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Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 9:39 am Title: Chapter 2

Ah, denail. I completely understand him. I want to wrap him up in a big hug and protect him from everything. 

I bet Justin's feeling terrible. He'll have to be strong for Brian.

I'm curious about Michael...are you keeping it canon?

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 3:27 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh! 'Poor Brian' doesn't really seem to cut it here. This is going to be so hard on the Studly One. Please hurry with the next chapter! TAG



Author's Response:

We know, right? Poor guy. Working on the next one now :)

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh my goodness, poor Brian! He lost an eye...he's a very proud man, don't know how he's going to cope. So glad to see this second chapter, keep it up ladies! I can tell this is going to be quite the ride.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2016 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hi Ladies,

 

You have just made me the happiest camper in the world. I love the update and I feel so bad for Brian. I feel for Justin too. I'm wondering how they are both going to deal with this? How is the family going to deal with this? Oh, Guss your daddy is going to need you. Please post more soon !!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. We are glad you're enjoying this as much as we are writing it. It's good you mentioned Justin, people might forget that this also affects him too, poor guy!

Gus will come into this very soon :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2016 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

Brian might be blind?  The angst level just went up.  Good job.

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