Date: Feb 05, 2017 7:53 am Title: Chapter 15
What a delightfully long chapter! I saved it for my birthday to satisfy my reading craving - after meeting the need to write and beta. :)
Wow! I wonder how long Brian will be able to suppress memories of his coach after the creep reared his ugly head. That jerk had to have a very traumatic impact on Brian's life - I think this is the first story I've read to explore that. Well done
I really like the way you're building the romance in this story <3 I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
~Karynn
Author's Response:
Hoooo, a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY, to you my darling. I'm glad this was able to satisfy your reading cravings (or at least I hope it did LOL)
Thank you so much for reviewing. I cannot wait for you to read the next chapter now. I would say I am about 3/4 done and it's hot and steamy and full of wonderfully romantic moments (I hope ;))
xx
Date: Feb 02, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Can't get enough of this Brian and Justin chemistry. Justin accepts Brian's faults, but expects him to have at least some courtesy... doesn't allow him to just be an asshole.
They can be playful, and Brian even gets bashful, which is awesome!
That ending though.... HOT I want a tubbie (with them preferably) NOW LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you, darling. I promise, the tubbie will be SOON... and if you're good, maybe I'll work in a way for Kathy to get her hands on Brian LMAO
Date: Feb 01, 2017 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for coming back. They seem to have had a good time, hopefully more to come.Ha ha.
Author's Response:
I can promise this won't ever be abandoned, it just takes me a while LOL. Thank you for reviewing. They definitely had fun and you know, I can assure you LOTS MORE fun is to follow ;)
Date: Feb 01, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
Well worth all the work! Great job. TAG
Author's Response:
Thanks, lovely, and I'd never have got there without you!
Date: Feb 01, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was awesome! Some hysterical parts, some touching parts, their adorable! Their going to finally have sex now right? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks you, I am so glad you enjoyed it. And Mayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyybe ;) My aim is to get this next part out much sooner, so send me some good writing vibes hehe x
Date: Feb 01, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
Haha. I loved the Facebook bit. I can sooooooo see Brian being all dodgy about his personal info - haha. Poor Brian is so tortured. Makes me feel so sad to see him struggling so - both physically and with the demons of his past. The dialogue in the car was such fun. It flowed perfectly. This was a great long update. I loved every moment of it... and excited to read even more.
Thanks for the update. *Hugss* Janet
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, and glad you liked the long update. I can't believe I almost hit 9000 words. That is my longest chapter yet. But you all deserved it for waiting a decade for me to update hehe.
Don't you just want to hug, Brian? So much has happened to him and he deserved none of it.
So happy you enjoyed the car dialogue. I always get so nervous about my writing and you have just made me feel super powerful LOL
Thanks again x