Date: Jan 05, 2017 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 12
The confrontation between Blake and Michael was hilarious.
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow...You did a shit load of updates this weekend. Brilliant and thank you! So very appreciated and am enjoyng every chapter!!!
Gus, like Jenny, is a smart little thing. while talking with Ryder about the fort,all of then are fully aware that they're discussing the girls.
Oh dear. Now Jen is coming as well as Daphne.
I officially need eye bleach! O>>>M>>>>G!!!!!!!!!! What the F were you thinking!??! UGH! Michael coming onto TED like that! Jeeeez. the visuals! Blech! blake handled it well enough. I get the impression that Ted was in more of a state of shock as he didn't say much.
Mels is hearing virtually the same thing from all different sides. It finally took talking to dust to stop making excuses. To stop kidding herself that Jenny and Gus are fine. Now what though. Is she really willing to do anything about it. does she really love the kids enough? Does she love GUS enoughto do anything for him or will she only concern herself with jenny?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 12
Unbelievable! Mikey deserves a smack with a crowbar!
Mel is at least reflecting on the problem. Time will tell if she truly wants to fix it or if she just wishes she hid it better from Brian.
Daphne and Jen are on their way, it's on!
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:25 am Title: Chapter 12
Hopefully Mel changes love her
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:14 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow, another Fabulous fic. Just read the first 13 chaps. Fantastic!
Can't wait for next update, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
You are such a fast writer. I have to say that Drew, Emmett and Ryder are becoming fast favorites in this story. Little Jenny is very smart. The we get into unreality with Michael. I spit out my coke when he started to make a play for Ted in front of Blake. Wasn't he just whining about how could he keep Ben? Blake and Ted are tops in my book.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope Mel finally gets her priorities right and realizes, she doesn't have to like Brian (but she should because he is awesome lol), but he isn't the devil incarnate!
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hahaaha i can picture out the whiny's face while Blake dragging him to his car..meaning he's just all whine and talk shit bcoz Blake was smaller than him and he scared him by locking himself in the car😅😅😅😅HOT Blake on the road,Ted must feel a million bucks for being Blake's husband at the moment!!🤗🤗
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Mel better think of someway to fix what is wrong with her home life or she will lose her children, Daphne is coming along with Jennifer and Molly, it is time for her to take this situation seriously because if this is taken to court she won't like the outcome.
Blake put Michael in his place beautifully I especially like the line that Ted wouldn't want him even if his dick was on fire and Michael's salvia could put it out, that had me rolling, Michael is such a whiny little baby who wants a boy for a husband or partner when they could have a man?
Ben is smart enough to see the problems in his marriage and he is taking some time to figure out what he wants and what he is not willing to accept anymore.
I took think Ben should meet Ryder, Emmett had already found his flame and if he is lucky it will stay lit Forever.
Another Great Update:)