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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 8:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Whoa! What a heavy and dense chapter!

Lindsay is in a very bad situation: she might be out of jail, but for how much longer?

Joan is living in the land of delusion: she will have a hard wake-up call soon enough.

I love this "That trilogy of twatery is to be avoided at all costs. And if you add Lindsay into the mix, you have a circle of cunt-ery"!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2019 8:03 am Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Some clarifications first:  First paragraph:

but he had an awesome amount of respect for her aunt and uncle. (is George Leda's uncle? but how could Nathan have respect for Virginia?)

Rod nodded as he looked through the thorough investigative reports. (RON - right?)

he did recognize two of the blonde women, a brunette, (I'm assuming Jennifer, Cynthia, and WHO?)


You know how foolish and uncomfortable I would have been if I had been Nathan? Here he is standing in a room full of strangers, RON and Lynette, and having his affair with Nancy - while she was Ron's wife - brought out in ful blooming color.  Let's just hope he takes into account all the warnings and information he was given. He rules that baby goes back to Lindsay, or drops any hints of what was discussed at George's with any of these women, he can kiss his bench goodbye. Besides, he's a judge in a court of law, (I know it would never be the case of Ron and Nancy) but he could be named in an alienation of affection lawsuit if Ron wanted to get nasty. Why sully his hands with an ugly, loose woman like that???

HOLY HELL IN A HANDBASKET!!!  Joan Kinney is off her rocker!! Talk about a disciple of the devil!  That woman wouldn't know God and Christianity if it bit her in the ass! She gives good Christian mother's a bad name. She preaches God, and does the work of the devil.

Couldn't Lindsay be charged with attempted felony theft at the bank? It was bad enough she was trying to move money from her and Melanie's account, but she was trying to move money from BRIAN'S account. Or would Brian have to press charges???

Isn't there a special place for someone like Lindsay that harbors all these illusions??? Only woman Brian made love to, when Brian and her got married, wedding trousseau (isn't she aware all those clothes would be outdated), stay at her parents' home, Alienation of Affection filed against Justin.... this woman is crazy insane! And the last straw was: all the fault of that blond, husband-stealing bastard named Justin Taylor! Okay, she left "crazy insane" someplace 100 mikes back. But why press your luck with a cabbie calling the police for non payment??? I would think refusal to pay a cabbie driver would get you a call to the police versus a restaurant.

I'm so looking forward to Craig's first day on the farm. Maybe Fred has pigs...

Mikey, Mikey, Mikey...  so the clunk on the head appeared to have done some temporary forgetfulness. He can remember the stupid article and following Emmett, but he can't remember screeching and then hitting his head. Nice type of amnesia. And his loose mouth won't shut up... I hope he talks that way to the judge.  I really liked this one: He still couldn’t help but feel that everything that was happening to him was all Justin’s fault. If it wasn’t for him, the guys would have forgiven him by now. That was the way it had always been; the way it should always be! YOU’RE LYING! BRIAN WOULD NEVER DO THAT TO ME!

BTW... is there a writing class that teaches how to write delusional???

Love this ongoing saga. Can't wait to see what the next chapter will bring,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Hi Cathy,


Leda's aunt has passed and now her uncle is moving to London to be with his son. Leda isn't related to George, although their families are both well-known and well-respected within Elite society. That is how Nathan knows Jennifer (blonde), Lynette (blonde), Constance (red with blonde highlights), AND Marcie (brunette). 

Sorry, I made a typing error on Ron, but you are correct there... I'll fix it soon.


As for Michael, he often has selective memory, especially during his uber-idiot, sanctimonious tirades in which he's quick to point out other's flaws while negating his own. So it would stand to reason that in the case of Brian and Melanie being twins, his mind would rebel at the idea and therefore push that fact as far deep into his subconscious until he has no other choice than to face the reality.   


Happy Reading and HUGS,


Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2019 8:34 am Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

I'm really excited to see how Brian and Melanie react to this incredible news. And the others too.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2019 8:01 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Wonderful update!! ✨

Glad there will lawsuit on Mikey's whiny mouth, his screeching. I Don't know how Brian, Justin and others ever stand him in Qaf. Micheal just hides so behind double faced lies. Emmett is infact a beautiful example of Proud Queen. Micheal should take lessen how to be Mature. More imp. from Justin & Brian.

"Trinity of Twatry" lol. Emett right, Baby is genius. Suberb! writing. Enjoyed it. Hugs❤

& Whatever Carl thinks, hope it works out. Curious that How will Lindsay & Micheal & Joan (twerking Dumba*** trio) will react of knowing Brian & Justin being Out of their reach with Mel, Gus, Peter, John.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2019 12:42 am Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

Love how you manage to get everyone into this chapter along with wonderful information.  Though I do miss finding out what's going on with Brian and Melanie as well as the kids.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2019 10:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 26: DUN, DUN, DUH, DUNG, DUMBBBB…

I do hope Lindsay does try to use Justin for Alienation of Affection cause it will look good in the press when she is charged for Attempted Murder and Accessory Before the Fact, Child Endangerment, Stalking and Blackmail plus a host of others now that she is about to be arrested again.

Carl would be smart to.get this arrest in tropical and on video.

whomever helped Vance and Lindsay better have an excellent lawyer in retainer because they will pay.

Joan should stop dreaming and just go back to her bottle because when Brian and the courts get through with he she won't have to worry about praying for her children's sins cause hers will be quite legendary.

Nathan being told therewith about his whore/sister will protect him from the games Lindsay and Nancy will try to play, time for The Peterson Women to learn that being a Whore doesn't benefit the Whore and being Vile means eventually the tables Always turn back on you 3xs worser.

Craig is going to get quite some exercise which might protect him in prison for five seconds lol

Brian, Justin and Melanie are going to be quite surprised when they find out what is going on in Pittsburgh, of course by the time they get back their Army will be ready to arm them for battle.

Lindsay and Michael keep forgetting that Brian doesn't do anything he doesn't want to do and the fact that he doesn't want to do them is Hilarious to everyone else watching the show from the sidelines.

Thanks For the Wonderful Long Chapter just what I needed today😄

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