Date: Jan 22, 2018 7:05 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER SEVEN: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS Part 1: WHEN A PINSCHER BECOMES A POODLE
What a chapter!
So many things I loved: the "Assholitis", Cynthia's testimony, Jennifer and Brian, the way the judge put Hobbs Sr in his place.
The stress with Chris in the restroom: I bet Craig called Chris to ask him to threaten Justin and his call was tracked.
Can't wait for the next part!
Happy writing!
Date: Jan 22, 2018 4:49 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER SEVEN: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS Part 1: WHEN A PINSCHER BECOMES A POODLE
Wow!! 2 chapters!! So excited to see. What an interesting coule of chapters! Man oh man....the legths people will go to try to undermine and destry Brian and Justin.
Was so proud of Justin!! He showed amazing strength when confronted by both Lindsey and Michael as well as Chris! (that was pretty intense!) Pretty sure Craig was mesaging Chris re: Justin, thus he knew where to find him. Mel et al were obviously thinking the same thing as the phone is being traced. Can't wait to see what happens with that little tid bit of information.
Needless to say, they are all going DOWN and in a big way1 there will be no recovering for any of them. Not only will their professional lives be destroyed, so will their personal. (at least more than it already it) Pretty sure jail time will be in the works for them all as well! Me thinks the judges involved won't take to kindly to the lengths these assholes will go to to destry B&J.
Can't wait to see what all you have up your sleeve for everyone in this! Loving the gorwth in B&J, both as individiuals as well as a couple. It's lovely to watch. As much as we all hatge the duplicitous behaviour of Brian's so called "best friends" I am so enjoying, and am anticiapting their throrough smackdown even more. How far will they go? What will be the end result for them? Wondering if an entire new wing in the local prison should be build just for the entire crew of people out to get B&J. ;)
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2018 4:21 am Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER SEVEN: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS Part 1: WHEN A PINSCHER BECOMES A POODLE
This is coming out so good. I love how protective Brian is. The intrigue is intriguing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2018 4:11 am Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER SEVEN: STOMPING WITH THE BIG DOGS Part 1: WHEN A PINSCHER BECOMES A POODLE
My Goodness there are a lot of people out to destroy Brian and Justin, and a lot of people who are going to down with this sinking ship.
Chris was stupid to try to intimidate Justin but Justin showed him that he isn't easily intimidated by anyone anymore.
Everything Cynthia said on the stand is true and is an accurate description of who Brian's friends really are.
And Brian's revelations has shown him what friendship and family really is, cause now he has true friendships and a family who love him without conditions like Justin always did.
Cynthia and Marcia are eviscerating everyone Craig is associated with and we haven't even gotten to Brian and Justin's testimonies yet.
Is Joan and Claire involved in this conspiracy too?
Wow!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2018 11:12 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER SIX: PRELUDE TO A DISS
Wonderful chapter. I am so looking forward to reading about the trial.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2018 10:02 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER SIX: PRELUDE TO A DISS
Damn That Was One Of The Most Epic Bitch Slaps I have ever read.
Lindsay should be ashamed of her treatment of Brian, Justin, Gus and Mel, she is so focused on having all of Brian's attention and money for herself that she has become so vile and ridiculous that she can never recover.
Michael really is her evil twin cause they will go to any lengths to have Brian and that means using Gus.
Brian and Justin have enough to deal with right now and don't need Princess Dirty Twat and her Jester Tiny Dingle making the day worse.
At least we know where Lindsay learned her revolving legs mantra from, Nancy has been spreading hers for years and I bet there are a lot of so called frienemies and true enemies are enjoying spread around the stories.
Shavonne should really have a judge sign the papers because Michael and Lindsay aren't going to stop.
Mel needs to get Gus and herself away from Lindsay and her evil attention seeking plans.
Leda is a Wasp and a very powerful one?
If she, Shavonne and Jennifer were to get together the damage they could do in Pittsburgh alone <shivers>
Can't wait for the case to start :)
Date: Jan 17, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS
Amazing chapter! So happy they took this step.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2018 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS
Nice to see that everyone is keeping an eye on Justin to make sure the baddies don't get their way. Especially like how Brian does it.
Date: Jan 17, 2018 4:52 am Title: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS
So glad to get this chapter. It’s been awhile.
Really loved how you wrote their second first time. It was beautifully done.
Date: Jan 17, 2018 2:45 am Title: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS
Omg that was so special! I know there were great moments in the beginning of this chapter but all I can see is this last, beautiful interaction between our boys. God I loved it!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2018 12:31 am Title: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS
What a way reconfirm their relationship and give Justin some more of his power back.
It was Hot, Sexy and a Beautiful Moment between Brian and Justin.
Michael is an idiot with a giant ego he has never hear and his head really needs to be popped so his brain can breathe.
Lindsay also has an arrogance she has never earned and her heart makes the Antarctic look like Florida.
Whatever their plans are it will fail because they are dumber Tom in a Tom and Jerry cartoon.
Craig and Chris are going to wish they had slept in another country tomorrow lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2018 12:00 am Title: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS
Wow thanks for shout out😘
Once again you have me feel like I was standing there watching/listening to the most heart felt moment for the boys. I feel like a voyeur 😇😎
Really the dummies really need to get a reality check.
I will love to see Shavonne give Lindsey a smack down and claim Mel as hers when all is said and done.
Thank you for update love
~teresa~
Date: Jan 16, 2018 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 15: WORDS VERSUS ACTIONS
I never thought a sex scene could drive me to tears. It was hot...it was beautiful and it was magical for them both. What a lovely moment for them!
Fabulous smack down of Michael and Lindsey both. Brilliant1 Really glad that Deb recognized the fact that she had some growing to do as well. that she held back on coddling her son. she new she couldn't and she was right. he would take advantage of it.
Lindsey...well, Obviously she's not to be trusted either. Not sure what she's up to but it can't be good.
Tomorrow at the trial should be intersting. Hopefully it will be cathartic for Justin. That all goes well and that Craig's lawyer doesn't pull too much shit. that Justin candeal with it. He's stronger than he realizes!
Brilliant chapter and soooooooooo glad to see an update!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 14, 2017 11:05 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: PROGRESS Part 2
Love Brian's patience with Justin...who would believe it but us
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2017 9:17 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: PROGRESS Part 2
Yes, lets get this party started.
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2017 9:16 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FIVE: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 2
Shame Dixon didn't get a chance to talk with Perkins. He would have known that he didn't stand a chance against Melanie and Shavonne.
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2017 9:14 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FOUR: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 1
I enjoyed this chapter a lot, but when did Ted get arrested?
Author's Response:
Hey Phyllis,
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Ted was arrested in Chapter 11 after his encounter in the bookstore with Howard Bellweather aka Bedwetter.
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2017 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 13: PROGRESS Part 1
Looks like Michael isn't the only one in trouble. Craig has been caught out and now he's lost it all.
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 12: DISCLOSURE
I'm loving this story. This is the way it should have gone.
Date: Sep 17, 2017 5:46 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: PROGRESS Part 2
Awwwww so sweet! Go Justin! I've missed this story my dear Nichelle! Can't wait for more!
Date: Sep 17, 2017 8:03 am Title: CHAPTER 14: PROGRESS Part 2
Apart from the beginning with Lindsey, this is a positive, life-affirming chapter. The sun is starting to rise on Liberty Avenue.
Brian has brilliant ideas to get Justin out of the loft, even one that "sacrifices" his really protected ass.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2017 11:08 pm Title: CHAPTER 14: PROGRESS Part 2
Another fantastic chapter. Looks like Justin is coming along well. Love how Ted is the one to make him laugh. It's good to see that. I notice that Lindsay wasn't at the park.
Date: Sep 16, 2017 3:46 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FIVE: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 2
And you shouldn't sacrifice quality for the sake for quantity my dear! Well done again! I love that Shavonne! You go girl and keep going! Bringing everyone involved down where they belong! This just gets juicier & juicier...love it!
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2017 2:19 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FIVE: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 2
Yes, Dixon finally got what he deserved.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2017 2:11 pm Title: SIDEBAR CHAPTER FOUR: JUSTIN HAD IT RIGHT Part 1
This has indeed tied up some loose ends that we needed. Love how Mel went after Perkins with the help of St. James' attorney.