[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 6:13 am Title: Chapter 9
Justin knows just how to take care of his man. Emmett's met the love of his life. Now just where does Ryder come in?
Date: Dec 11, 2016 6:06 am Title: Chapter 8
If i were Brian i would let them lose everything and fight custody for the kids..Poor Gus shouldering the problems at home..
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 3:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Boy, Melanie is asking for it. Gus is the best big brother and I hope Jenny finds a home that she doesn't have to run from. Lindsay isn't going to be seeing where Brian lives any time soon.
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 1:13 am Title: Chapter 8
Mel may love Jenny but she loves being right and beating Brian more it has gotten to the point where her hatred for Brian has now turned her against Gus.
She is seeing Gus as her enemy instead of the child she helped to raise, how can he respect either of his mothers when they don't respect him.
Lindsay is using Gus as a tether to Brian in her fantasy quest and a cash cow to get more money from Brian, Mel is using Gus as a weapon to hurt Brian and exhort money from him too.
Michael just sees Brian as his superhero, surrogate father figure and the lifestyle he will never have because he was too much of a coward to take a chance and he enjoys the benefits of being Brian Kinney's best friend and constant shadow. (Even a dog enjoys leftovers when he is denied a place at the table)
None of them have noticed that Brian is no longer playing their childish games he found his happiness and no one is taking that away.
If they were smart they would stop but the Three Stooges don't know the meaning of the word, so they should be prepared to deal with consequences.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 8
I can't believe Mel doesn't see how bad it is. She genuinely loves Jenny, but shame on her for NOT loving Gus and it shows
Date: Dec 10, 2016 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
I am torn between wanting to keep you here forever giving me my anti-Michael anti-Lindsay fix and insisting you go and become the next Fifty Shades success(only with actual a plot and relatable characters).
On to the review...I am feeling so bad for poor Jenny and just want to wrap her up and get her away from those two psychos (3 if we include Michael).
You go Deb and Carl taking care of their granddaughter.
Loving Brian telling it like it is to those two idiots.
Can't wait for the next update
Date: Dec 10, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
That was terrifying! Without the description of where she was and the man showing up, I was so frightened. I probably won't be 100% sure she's ok until I read that Carl picked her up and took her to Grandma for some ice cream.
Emmett being able to say clearly what's been done to him but refusing to change it until now makes sense. People can in fact recognize a trap and still fall in it. I hope Drew is just what he needs.
Linds and Mel, some of the low blows were real zingers.
Brian building a fort, lol, I love it!!
[Delete] [Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2016 6:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Damn, who thought a little girl could get so far on her own. Thank goodness she had a phone to call Gus. Enjoying this a lot.
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:46 am Title: Chapter 7
Okay I am all kinds of pissed at Melanie and Lindsay for not paying attention to Jenny, calling her a drama queen and not noticing that she ran away, they are so selfish and really don't deserve to have children.
Thankfully soon Jenny will be safe with her grandparents though, Mel and Lindsay won't be safe from The Grandparents. (Jenny calling Brian Mr. Brian is cute:))
Now the argument between Mel and Lindsay was funny as Hell they both took a strip out of each other, of course that is nothing compared to what Justin is going to do to them.
Glad that Emmett is talking to Justin and seeing that Calvin is not who he wants to be with, Ben also got him to see that mental abuse is just as hurtful as physical abuse (Ben is opening his eyes to the abuse Michael is giving him too), Emmett is opening up slowly hopefully the next few days will help him see that he is worth more than being a doormat to Calvin, also hope maybe a hot football player will help reignite his flame lol
Loving the flow of this story :)
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:14 am Title: Chapter 7
I hope Carl gets there and makes sure the girls do not take her home... such selfish bitches!
Whereas Brian, Justin and even Gus, Ben and Em think of Jenny first, the women only see her as a drama queen or a way to split up Brian and Justin... pathetic
Date: Dec 09, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
I so love the "boys" hiding out at Casa Kinney to avoid their awful relationships. This crew is gonna be strong!!!
Date: Dec 09, 2016 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
So glad Emmett is trying to get his flame back!
Date: Dec 09, 2016 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
Grovel Lindsay... do you think you'll suddenly be able to save face now?
Date: Dec 09, 2016 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad that Deb is fighting for them too... those 3 idiots have no idea what they have started!!!!
Date: Dec 09, 2016 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Mel is such a miserable bitch... what the fuck did she need to life insurance for??? she's a god damned attorney.. I never understood how she NEVER had money without Brian's help! and you chose Sir Whines Alot to be your baby daddy so he wouldn't be involved, but you STILL think Brian should pay for everything??? BITCH
Date: Dec 09, 2016 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I saw there were mulitple chapters to this story,but the way this chapter progressed, I was wondering if I had been wrong... Such a good set up. I'm guessing the rest of the story is about dealing with the "family" finding out about Brian's real family...
Bring it on!
Date: Dec 09, 2016 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awwww Emmett ooooh are drew and Emmet gonna get together
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
BTW- LOVE, LOVE, LOVED that 'Michael Jr.' comment from Ben! I always thought of Michael and Mel as the Yapping Chihuahuas of Season 4!
WRITE On Star!!
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
LOVE that Emmett is coming back to himself! FLAME On Em!!!!
Michael has some damn nerve with all of his entitlement and idiocy issues. Talk about a STUPIDITY leak!! How is what he has done to Emmett any different than what he was trying and is still trying to do with Brian? The difference is that Brian wouldn't let Michael dictate to him what he should want in his life whereas Em allowed himself to be easily led for the sake of having someone. I'm glad Ben is finally calling Michael on his bullshit and then got out of there. Calvin is..... WHOO I don't even have words for that ASS!
Mel and Lindsay..... Lawd ham turkey!! Lindsay is a jealous, spiteful, greedy idiot which is the perfect partner for Mel since she is as well! I really hope they try to justify trying to keep Gus away from Brian and Justin. I have a feeling there are more skeletons in their collective closet than there is in any cemetery. Not only that but what they are doing to Jenny is just plain child abuse in a sense. Michael doesn't support her but Mel's depending on Brian's money to fund hers, Lindsay's and Jenny's life. REALLY? I really think it's time for Brian and Justin to seek custody of Gus permanently and for Debbie and Carl to start invoking Granparents rights. A for the two Bitches and the Mitch, they all need to be kicked to the curb once and for all, especially the two best friends whom are really just spoiled children in adult bodies with major delusion and entitlement issues!
Can't wait for Justin, Em and Ben to really get to know each other and for the arrival of Drew and Daph!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2016 3:08 am Title: Chapter 6
Putting Gus and Jenny in between your inability to get next to Brian like you want (Lindsay) and your petty jealousy (Mel) is just going to piss Justin off more.
Keep underestimating your opponent is surely a sign that you are going to lose before the battle even commences.
Ben and Emmett are seeing what a loving relationship looks like, Brian is comfortable in his own skin and not ashamed to be affectionate in front of others, he is at peace and happy in his new life thanks to Justin and the years they had to just be themselves without outside interference.
If this goes to court Mel and Lindsay are going to wish for a hole to crawl into and die all their dirty little secrets are going to come out, no judge would award them lint to take care of, Hell an egg would be too much pressure for them.
And Michael couldn't handle time without breaking it much less a small child who needs love and understanding, he is a whiny little dork with no real interest and a marble for a brain. (Ooo maybe he should date Calvin? lol)
Can't wait to see how the weekend goes and what the Three Bitches do next? :)
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:28 am Title: Chapter 6
And I hope they get more.
Also, really hating Mel & Lindse...hopefully they will get what they deserve.
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Love, love, love your Ben. He has the right ideas. Shame they had to leave Jenny with Michael Jr. Emmett is coming around. Wonderful!
Date: Dec 08, 2016 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lindsey and Michael are about as audacious as anyone can get. The sense of entitlement is mind boggling. To think they have any rights to Brian is unbelievable! I mean really. I seriously snorted when Michael made his comment about him being more important that Justin.I can't even imagine what they will try to do. At least Lindsey understands the fine line she's walking. She knows how much influence Justin has and just what he's capable of. Seems though that with all her attempts at manipulating and pushing Brian, she's letting her responsibilies with Gus and Jenny slide. Not going to look good in any court proceedings. Something that I'm sure Daph will home in on and use to her advantage.
Emmmmmmetttttt! Oh thankfully he's slowly but surely realized what an ass Calvin is. The fact that he wants to hang out with Ben and Michael should say enough. (btw...how is Ben going to feel about everything. Hmmm curious) I cheered when Emmett kicked him out. Even happier when he called Ted. He'll go the party on the weekend and meet Drew, Justin, see the kids. I'm so happy. I only hope that Calvin is now gone, or will at least SOON be gone permanently. He can go hang out with Michael.
Excellent chapter. definitely looking forward to the journey you take us all on. Always an adventure with you and your talent!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 08, 2016 6:53 am Title: Chapter 5
I want to get inside the story and punch Michael just to get him to wake up that he's not really the most important person in Brian's life!!And Lindsay,well i'm just waiting for her turn to be a bitch that she is so that Justin can put them all to their right places...When's Daphne showing up?can't wait for the bubbly girl and yet shark like😉😉😉
Emmet that's right wake up and go back to the land of hohohomo of the always flaming queen Honeycutt!!Excited for him and Drew to meet!!
Date: Dec 08, 2016 5:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Emmett, I think I said that before but it bears repeating. It figures that Calvin likes Mike & Ben. Could Michael be more dumb?