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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 8:14 pm Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

was reading it again and hope for an update soon

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 5:05 pm Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

I'm almost feeling bad for Gardner, having the harridan's claws on him. He should be careful as if she can't have Brian, she will have to find a new source of income and support.

Author's Response:

Claire! THANK YOU SO MUCH for the 200TH review on this work in progress!! OMG! I can't even tell you how excited I am that it's continuing to be enjoyed!

I almost feel the same way regarding Gardner. You can almost admire his willingness to go the extra mile in whatever he puts his mind to. I mean he must have had to do that several times to have made Vanguard into the company it is, right? However, he should really rethink his strategy when dealing with his cunning cohort. Lindsay is even more driven in her goals than Gardner is. Perhaps he'll see that... But then again, when you make your bed in Hell, be prepared to get burned up by the hot coals!



Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 1:04 pm Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Hmm, another great update. Thank you! Those little fingers of yours aren't getting any rest... but that's okay... we are reaping the REWARDS!

Lindsay, Lindsay... you will NEVER be, or NEVER were in contention to being Mrs B.A. Kinney. Get that through your head. Also, if Gardner was smart... he'd realize the ONLY reason Lindsay would want to be Mistress of the Manor, is because of the hefty bank account and clout attached to it. At least he has her in the guest house. but if Gardner thinks his WASP wife won't have proof of infidelities... he's an even bigger idiot.

Michael. Is. An. Idiot. Does he NOT realize that you are NOT supposed to speak the truth to your counselor if you are trying to get them to being your boyfriend? Even if it's under false pretensions. The way Ben spoke to Michael, maybe he's taking Cynthia's words to heart. But WHY did he bail Michael out in the first place? That part just doesn't make sense to me. Where was Deb?

If Michael thinks he is so much better for Brian because he was there during the years he was abused... well, that's a good reason not to be. He has a hard time seeing the Brian that is an adult, capable of love, and not the detached boy that didn't want to be close to anyone. Brian doesn't want sympathy or hero worship.

And is it Justin Taylor's fault Emmett and Ted are no longer speaking to him?  HOW can he place that blame at Justin's feet? It sounds to me that Justin, Emmett and Ted should ALSO get restraining orders. Along with Mel and one for Gus. Yeah... I don't trust the little bastard.

Brian and Justin need one against Lindsay, too.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 10:26 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

thanks for update

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 4:21 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Once over the obsession with show, one see how vain, immature is Micheal, Lindsay and Deb characters are. Can not get over their pathetic attempt to interfere between Brian & Justin.

Absolutely No Mercy or Pity whatever gonna happen to Moron Micheal & Lunatic Lindsay (worst excuses for friends ever). Brian, Justin are better without them. Wonderful written.

Hugs ðŸ™‚

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 3:37 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Oh Gardner is going to find out in excruciating detail that when you think with your dick you lose brain cells and they come with a hefty price tag.

Lindsay is about to learn that being the mystery of occasional bedmate isn't fun when all your dirty laundry is aired for every to read it watch to their heart's content.

Michael thinks (Ha Funny) that Justin is like Lindsay but if have her really took the time to get to know Justin he would see that Justin doesn't want everything handed to him,he wants to earn his way and find fulfillment in being a success as an artist not the wife of a successful man.

Lindsay like Michael wants Brian to take care of her while Brian wants a lover, partner, friend and some day husband who is his equal in intellect and drive to succeed.

Brian will screw a beautiful moron but he will never see them as his equal as his best friends Michael and Lindsay should know that but they are too wrapped up in the desire to admit the truth.

What the Hell does Michael know about being an abused child he grew up loved with Debbie and Vic, seeing a few bruises doesn't mean he has one iota what life is like for an abused, unwanted child.

Ben would be smart to walk away before his IQ starts to drop.

Yes can't wait for Brian, Justin, Mel and the kids to get back to drop their enemies in the garbage where they belong.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 3:34 am Title: CHAPTER 28: RELEASING THE CAGED BIRDS

Sadly Lindsay and Michael think they are entitled to things that they aren't.  Even people pointing the truth out doesn't work.

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