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Name: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: Nov 08, 2021 6:46 pm · Chapter: PART 11
Great story!! I'm glad that Brian finally figured out the truth about Michael and cut him out!! The rest of the family isn't too happy with him either.


Name: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: Aug 05, 2021 6:27 pm · Chapter: PART 11
Loved the story!! And as soon as Justin started picking up signals in the comic, he new something was up, but just couldn't put his finger on it. But I am glad that it was Brian that figured it out, told him off in front of everyone and even punched him out. What was even better was no one came to his defense or even asked if he was okay. But either way, both Brian and Justin are both finished with him.


Name: coleamber (Signed) · Date: Jul 27, 2019 5:53 pm · Chapter: PART 11

Love it



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Aug 01, 2018 1:50 am · Chapter: PART 11

Not surprised Michael would do that to Brian and Justin but Ted is an idiot to help him in anyway and not warn Brian and Justin.

Even in this story Mel can't help being a Bitch she doesn't care that Gus can see and hear the way she treats Brian.

Brian was way to lenient with all of them and should've put them in their place years ago, especially Michael that little rodent.



Name: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: Jun 19, 2017 2:01 pm · Chapter: PART 11

Enjoyrd the story.

 

 

 

lah

 



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Feb 02, 2017 6:15 pm · Chapter: PART 11

What a jealous and mean friend...

At least, Brian knows Justin was right.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:51 pm · Chapter: PART 10

What plot Michael has in mind regarding the comic



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:26 am · Chapter: PART 9

Ha ha ha, this end is SO Brian!!!



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 31, 2017 10:10 pm · Chapter: PART 8

What kind of business Michael thinks he could do with Justin. Weird...



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 31, 2017 8:11 pm · Chapter: PART 7

How many hours before the clash I feel coming?



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 31, 2017 7:40 pm · Chapter: PART 6

Big step for Justin, to move back in.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 31, 2017 5:58 am · Chapter: PART 5

Now, the moms know. Let's see how the others will find out. I fear for Lindsey to make a scene...



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 30, 2017 9:31 pm · Chapter: PART 4

Whoa, that was blunt. I hope it will be effective in a good way, but I doubt it.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 30, 2017 8:54 pm · Chapter: PART 3

Good luck with dealing with Michael. He's so blind and deaf that nothing gets thru.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 30, 2017 8:37 pm · Chapter: PART 2

First trip together...



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 30, 2017 8:19 pm · Chapter: PART 1

Promising start. I think it's the first time I read a story with them "separated" after the prom.



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:31 am · Chapter: PART 11

I knew he was up to something but I never expected it to be that bad. What did he think Brian would do? Congratulate him and say it was a great idea? Dumb fuckwit. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:21 am · Chapter: PART 10

The whole Rage thing sounds bad. I hope it isn't but I'm pretty sure I'm wrong. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:11 am · Chapter: PART 9

I'm glad The show was such a success. Justin is going to be a great artist. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:00 am · Chapter: PART 8

What is Michael planning? It can't be good. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 26, 2017 11:31 pm · Chapter: PART 7

I wonder how long it will take for Michael to explode with jealousy. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 26, 2017 11:20 pm · Chapter: PART 6

I'm glad the guys are not taking sides right now. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 26, 2017 9:18 pm · Chapter: PART 5

So the moms both know. I love it. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 26, 2017 6:43 pm · Chapter: PART 4

Finally Brian stood up for himself and his relationship with Justin. Good for him. 



Name: susi_in_love (Signed) · Date: Jan 26, 2017 6:28 pm · Chapter: PART 3

It's good that Brian realizes that he needs to do something about Mikey. 



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