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Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 9:56 am Title: Chapter 3

At least Justin and Brian sorted it out that Justin was staying.

Ah, sweet Mother Taylor. I always love her interactions with Brian. She's right, thinking too far ahead will overwhelm him.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh my God this chapter really tugged at my heartstrings. It's just breaking my heart....poor Brian! Gut-wrenching...the passage from The Lost & The Damned was very good writing but so random. I was like...what?! Lol talk about angst! Yikes! Looking forward to the next chapter. Please tell me that Brian is going to get his eyesight back? 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

All I can say is 'audio books'.  That and Jennifer was a better choice than the others.  Let's hope that Brian doesn't try to push Justin away anymore.  It's not going to work.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 1:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hi Ladies,

 

This is another great update. I feel really bad for Briand Justin. This so new to both of them and Brian really doesn't know how to deal with what's happening to him. Although Justin understands better than anyone what Brian is going through because of the bashing. Brian and Justin both need time to process what happen. Brian is going to lash out a lot. He is going to need Justin, But he isn't going to want to depend on Justin because they are broken up at the moment. They are going to need to deal with that. I love the fact that Justin had Jennifer come and sit with Brian, and she was mothering him. Brian is also going to need a lot of love from his son. It will be interesting reading how everyone else deals with Brian possibly being blind. I would love to read more scenes of Brian and Jennifer too.  Please post more soon!!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:03 am Title: Chapter 3

So glad to see a new chapter, even if the angst meter went up drastically with this one. Can I just use my standard 'Poor Brian' comment for this and all subsequent chapters? LOL. TAG



Author's Response:

Haha, you can most definitely say that - as that is mostly what has been going through my head as we have written it. We're glad you're excited by new chapters of this. Lots more to come for 'Poor Brian.' :)

Reviewer: nickknack Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 5:58 am Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait to see where this story goes, so much of Brian's life, both personal and professional, is reliant on his sight 🙁



Author's Response:

It really is. We can't wait to share where this story is going with you. Thanks for the review.

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