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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2017 11:59 am Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Awww. They are already falling for each other. I love it. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Some interesting facts here and also some funny exchanges between Brian and Justin. They are both "damaged goods" and they are sharing intimate things without sexual theme yet.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

it makes me happy that Brian is willing to make a go of this from the get go... hopefully not try to play the asshole with Justin, just let it happen!!

friggen Mikey... he will NEVER learn!

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2016 7:15 am Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

I am soooo loving it...awesome..thanks for update..😍😍😍

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Have I already mentioned how much I already LOVE Slick?! Well it certainly bears repeating! She is definitely a straight shooter from the hip of truthfulness. I wonder if she has clued Deb into how possessive and demanding Michael is of Brian while clearly neglectful of his relationships with Ben, Hunter and his daughter. Could that be why she and Deb had words exchanged? I definitely would like to know what happened the Queen of the Greasy Spoon on Liberty Ave. and the Queen of Grease Monkeys everywhere. 

I really wonder why Ben is with Michael. I've actually always wondered what the attraction was and since I really couldn't see it, I work very hard to break them up. But I digress... I wonder if it's a situation where because of his condition his self-esteem is low or that he thinks of Michael as his shoe-in to Heaven for performing a charitable work by marrying that whiny schmuck? I mean seriously. ..what the hell keeps him there because love isn't a reason for self-inflicted torture. 

As for DUMBZilla and his nosy ass Wonder Twit BITCHZilla, I wonder why they are so determined that Brian reenter his former world of debauchery. Is it so they can continue to live vicariously while making their usual sanctimonious pronouncements so that they can feel superior to Brian? Or is it that they both habe dreams of their partners dying off and Brian coming to not only their aid but to suddenly profess his umdying love and devotion to either member of the Pest Patrol? It's probably some warped combination of the two.

Well the fireworks are sure about to START because Brian and Justin have officially begun. And like a runaway train, whoever gets in their way to forever is bound to get run over. I'm looking forward to their asses getting flattened. Well actually since they both don't have asses, how about just rolling them over, LOL

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

 

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Fantastic updates!  So love anti- Mikey, plus throw in Linz and Mel.

Looking forward to next update, thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

It's love all right.  Mikey has a lot of nerve.  Can't wait til Brian get Justin to Britin and the fireworks start.  Poor Justin, no parents, but I'm sure he has Brian and Slick on his side.  Gotta feel sorry for Ben.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Yes....keep the whiny one far far away.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

I'm loving it very much😍😍😍For a change we don't have to wait for Brian to realize that he cares about Justin because he already is and not afraid to show it...😚😚😚Slick is interesting woman to add to the normal gang...
How come the house is already named Britin??
Looking forward for the next chapter...😙

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

So immediate and electric attraction felt by both and acknowledged by both! That part surprised me I admit. Glad though! Didn't take long for either of them to start talking about themselves. the usually churlish Brian must really be ready for this. Looks like he's going to do whatever it takes to protect whatever is budding between them.

I really really want to know what Ben sees in Michael. Seems like 90% of what he talks about is in reference to Brian, then he runs off to go to Brian. I really hope Ben leaves his ass soon. Hunter was a hoot though. Explaining why Brian wasn't at his apartment...AFTER Michael left. 

Once again Michael is the dead beat dad it seems. Really? He's not going to talk to his daughter until she apologizes? Something tells me Jenny has far more maturity than he does. How's Mel in this? Is she going to be some kind of heinous cunt or will she be more reasonable? Lindsey....well, naturally I'm looking forward to her inability to let Brian be himself. She and Michael will no doubt get up to no good together. Sticking their noses n where they don't belong. Trying to make Brian live the life THEY seem to think is best for him. As long as they are primary in his life all is fine, but lord help us all when they find out about Justin.

Can't wait!!!

Cheers

Elaine

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