[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2016 5:57 am Title: Chapter 31
Merry Christmas :)
No Fair making me all teary-eyed just a few minutes before Christmas lol
That was so needed after the chaos and stupidity of so called friends and family, plus dealing with a sick child not surprised Brian finally snapped and decided to send Michael through the wall.
I don't think everyone is going to enjoy the new year but for others it will be the best year of their lives :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2016 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 30
The things I really love about this story are the characters and how it's never boring. Michael, Lindsey, Sperm donor and Brian's birth family are so stupid. Perhaps if they were hypmotised? Love it.
Date: Dec 24, 2016 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 30
Poor Brian. I think Justin needs to take care of him. Tell Ryder to watch the kids and let our boys have a nice quiet night together.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Dec 24, 2016 7:04 am Title: Chapter 30
Wow, now Joanie, Claire and John harrassing the boys. They sure didn't get far and were put in their place. Hard to understand how Joanie and Claire let John get involved with Linz (lesbian), but always bad mouthing Brian and Justin with them going to hell plus all the other. Did they not know Linz is a lesbian/bi?
Brilliant update! Know I've said it before, but so love Ryder along with Justin's extended family.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next addition.
JoAnn
Date: Dec 24, 2016 6:39 am Title: Chapter 30
Michael is living his own world!!He still believe that nothings happening about his life is not his fault??He's so dense..He thought he can scare Justin,well take what J throw at you immmature one!!
As for Brian's family,they are the biggest disappointment in his life!!After what they've done,think just like that just to double cross the other idiot Lindsay and Brian would bend on his knees and crawl to them!!
I love how Justin throw them out on his property..😘
Great Chapter again!
Date: Dec 24, 2016 6:38 am Title: Chapter 29
Wow, Linz and her daddy kicked out by mommy, way to go Nancy!
Fantastic update and fic.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2016 5:26 am Title: Chapter 30
My goodness Whiny Brats are so annoying perhaps it is Joan, Claire and John need a dose of Payback, being hounded by the press just isn't enough??
Michael needs another dose he missed the lesson last time though being chased by Drew and scurrying around in his underwear should have given him a clue. (Perhaps Michael would like the press to dig into his story??)
Do they also realize that their part in this scheme will be brought up in court and Daphne would have asked for a paternity test?
These Idiots are giving me a migraine:(
Date: Dec 23, 2016 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 29
what a freaking bitch!!!!! I can't believe she is delusional enough to think that would actually work... Claire and John and Craig for that matter would turn on a dime for a payout and she doens't have nearly enough to pay it!
Date: Dec 23, 2016 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 29
OMG!!! Lindsay is a complete nut! His nephew? Ewww. I hope she didn't really trick him. Craig is so money hungry he went along with this, what a piece of work.
You continue to go left when I expect right, thank you!!!!
Date: Dec 23, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 29
Okay, I'm back...I could not not review this chapter. It was so original. Using Brian's family...ingenious.
I am loving this story. I wonder what Michael has in store for us since Lindsay is about to give birth to Gus's cousin...is he going to marry Claire to get back at Brian and Justin?
Date: Dec 23, 2016 11:46 am Title: Chapter 29
Well Lindsay wanted to be an Attention Whore... looks like she FINALLY got her wish!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 23, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 29
OH, that was so good!!!!
I think Ryder is my favorite non QAF character. He is just something else.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2016 4:28 am Title: Chapter 29
HOLY SHIT!!
No Lindsay did not seduce John to get DNA so she could run to The tabloids to spew her garbage about being pregnant by Brian?
That is downright whorish and disgusting that poor innocent baby did not asked to be brought into this circus.
Thankfully Drew, Emmett and Ryder got the truth and now Lindsay is out on her Ass and the press is hounding her. (Turn About is Fair Play :))
Man the custody case is going to be a trip that Lindsay is not going to enjoy.
Justin sending that letter to Lindsay was Priceless she forgot don't Fuck with a Lloyd, Taylor- Kinney because when they Fuck with you back your not going to enjoy it;)
What is Michael Up To?
Date: Dec 23, 2016 3:55 am Title: Chapter 29
Wow Lindsay would go down that low just to get what she wants but i guess she didn't expect anything to backfire..So this is what she was talking about what she's done to get Brian to forgive,but she didn't realize she's making it worst!!Good for you Nancy standing up against daughter which is good if its because of what she's doing but as usual bcoz you just don't want to get embarrassed..Now that ur cunt daughter doesn't have any support who she's going to come to now,maybe made up with the whiny brat??
I want to see Justin to fight this time,it's exciting to see Daph & Jussy works together they played well and no one would suspect or notice until the person they're aiming is being hit with the storm...
Another great chapter,can't wait for the next one..Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 29
Now this was a twist I never saw coming. Love how Ryder, with the help of Drew and Emmett sussed out the truth. Ben homeschooling is a nice touch. What is Mikey up to?
Date: Dec 23, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 28
I love tough Jen. Deb and her together are dangerous. The Petersons are perfect snobs. Poor Lindsay she'll have to find another old man.
Date: Dec 22, 2016 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 28
OMG, love Jen, Deb and the rest of the family at the club.
Linz really let Mikey down, plus she is really off her rocker.
Brilliant, thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 22, 2016 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 28
I'm imagining Deb at the country club. Oh what a breath of fresh air she'd be amongst the snooty bunch. LOL. The good thing is, at least from my own experience, is that the Nancy and Ron's are really few and far between. Most of the members at the club my family and I belonged to would've thought her a hoot. A bit abrasive at times, but a hoot none the less.
That entire conversation with Nancy there was exceptional! I was in giggles reading it. Then...throw in Michael!! I just love imagining all these scenes in my mind's eye. hehehe. Michael gets told what's what by Lindsey, that she doesn't give a shit about him, and he was temporarily a means to an end. However, not surprisingly was a useless tool. I'm with Ryder here though. What is she up to? What is her reasoning for all this. What is this thing she did that she mentioned? and does she really think that Justin gives a shit about craig? Does she really thing that she effected him in any way shape or form? she's delusional!
Excellent!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 22, 2016 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 28
wow... so Lindsay isn't the star attraction, so she wants to make Brian lose everything? wow!
Date: Dec 22, 2016 10:30 am Title: Chapter 28
Oh, no what is Lindsay up to?
I love Jen and Ryder in this story. :)
Date: Dec 22, 2016 5:45 am Title: Chapter 28
I think Lindsay's parents is the biggest idiot & stupid in the whole wasp world..They don't see that their daughter is only playing them but still tolerate and encourage her??Please let them get embarrassed by the whole club for supporting their daughter'stupidity..And what now,the bitch is talking something about what she's done,what was that about i'm curious now??
Oòoooh it's on,Lindsay versus Michael, i'm excited about how the whiny would get back to the cunt lesbo for crossing him??This could be very exciting..🤔🤔
Please more waspy action from Jen's side of group?
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2016 4:58 am Title: Chapter 28
Get Her Ryder!!! Make the Cow Go Fetal!! :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 28
Can't wait to see how Ryder makes Lindsay's life miserable. Keep these chapters coming.
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2016 3:29 am Title: Chapter 14
I love your creation of Ryder.... he cracks me up..."Daddy Bear" and “The force is strong in this one.” Ryder tells us and grabs Gus to tickle him.
just great!
Date: Dec 22, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 27
Fantastic!
Ben and Ryder, Ben was always too good for Mikey ( never understood their relationship even inthe series).
Let's hope Linz and her fiance get what they deserve, a big fat zero.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn