Date: May 22, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
I think Slicks idea is perfect.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
I've just started this and I have a question. Is Michael going to be a complete and utter asshole throughout the whole fic? I like Auntie Michael as much as the next guy but I don't think I could go through so many chapters without any growth from him. So if he's not going to change and all could you please just tell me now? I love your original character Slick! She's so awesome, do you have a picture in your minds eye of what she should look like? I'm love to see a photo!
Author's Response:
Hi Glo, sadly he's going to not grow one bit because he is blinded by jealousy and how much he wants Brian. I hope you continue to read, as this is actually a love story for Brian and Justin, and is funny in places. As for Slick, personality wise a combo of Olivia Pope and Annalise Keating, from Scandal and How to Get Away with Murder respectively, and the sass and temper of Whoopi Goldberg. Looks wise, Halle and Beyonce.
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 01, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
What a nightmare for Ben to live with this obnoxious bug. How could he embarrass himself and his entourage like this?
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
Justin is not please with Brian's assessment, but hearing from Cujo what it really means I think he's gonna give him a break. Michael called Slick what?! No wonder Jenny is pissed at him. Michael telling his mother that he forbids her to date Horvath. <belly laugh> Too funny. When did Michael become the prude? Then we have the party and what a party it is too. That Michael thinks spreading that rumor about Brian would be a good idea is unbelievable. And his interputation of what is going on! Not to mention him telling everyone Justin's business, which is clearly not his place to do. Love how Emmett reacts, not to mention Ted and Blake following along. No dinner party for icky little Mikey. Now I need to know what Michael did, call for takeout or cancel the meal?
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2016 12:10 am Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
BEST CHAPTER EVER!!! Someone needs to beat the weasel over the head. He is such a horrible prick. So glad he is being humiliated by Ben and Emmett. It's great to see that no one is trying to make excuses for his disgusting behavior. Love this story.
Date: Dec 28, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
so looking forward to seeing how this goes... Michael deserves to be slapped fucking silly.. what an ignorant asshole! Mr. Prententious that he's trying to impress his neighbors, but being himself or pretending to be hoity toity just makes him look like an even bigger moron!
Date: Dec 28, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
That damn Micheal....slick is going to have to take a number to kick his ass
Date: Dec 28, 2016 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
Very nice. Michael needs to be hit with a Mack truck or a big fist.
Date: Dec 28, 2016 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence
I find it amazing that Michael's gripe with Slick stems from the fact that she is from a 'broken' home. Last I checked so was his little sanctimonious non-existent ass! I dare him to call Slick 'ghetto' to her face...I really want to see him get punched that badly. It really seems like he is channeling Lindsay aka Cruella! The 'Mother' crappola and misinformed and judgmental pronouncements he's making sounds just like her Don't even get me started on his opinion of Deb dating!!!!! Where does that little turd get off?! 'It's not seemly...' and she shouldn't want to date... blah, blah, blah! I wish my sons would tell my single-parent behind some BS like that. They would also be saying I shouldn't have to make a track and a dot when I walk even as I leave one firmly planted in their rear ends! UGHHHH!!! <bleeping> Pious little Twit!!
As for the dinner: That whiny, weenie-less, worn-out whimpy bottom boy needs a fist to the mouth! I'm glad that in lieu of what Michael did, Emmett retaliated in such a manner to embarrass him worse than what he attempted to do to Justin. He left Michael no room to backpeddle. With luck, Michael will stop speaking to all of them but unfortunately, I don't foresee that happening. I think those of the 'neighbors' that he was trying to impress, will really begin to see what a pretentious jackass Michael truly is! At least I hope so.
Sooooo Slick is going to have Brian and Justin come out of the relationship closet, eh? I think it's a splendid idea! Considering Michael's attempts to have Brian resume the role of Stud to Liberty Avenue while trying to ruin Kinnetik's credibility in the eyes of Brian's clients, announcing their 'Cinderfella' story would be the perfect upset to Michael's machinations. Michael will be disabused of his notions that Brian needs to hang out with his unambitious, unsuccessful, untalented ass and Brian won't have the time to supply Michael with his need to live vicariously through him while trying to feel like he's superior in any way. That jealous little mongrel is in for one helluva surprise! I really can't wait for him to come off looking like a WASP-wannabe and getting shunned at every opportunity. I don't see Ben staying with Michael or Jenny reconciling with the idiot all because of his inability to mind his own business and leave Brian to run his own life. What an Asshole <in my Ted voice>!
More please!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle