Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2018 7:22 am Title: Chapter 19: WHEN MAKING A DEAL WITH THE DEVIL...

Lindsey and Gardner together: that meas disaster in preparation.

Nancy out of her home is the best thing Ronald has done in years; why did he wait so long while they were married for more than 25 years? Lynette is certainly more than 30 years old.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2018 1:32 am Title: Chapter 19: WHEN MAKING A DEAL WITH THE DEVIL...

Lindsay showed Brian how to behave and succeed?

What the Hell is she smoking?

Brian didn't need Lindsay to show him anything and she needs to realize that for all her tricks and schemes Brian Will Never Chose Her!!!

Mommy may have taught her to play dirty but she Damn Sure Didn't Teach Her How To Win!!!!!

Lindsay working?

That's funny especially since Cynthia won't let Lindsay or Gardener anywhere near Brian, doesn't mean she can't have any fun playing with their small minds right?

Ronald left Nancy with six grand and since Lindsay isn't his flesh and blood then he doesn't owe her anything either.

Ronald got his dignity back and thanks to that clause and Nancy's inability to be faithful he is free to live his own life without those two leeches around his neck.

Not surprised Joan doesn't know where her grandsons are was more concerned about her next drink than those kids.

Hope they don't give Brian and Justin too much of a headache and that they can start to bridge the divide between them.

The Next chapter is going to be very interesting :)

Author's Response:

Blue,

It's bad when you're working with a character who makes you wonder if you belong in a mental hospital while channeling their thoughts. Lindsay is such a character, and yet, she's completely sane in her rationale even within the foolishness she believes. Same goes for Nancy. I just can't wait for Lindsay to start working at Vanguard *evil grin and rubbing hands*

Writing these women this way, I can honestly say that Joan is the broke man's Nancy Peterson. Talk about NOT winning any 'Mother of the Year' awards...SMH. Both are of the 'children should be seen and not heard until their useful' mentality...and they will both pay for their neglect in very different ways. I'm very glad that Ron got away from Nancy, even if it was past time. We haven't seen the last of him or his new allies.

Happy Reading,

~Nichelle