Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2016 3:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing gap filler!

I like the way Brian doesn't judge Lindsay, who I think really does love Melanie. But, I don't think she's ready for monogamy, married or not. (Mel probably isn't either.) Personally, I think Lindsay's bisexual. And, there's an element of her psyche that still wants the white picket fence with Brain, which would earn her parents' approval.

Thankfully, Brian's not about to indulge Lindsay in her fantasy. I think, though, that it's dangerous to impart the information that he likes to bottom. I don't see Lindsay keeping her mouth shut; she'll tell Mel. Or, maybe, she'll "leak" the information when talking to Michael. Both Linds and Michael keep that push-pull going: telling Brian he needs to grow up and then wanting him to remain in party-boy stud mode when he does. I can just imagine Michael's hissy fit.

I love Toppy Justin! The give and take between Justin and Brian is perfect (and hot!). Brian's a sensualist, so he'd want to (regularly) experience all forms of pleasure. :)

This story is complete, but I could easily see a sequel dealing with the repercussions of Lindsay not keeping her mouth shut...

Author's Response:

Brian is very open, sexually and thinks that you should do whatever makes you feel good.

If Brian ever decided he wanted to be straight and marry Lindsay she would leave Mel without a second thought.

The only way either Lindsay or Michael would ever want Brian to grow up is if he wanted to be with one of them.

Brian and Justin are very much equals in bed and they each love to challange the other to see how far they can go. They have a very special bond.

I have considered a sequel or epilogue to this, I will have to see if something gets into my head.

Thanks

~Lorie~