooooooooo...what is Jay up to? I love that he wants to be Justin again, (to a degree I would imagine) but I don't think he wants to lose Jay either. I'm dying to see what he has up his sleeve!! Going to be so good!!!! Is he going to go behind Max and the group's back to get his own desired end, or will he let Max do his thing? I think Max's idea will prolong the torture which is really a terrific idea!! Justin just want's Brian's misery to end. That shows his level of affection he already has for Brian.
Terrific chapter!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2016 1:09 am Title: Chapter 16
Devious Justin. I remember seeing that side of him in the show a time or two. It looks like Max and Emmett might have their work cut out for them if Jay takes over. Brian might be able to pull him back some but not much. I'm certainly looking forward to your next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2016 12:55 am Title: Chapter 16
I want Jay to Completely Demolish Deb, Michael and Lindsay but I also want to see Max's plan out and too see what else is discovered about these three Nitwits.
They don't deserve another second of freedom but can't give up your hand just yet, the element of surprise and anticipation makes it more funnier cause they are waiting for the hammer to come down, instead it is going to be a bulldozer that knocks their house down around them.
Can Mommy and Daddy Peterson be there when Lindsay is humiliated the thought of Nancy's face turning purple makes me giggle? (That would be a great cover for the front page lol)
;)
Date: Oct 25, 2016 12:29 am Title: Chapter 16
YOU'RE KILLING ME!!!! I cannot wait for Jay to rip Deb anew one. Do you know how many times I checked for an update today, and now THIS! Okay, I am calm now. Another great chapter.
Date: Oct 24, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ohhhhhhhhhh. Oh my oh my.....I have the feeling things are going to go ALL bad for Lindsey, Michael and Deb. and not just the usual "all bad" but monumental explosive, apocolyptically bad!! Linsey/Liddy knowing all along where Justin was...Michael hitting him. Lindsey and now Deb knowing about it!! they'll be lucky to only get jail time! I can'twait for the gang to find out about everything. they are on the brink of it...so close I can taste it, but they need real evidence, not just suspicion. Thank goodness for Max. I so love his character! Whata hoot! A great partner for Emmett too. Love his idea about Sam and Lindsey. You know, a tiny part of me almost feels bad for those 3, but then I give my head a shake. Mad and Justin together are pretty formidable adn have enough influence to make the 3 amigos's lives miserable. those 2 along with the combined brain, influence and ability to scheme from the rest!! WOW. Adn can I just say..pissed off Mel. Oh shit. Would not want to mess with that!!
Max was right about Mel and Gus though. As much as Ted is friends with Mel, it takes a real friend to point out when they are fucking up and not just excuse their behavior. Good for Emmett for sayingwhat right.
It's getting so exciting! Every chapter has new nuggets of info. It really is a thril ride this one!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 23, 2016 11:57 am Title: Chapter 14
This could be my favorite chapter from you ever. It is frustrating, emotional, silly, heavy, crazy, and hysterical all at once. The complete evil is met with anger but also with that awesome sense of humor you have (Teds sexy authority).
That being said -- He hit my baby with a pipe? A pipe? You horrible creature. Lindsay and Debbie are just as scummy.
Loved the extra update!!!
Date: Oct 23, 2016 8:00 am Title: Chapter 15
I don't make a habit of reviewing everything I read, because frankly sometimes it can be hard to come up a positive spin. (Characters being tooOOC, or there is no real developments of said characters) No such problem with your work😀. I cannot wait for this story to finish so I can download the ePub, to keep for a rainy day. I love that Justin is remembering. I love that Max told Mel to get off her ass and be Gus' mother, I loved "Take Charge Ted". I love the fierce daddies both Brian and Justin. In essence I am LOVING this story!
Date: Oct 23, 2016 7:50 am Title: Chapter 14
YAY!!! Here I am at 3am reading this update, and thinking there is no honor among thieves. I cannot wait for these three to get what they deserve. I thought I hated Michael on the show, but the way you write him makes me hate him with the fire of a thousand suns. 😀 Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update.
Date: Oct 23, 2016 7:27 am Title: Chapter 15
YIPPEEE!! Dyno-Dyke is on board! And the implication that Lindsay's ignorant ass has been covering for Michael is well and truly out there! Now that Max has an idea of who the players are, he'll know just how to follow the money.
I really loved the semi-confrontation between Mel and Max. Like Emmett and Justin, Max can see through bullshit. I love Ted but all he can really see is that his friend was hurting during all this. But Em and Max see the whole picture. I really hope that Mel takes Max's words to heart. Although I can understand the amount of pain she was in, it wasn't caused by Gus. I think in the long run she'll make a real go at restoring her relationship with her son.
Brian and Justin...Ahhhh what can I say aout those two. They are definitely two sides of the same coin! I'm glad they are going to the loft. Perhaps being there in the place where the sage of Brian Kinney and JUstin Taylor began will jog Justin's memory and complete the puzzle the Justin is still trying to understand.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 23, 2016 6:50 am Title: Chapter 14
BUSTED!! HA!! I don't think Michael can be seen as innocent in Deb's eyes anymore (not that his rat bastard ass ever was). Not only is he a petulant five-year old trapped in a thirty year old body, but he's also a criminal- both as a thief and a batterer. What a pickle and pill to swallow about her delusional, spolied pain-in-the-ass!
As for Deb's conversation with Lindsay: What a joke! Lindsay holds all the cards as she probably has the evidence of putting Michael in jail if she wants to. Although I can't stand her ass, I have to admit that Lindsay is devious and I wouldn't put it passed her to have recorded the conversation with Michael either when he confessed the first time or this last time when he badgered her about coming back to Pittsburgh. Deb really would be smart to wash her hands of both of them but we all know she won't do that. After all her baby runs the risk of jail time on many fronts, including but not limited to embezzlement since he's stealing from his job's profits.
Blake, Daphne, Emmett , Justin and Max are a MESS!!! I really loved their banter back and forth while planning. I could certainly imagine how insane that whole meeting was for Brian and Ted who were trying to act reasonably and responsibily (to a degree in Brian's case). 'Take Charge Ted' is HOT and he learned it from the master. I chuckled when Daph said that it was time to go find her boyfriend because her girly parts were tingly. That little firecracker has surely been around all of them too long and she had the pleasure of making 5 gay men blush, LOL
I'm really glad that they are piecing together Lindsay's involvement! That bitch thinks that she has gotten away with her machinations. Once again, I think it is a brilliant move to use Sam plus now Mel is going to get involved! She'll definitely have some helpful insight to the bitch she dissed and dismissed!
WRITE On Star!!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 3:16 am Title: Chapter 15
Yet another wonderful chapter. What will Max think when he finds out Brian calls Mel-Smelly Melly? Now they are suspecious of Michael and if Max's plan works the cops will take care of everything.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 2:24 am Title: Chapter 14
What a chapter. Love the banter between Justin, Max, Emmett and Blake. Love take charge Ted. Growl. Now just have to hope that the plan works. Or maybe that Deb kicks Lindsay's ass. Having Mel help is the icing on the cake.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 2:02 am Title: Chapter 14
Death really is too good for all three of these vipers but abject humiliation and prison sounds like a real treat.
Deb is willing to ignore what her son did to Justin so she can keep trying to get money out of Brian and Michael in his bed (Eewww I need to bleach out my imagination), they both deserve the retribution that is about to be heaped on both their heads.
Lindsay will come just so she can gloat her ego will be her biggest down fall, I think the press hounding her is just what she needs before she is sent to prison, I mean she wanted the spotlight so I say let her have it with both barrels.
Daphne, Emmett, Blake and Max are too funny for words they can't plot a revenge, but they can lighten the mood and it was needed.
Looking Forward to More :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 12:28 am Title: Chapter 13
It's good to know that Max is backing Justin. He's learned from the master so whatever he cooks up for Lindsay should be good. I can't believe that Michael was the one who hit Justin and caused his amnesia, though in retrospect I should have. May the Mayhem begin.
Date: Oct 22, 2016 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
Holy shit! Michael & Lindz just keep digging their own graves! How dare they!!! So clearly they all need to end up in jail...wow
Date: Oct 22, 2016 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 13
No frickin way! These "people" are monsters. This one must end with them all in jail. Perhaps Mikey's cell mate can be 6 ft tall with bulging muscles and a weakness for fish (newbies). Ugh seriously, the pain they've caused they deserve to suffer.
Way to keep us on the edge of our seats!
Date: Oct 22, 2016 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
It is official, you are trying to KILL me!!!! Those F***ING PEICES OF S**T!!! Whatever Brian and Justin do it will not be enough. 😡😡😡
Date: Oct 22, 2016 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
LAWD HAM TURKEYYYYYYYYY!!!!!! I knew they had to be in on it and that Justin's memory loss was no accident!! That whiny ass little fuck-nugget!!!! I soooooo hope that it all comes crashing down on him very VERY soon and that Justin really starts remembering!
As for More-Miles-Than-Interstate 95- Loose-Lipped Lindsay: WHOO-WEEEEE I so want her exposed, beginning with that fracked up PI. Brian has a hefty lawsuit for payment for services unrendered. I'm fairly certain that Sam would bring the whole truth out of Thunder-Cunt if he's allowed to have a show with Justin. As Brian said, the idea has merit but now it needs the Spin Doctor Kinney's touch to refine it.
OMG!! I really feel like a puppy about to pee in my excitement! I can't stop wiggling and wanting more!!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 22, 2016 8:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yaaaaaay i was right that Liddy is non other than Lindsay..!My stomach is in a knot while reading this chapter...i could have punch the bitch and tear into pieces for letting Brian suffered of Justin's disappearance while she knows all along where he was,and i think she has something to do why the PI doesn't have any leads of finding J..aaaaaarrrggh
Great Job Starlight as usual...thanks for the great yet another chapter..!
Date: Oct 22, 2016 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
Beautiful! Hope Linz/Liddy gets what she deserves, along with Mikey and Deb.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 22, 2016 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
OMG!!!!! YES!!!! They are moving forward at long last! I'm glad that they went to Justin's to talk so that they could do so in private and get an understanding of what happened and what's happening.
I am so damn HAPPY that Justin was able to put the Lindsay-Liddy connection together!! I think I actually fist pumped the air when he said "THAT MOTHERFUCKING BITCH!" Brian's response had me chuckling but then Mr. Brian Fucking Kinney as we know him made a RETURN!! There is nothing on earth anywhere like Brian in charge and ready for battle and certainly not for Justin. I love when they get all protective of each other and vengeful on the other's behalf. YES! Lindsay has a lot of explaining to do and I don't think she will like the results of her machinations. Sure, Brian and Justin lost valuable time but they are back and will be stronger than they were before Deb, Michael and Lindsay stuck their collective noses in their business. The Traitorous Trio better run for cover because they are FUCKED and NOT in a positive life-affirming way!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 22, 2016 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
SERIOUSLY, are you TRYING to kill me. That BITCH Lindsay, I almost dropped my phone. I have no words but you did answer Max and my question about how they never found him. Please don't tell me Mikey and Lindsay didn't bribe the PI