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Date: Nov 23, 2016 4:46 am Title: Chapter 21

I'm impressed with Michael doing the right thing in the end

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Date: Nov 23, 2016 4:21 am Title: Chapter 19

The five of them as a family is so heartwarming 

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Date: Nov 23, 2016 1:22 am Title: Chapter 23

Ben needs to get a grip because he is acting like Michael right Justin is not a toy he can just wind up when it is convenient for him, he knew deep that Justin could never love him but he wanted Justin and Jacob to be his only they never were.

You were trying to force something that was never there and no matter how long it took Justin would never stop loving Brian and Jacob would never stop wanting to meet his father.

Honey you have known Justin and Jacob for almost twelve years and he never once saw you as anything other than a good friend.

Is Is Starting to Sound Familiar Ben?!?!?

Deb better watch what she says about Brian around the kids or Justin will tell her off and she won't like what is brought up (Can learn a lot about a person in two years), she also better learn that Brian doesn't want to hear her opinion about his relationship with Justin, that is none of her business.

Hope Michael is growing up and thinking more about Jenny but I don't think anyone has seen the last of his whiny side.

Where is Lindsay?

She has been way too quiet and that makes me nervous.

Excellent Chapter :)

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 18

Take that Lindsay! 

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 16

The last line is THE BEST!!!

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 22

Really liking your John character. He doesn't pose any kind of threat to Brian and Justin's relationship. He's definitely supportive and I think he won't put up with any of Michael's crap either. If Michael says anything, he, like Justin, will put Michael in his place.

Speaking of Michael......is he actually growing up? He's deferring to Justin in a way I didn't think possible. Will he continue to put Jenny's needs first, ahead of his disdain for Justin? I guess we'll have to wait and see. As usual he has to put his 2 cents worth in, making that comment about Briand and John's history, but Justin is secure. He understands that Brian will have had history with men in teh past 12 years, just like he has.

I'm interested to see what happens when they go to New York. Will Michael go as well? Will he try to insinuate himself there since Jenny is going? What will happen with Ben? Wow....all kinds of scenarios are going through my mind. Will Brian and Ben bury the hatchet? (preferably not into each other) Will John and Ben hook up? What will Michael's reaction be if they do?

So looking forward to the next update!!

Cheers,

Elaine

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 13

perfect conversation with the boys and Brian about sharing a bed... so funny!

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 11

Holy crap... I like that Lindsay is starting to see the error of her ways, but i still don't know if I can trust her.. she is saying all the right things, and having that tape should help... I really want to believe her

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 9

this talk was very needed... now I want Ben to get set straight...

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow, Mel is even worse than I thought!

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm so excited to find out how underhanded Mel was about the whole paternal rights... she is sneaking coniving bitch that needs to pay for it!

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Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

ahhhh, I feel better now that the boys have at least talked... 

I really hate Michael, Mel and Lindsay right now.  Michael for being a jealous bitch, Mel for being a hateful, jealous shrew, and Lindsay for being weak and letting the others get away with it... some friend!