Date: Jan 04, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh oh, great start. I wonder what their reaction will be to finding out about Justin.
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was an amazing story! I loved Ryder! Can we please have some more of his fairytales and pranks!
Seeing Lindsey and Michael get left with nothing in the end was poetic justice. Nice job with keeping them as the center of chaos and drama. (I'm a huge fan of Amit- Michael and anti-Lindsey tales).
you have so many places to go within this universe you put our favorite characters into, can't wait to see where you take us next!
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2017 7:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Another fantabulous story! You really can create full personalities for your characters! Thank you for sharing with us. Sooo love Ryder - would love to see him in future fics. ðŸ˜
Date: Jan 01, 2017 2:56 am Title: Chapter 1
As usual you write perfectly... â¤ï¸ â¤ï¸ â¤ï¸'d it. Looking forward to the next one.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's too bad that Jenny isn't biologically Brian's instead of Michael's, like if Lindsay, at the last second before inseminating Mel, had switched out Michael's material for Brian's, then Brian could take both kids from the girls Mel might have a shot at redemption , but Michael and Lindsay are lost causes. And I'm so glad Emmett is back to his old self!!!! And Daphne is on the way !!!! The terrible trio better watch out!!!!! All kinds of excitement coming our way, I can't wait !!!!!
Date: Dec 09, 2016 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I saw there were mulitple chapters to this story,but the way this chapter progressed, I was wondering if I had been wrong... Such a good set up. I'm guessing the rest of the story is about dealing with the "family" finding out about Brian's real family...
Bring it on!
Date: Dec 07, 2016 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
So so good. I keep checking every 30 mins for an update. So looking forward to more from one of my favourite authors.
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 06, 2016 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
VERY excited to see the start of a new fic! You are a writing machine! Am so grateful to be on the receiving end. I love being able to take a little bit of time out of my day to soak up a new chapter in one of yoru stories. It's always a time I look forward to.
This new one looks like it's going to be a very fun read! There are so many of us who are sluts for anti-Michael/Lindsey/Mel etc., however you choose to portray them.
I really like how you've started it. Brian is already looking for something more meaningful. He's already matured, and Justin isn't an innocent either. Both are at a point where they know what they want, and are willing to work for it together. None of the angst we see in canon. I like this idea. Now it's just the crap from the others; Michael, Lindsey and Mel. I like how they've had 5 years to become a very strong couple; that Justin is fully aware of what those 3 are like, and quite possibly what to expect. They are solid, so the shit those 3 try to pull won't be as effective as they hope. they don't have the influence over Brian that they want, they won't be able to manipulate Justin as he's already has strength of character. Yup...I get the impression there will be a lot of shenanigans in this fic and I can't wait.
I LOVE how Ted is Brian's confidant and that Deb is on his side as well, Jen and Molly as well. With this kind of support network, the threesome don't stand a chance.
Am obviously concerned about Emmett's relationship with Calvin. I hope that Emmett's real friends are able to help him. Emmett at this point, like Brian said, needs to get his flame going again. I think though that his friends also need to make him see that this Calvin guy is no good. Something needs to happen so that Emmett ignites once again. HmmmmmmmI wonder if Justin will have a hand in that? :)
It seems Michael isn't the devoted Dad to Jenny in this one as we've previously seem. I guess Mel got her wish, yet they both expect Brian give them $$ hand over fist. He's put his foot down already, early on and looks like he isn't going to be manipulated.
So far so fabulous!! Off to ready chapter 2, but wanted to say how thrilled I have that you are such a prolific writer!! I so enjoy these.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 06, 2016 7:52 am Title: Chapter 1
You know Lindsey is going to go absolutely psychotic when she finds out that Brian has another biological child that she is NOT the mother of!! She always prided herself on being the mother of Brian's ONLY child . She can no longer say that. I can't wait to watch her lose her mind over it when she finds out!! Along with finding out that Brian has been with someone for the last five years AND that Gus has known this whole time ???!!! OMG, I can't wait to see what kind of crazy she comes up with!!!! I'm not worried about B&J, because they can handle whatever she dishes out!!!!!!
Date: Dec 06, 2016 7:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I like a happy Brian. Hidden Justin and sneaky Ted are all ways good.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 3:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Yaaaaa excited for the next chapter!!Sounds interesting,a feisty,fighter,little devil in a good way Justin is always my favorite!! You better watch out triple idiots here comes ur worst nightmare😈😈😈
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Love how you start this. We still have Gus, but Ted is the one who told Brian not to sign over his rights. His meeting with Justin is changed but I bet it's for the better. In one paragraph we go from meeting to spending time together to their getting married. Then we find out that Justin is wealthy and he and Brian have two kids of their own. I'm glad to see that Deb is on Brian's side. Emmett is no longer flaming and Brian doesn't want to support someone elses kid, when Melanie and Michael should be doing it. They got away with things for five years and I can't wait to see what troubles you come up with that Justin is going to fix. Loving this.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Star you have me hooked again! I love kickass!Justin stories. Mikey and Lindsey won't know what hit them.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm sooooo LOVING this already!! I abolutely adore it when Brian and Justin's relationship is their own and well established before the machinations of Michael and Lindsay start! I already know this is going to have me looking like I'm Coo-Coo for Co-Co Puffs yelling obscenities at my computer screen!
WRITE On Star!!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay a new story!!! I was so sure your double post meant that you were gone for the holidays, but no, we ha a *new* story. Yay!!!
The setup is so ripe with potential for good and bad. Justin as a successful confident wealthy man is going to want peace for Brian and he us not going to accept the "gangs" antics. Brian as a father who has shielded his family from crazy is probably not going to stand for it either. I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooo a new story and a very interesting chapter.
Mel, Lindsay and Michael are going to wish they had never been born!
Can't Wait For The Next Update :)
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooohhh! I cannot wait. What is the husband going to do.
Very strong beginning, you are spoiling us. One hit after another, I cannot get over how different each story is.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 1:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay a new going to be brilliant story...on bokshelf and am kitten/puppy dog eyeing you for quick updates....please and thank you
Date: Dec 06, 2016 1:42 am Title: Chapter 1
You've sucked me from the beginning once again! I love this already and am excited to read more. Awesome first meeting of our boys!! It's hard to believe been the trolls took so long to figure them out! Same old Michael and Lindsay!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 1:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see where you are taking us!
More please :)
Amy