Date: Dec 15, 2016 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm loving Ryder each chapter,he's easy going,funny guy and became the father and a hero to Jenny..Mel should just sell.the house and leave Lindsay while they don't hate each other that much and just fucos her time on her kids until they forgive her..Let Michael and Lindsay fend for themselves who cares about them anyway..
Another great chapter!!
Date: Dec 15, 2016 4:10 am Title: Chapter 17
Go Ted! Fantastic!
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 14, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 17
Be for real Mel!
Seriously Mikey is so delusional... he is told straight out and just doesn't want to believe it! Asshat!
Date: Dec 14, 2016 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 17
So I went back and re-read this in it's entirety last night. I admit that I had almost come to the conclusion that Mel was up to something. That her recent attempt at reconciliation with the kids was some sort of ploy. I think though, that after reading this chapter, I can believe in her sincerity. That she really does want this, and there's no malicious intent involved. Daphne isn't going to give her any chances anyway and of course, neither will Justin. Mel I think is finally going to start being honest with herself now, and is realizing that Brian is not the enemy. I am glad that she realized what Daphne was saying about being a parent. The law will always be there, but the kids won't be. Her prioroties have been completely scewed. For the kid's sake, I hope she's able to change those going forward.
thank you for clearing up the whole insurance policy issue. I really didn't like that Mel was questioning Brian on that. It's his policy and his choice how to look after it. Period.Now we know it was actually Lindsey who was looking into it. Obviously it was to find a way to somehow get $$. Thankfully that can't happen.
More family is arriving at Britin. I'm liking Uncle Matt and I'm pretty sure Brian is adoring him atm. :) Who wouldn't?
So tired of Michael's continued "always has always will" crap. does he say it in his sleep? Honestly? when a person is faced with certain things time and time again, wouldn't one, at some point, reasonably assume it be treu? How many times does Michael have to be told NO or that Brian DOESN"T love him. That at this point barely tolerates him. that Brian stays away on purpose. He seems to find away to make excuses for Brian saying or doing the things he does. or that he needs to fly in and save Brian from the evil Justin. *insert eye roll here*. At least he seems to have come to the conclusion that he's going to give up on Ted. Thank goodness for small mercies. Looks like the only person that he's going to have is Lindsey, and even she only barely puts up with him, and only because she's able to manipulate him so easily. He's a basically a puppet.
thanks for this! Readingthis update was a nice break from the doldrums at work.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 14, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 17
I need an Uncle Matt in my life😀. I am so glad that Mel got her head out of Lindsay's ass. Could Michael be any dumber?
Another great update.
[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 17
Meeting Uncle Matt is a treat. Justin has some great people in his family. Now Mikey needs to see a head doctor. He's fixated on one thing and one thing only.
Date: Dec 13, 2016 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
Daph is on the scene. Let's hope Mel starts to put Jenny first. Love Ryder, hope he and Ben connect. Can't wait to see what is in store for Linz and Mikey.
Fantastic, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 13, 2016 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh thank goodness Emmett stood his ground with Calvin. That was fantastic! Emmett realizes his worth, as well as teh value of his true friends. Calvin is outa there! Weel, for now anyway. we'll have to see if he tries anything further. He seems to have the same sense of self worth as Michael and Lindsey have. Definiltey and over inflated ego. Drew.......well, he sure did deflate that didn't he. The neighbour's reactions was frigging hilarious! Was laughing my ass off over that! Granny's even getting a new car out if it! Definitely worth Calvin face planting it into her old one. LOL! Calvin's come backs were just so jeuvenile! I mean really....."Make me" and "I'm not scared of you...." Ugh! Reminds me of grade school. It's no wonder he and Michael are friends.
Mel, while her intentions may be to "fix" things, her expectaions are out of whack. She's upset because the kids won't talk to her. What does she expect? And sadly, she's still making excuses. The" I have to work" crap will only go so far. Majority of people have to work, het our kids are still out #1. Seems that her work is her #1. She's still not taking full responsibility, but I hope she's sincere in her intentions. That she'll start taking the right steps in doing what's right for her kids. Up till now, she's been the worst kind of vindictive bitch. she's had so many people on the periferal warn her about what she and Lindsey are ultimately doing to their kids. I really hope she starts doing right by them. That her ego doesn't get in the way.
DAPHNE'S HERE!! Oh let teh games begin! she's not going to let ANTONE fuck with Justin or Brian and lord help anyone to tries! And what an interesting plot twist! that her hubby owns the gallery that Lindsey is wanting to apply to!? BWAHAHAHA! Oh man..........I absolutely CANNOT WAIT to see what's going to come of all this!
AMAZING!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 13, 2016 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Ryder did what we've ALL wanted to do. I must say though, I was completely gutted though. but then again, so was he. The fact he was able to take on Jenny's pain.....A deeply deeply emotional part.
Lyndsey got fired. No surprise. Also not surprising that she want to the Nichols Gallery. There's no way she's going to get an in there though. The very idea is laughable!
speaking of laughable...that Michael thinks he should continue to pursue Ted...that Lindsy is encouraging him...wow......Looking forward to blake kicking his ass. Also want to see Ted lose it on Michael as well. We all knew these 2 were delusional....but seriosuly?!?! The level they're at now is jaw-dropping!
Terrific chapter! Highly emotional and they you eased it with ultimate hilarity!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 13, 2016 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad Mel is doing what she has to do and putting the kids first... totally understandable that she is going to be in a difficult position with Lindsay and Michael, but the kids first.
and I love Drew taking care of asshat Calvin!
Ryder and Jenny are my favorite couple! lol
Date: Dec 13, 2016 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 16
*Snicker* **Chuckles** ***Laughing*** ****LMAO**** *****ROFLMAO***** Those are all of the emotions I had during the contretemps between Em, Drew and Cunty Calvin!! OMG!!! The visuals of Calvin beating the hell out of himself and the neighbors' reactions.....SMH I ended up with the hiccups trying to catch my breath from laughing!
I really love Justin like this! He's strong and isn't willing to let anyone get away with excuses for idiotic behavior. However, I am also glad that Ben was there to temper Justin's conversation with Mel. He knows what Mel has endured being married to a selfis, self-absorbed and obsessed person since he's had to live through the same kind of trauma being involved with Michael. Both Lindsay and Michael expect to be taken care of and then emotionally abuse the people who are fulfilling their needs. I'm glad that Ben has resolved to get out while his sanity and self-esteem are still in tact. Hopefully Mel will do the same and find her self-worth again. As much as I hate her actions, I can understand why she felt as if she was always fighting against the shadow of Brian Kinney. I agree with Ben. Mel needs to sell the Harridan Hotel that was once Muncher mansion and MOVE ON.
So happy that Daph is there!! I loved the greeting with Justin and the fact that despite the success and motherhood, she is still the same "Ride or Die Hard" BFF. Her and Ryder's interaction was too hilarious!! But it was completely done without malice and their mutual respect for each other was obvious. I think if Mel isn't as honest as she can be with Daphne, Daph is going to destroy her anyway simply for daring to mess with Brian and Justin for all these years. As for Lindsay, I really can't wait for that clash. In addition to that, Lindsay is calling Gary up a storm to try and get next to Justin..SMH Lawd Ham Turkey that she-wolf is NUTS! I really can't wait to see what happens when she is told 'NO' in reference to working with Justin. For now though, I'm relieved that she doesn't know where they live....yet Please don't let Em, Ben, Ted, Mel or Deb spill that information to the Dumber-ment Twins.
Looking forward to the next update!
WRITE On Star!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2016 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 16
Fantastic chapter. Loved how the neighbors sided with Emmett. Drew is very generous. Mel seems to have mellowed. Looks like things from that angle are working out. Love how Ryder is making Jenny feel good about things.
Date: Dec 13, 2016 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow Daphne blunt as always and doesn't sugar coat everything..Good for you Lindsay,you baiting yourself into the trap of ur own enemy.What do you know you're trying to manipulate your worst enemy's husband😀😀can't wait for you to meet Daphne🤗🤗
I'm loving Ryder every chapter he's in,he became the father figure and a hero to Jenny..
And that's right Justin,don't be so soft on everything!Know how to be a hard person sometimes..
Date: Dec 13, 2016 2:32 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow so under the joker and not-to-serious kind of guy Ryder has a parent side hidden within himself..I love how he cares too much of Jenny's situation..Ben you don't have to think just go for it Ryder is worth it..ðŸ˜ðŸ¤—
Lindsay really think she can manipulate Justin into giving up on Brian and worst plotting with the whiny rat,seriously?!!
Another great chapter!
Date: Dec 13, 2016 2:26 am Title: Chapter 15
Fantastic! Hope Mel is really wanting to better herself for Jenny and not just putting on a show. Would love to see Ryder and Ben get together.
Linz and Mikey need to be shipped to Siberia or to another planet.
Justin's family are all so kind and loving.
Mikey better watch out, Blake won't be so kind next time.
Thanks for sharing, eager for next update.
JoAnn
Date: Dec 13, 2016 2:04 am Title: Chapter 15
I love how much Ryder has taken to being Jenny's knight!
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 15
I agree with everything Ryder said to Mel, sure now she admits that something is wrong with the kids, but she is still refusing to face the problems, I wish there was some way for Ryder to take Jenny that child would understand like Gus does what it feels like to be cherished and loved with the freedom to be a child and not afraid to make friends.
I want to give Mel the benefit of the doubt but she has to admit to all the problems including her animosity to Brian and how that makes Gus feel.
I just love Ryder he is funny, sweet and I bet that kiss he laid on Ben has him half way through the door.
Can't wait for everyone else to show up this is going to be so much fun.
Lindsay might want to reconsider calling Justin's agent and trying to get involved with his career, Justin would just love to rip her a new asshole and the agent will hold her down while Justin does it.
Michael should stick to comic books at least those he actually has a chance of scoring, cause if he comes near Ted again Blake is going to ram that tire iron up his Ass!! lol
Date: Dec 13, 2016 12:57 am Title: Chapter 15
I want to be a princess and have a castle.
Date: Dec 13, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 15
Oh, little Jenny just breaks your heart. I envy her tho because I could totally use Ryder in my life. He is her hero. And like Brian I still don't believe Mel but I am suspending my disbelief.
Blake is going to end up showing Mikey new uses for a tire iron. And someone should warn Lindsay that Justin isn't a kid or easy. I have a feeling trying to get involved in his career is a terrible idea.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2016 12:33 am Title: Chapter 15
Ryder would make a great dad and he's pissed at Mel. It now looks like they are building two castles? Lindsay's ideas for getting close to Justin will not work. Michael lost Ben, he's lost Ted, he's about to lose his daughter. Is he and Lindsay the trash that Drew is helping Emmett with?
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 14
First off.No boundaries for Ryder! Nope! None!! Let the man go for broke! Far too enjoyable! HAHHA!
Now there's Mel. OK...comingin through the bedroom window....WAY too creepy for words! while I'm thrilled that she's finally seeing herself for the selfish C-word that she is, I'm just hopig that the damage that she's already done is fixable. How far is she willing to go on order to make amends? Glad she spoke with Ben, even more so that Ben is there out of concern for the kids, adn isn't taking anything Mel says or does at face value. Whatever happens, he's going to protect the kids. Period. A bit nervous as to what's going to happen next. while I certainly hope she's being honest adn intends to get her shit together, I also hope that Jenny is able to stay at Britin with Gus. Brian adn Justin will fight tooth adn nail to keep Gus withthem, but they really don't have a leg tostand on when it comes to Jenny.
Eager to see where all those goes.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
The story Ryder told Jenny was just the sweetest ever!
Drunk Michael. just what they need tonight. He still seems to be on the "Hit on Ted" train. He really is a pathetic little mad isn't he? But oh my goooooooooooooodness!! Ryder done good! As much as I had imagining Michael is his "near nothings", I have to say, it's something I still would've loved to have seen. Remember underoos? Yup...those. Perfectly pictured in my head. Made my ightreading that! So perfect! and runnign into the diner to boot. Brilliant!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow...You did a shit load of updates this weekend. Brilliant and thank you! So very appreciated and am enjoyng every chapter!!!
Gus, like Jenny, is a smart little thing. while talking with Ryder about the fort,all of then are fully aware that they're discussing the girls.
Oh dear. Now Jen is coming as well as Daphne.
I officially need eye bleach! O>>>M>>>>G!!!!!!!!!! What the F were you thinking!??! UGH! Michael coming onto TED like that! Jeeeez. the visuals! Blech! blake handled it well enough. I get the impression that Ted was in more of a state of shock as he didn't say much.
Mels is hearing virtually the same thing from all different sides. It finally took talking to dust to stop making excuses. To stop kidding herself that Jenny and Gus are fine. Now what though. Is she really willing to do anything about it. does she really love the kids enough? Does she love GUS enoughto do anything for him or will she only concern herself with jenny?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
The whole fort vs. castle dialogues lately are a hoot adn a half! Once again, you bring out humour in it's simplest form, but one that is just so gosh darn enjoyable.
Justin adn Mel's chat proved to be intersting and slightly humerous. Justin's continued testing with Brian throughout, proved how little interest he has in Mel's excuses. Sorry, but what she said about Brian's history of abuse...I wanted to reach through and rip her head off. Mel, like Brian, isn't one to take threats lightly. justin's ultimatum...wondering if she will take it seriously. IF she doesn't, well, she has no idea what shes' up against. Not really. she gets he has $$, but she thinks herself so important, she may assume she's on teh same playing field as Daphne. Can i just say BAHAHHAHAHA to that. :)
Michael Michael Michael...wow. that mouth if his is just mind boggling. It's like there's ZERO connectivity between his logical brain and his mouth. No filter. As much as I hurt for Ben, I'm glad he over heard what Michael said. Now he knows for sure. Michael, like Lindsey and Mel is a selfish little asshole.
Like in all your stories...I can't wait till these three get theirs. They deserve every bad thing that happens to them.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
So glad that our beloved Emmett is back to being himself again. I don't think Calvin is going to let it end like that, but whatever....Not like he can do anything with Emmett surrounded by Ryder, Drew and the rest. In fact...bring it on!! LOL!!
I am absolutely LOVING Ryder! (am enjoying how you are using names fron canon and just makingentirely new characters.)
Jenny is pretty smart isn't she. What a great analogy as well for a relationship. Nothing is going to get by this girl and lord help them all when she's a teen! HAHA. Nice to see her comfortable enought to talk and interact with everyone rather than just Gus.
omg......my heart continues to break for Gus. Those so-called Mothers need to be drawn adn quartered. So wrapped up in themselves....so fucking self-involved that they don't see what they're doing to their children. Mel's attitude towards Gus is beyond disgusting! she's allowed her hatred for Brian to influence her feelings for Gus! Oh I hope she gets nailed to the wall for that! she and Lindsey both. I hope teh kids get taken away from them, at least until they sort themselves out, but in all honesty, I'm not sure they can. They are both too selfish for that.