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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2018 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

A few more months Justin, just hang in there. Fuck Hobbs and the teachers.

Go Cynthia! Make Brian think about Justin and then ruin his orgasm. Serves him right. Ha!



Author's Response:

Thank goodness Justin has Daphne on his side - that's what a best friend should be like. :) Frau Rose, the English teacher cum librarian, is in his corner too. :)

We still chuckle when we read the scene where Cynthia cockblocked Brian. Blondes rule! :D

Thanks for continung to comment as you read, Sherry.

~ KaBrynn

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2017 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

It doesn't sound like either of the boys are enjoying their Monday. Maybe they should get together and commiserate? Brian could get that orgasm he needs and Justin wouldn't feel so alone. Just a suggestion . . . Lol. TAG



Author's Response:

Hmm . . . we think that solution might be a little too easy for our boys, but we'll ask them to take it under consideration. ;)

Thanks for reviewing!

~KaBrynn

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

YumYumPM's first review of Chapter 4 (accidentally deleted):

This was a well thoughtout chapter. I can't blame Justin from having nightmares especially waking up in Michael's old room. shudder. Glad to see that Cynthia is firmly on Justin's side. It's nice that Justin has one ally on the school staff. Hope something happens to the grill sargent for his attitude.

Thank you again for the lovely review!

Cynthia's a treasure - doesn't take any guff from Brian. :)

Thanks also for the comment on the banner in your postscript review. Shari is the most amazing banner queen!

~KaBrynn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

PS - love the banner.



Author's Response:

Apologies! - accidentally deleted your previous review of chapter 4. :( Here's part of the response, though:

Thanks so much for the lovely compliment about our story - that it's very well thought out.

That room would give most people nightmares; we're shuddering with you.

We'll have to see what develops as far as creepy Bauer and Dixon.

Thanks again for reviewing! :)

~KaBrynn

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:34 am Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

Wow....brian is an asshole...when will he forgive justin...going great...looking forward for more...thank u.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting us know we kept you riveted with the latest installment of our story.

Brian has a rather steep learning curve, but we have faith in the big guy. :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing - and for the fun 'comments' on FB.

~KaBrynn

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 12:59 am Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

Interesting cast of students . I feel a new twist coming. Good for Cynthia.



Author's Response:

Yay! We're happy we're keeping you entertained.

There may be few plot twists as this story develops. :)

Thanks for reading & reviewing!

~KaBrynn

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1

How I want to strangle Hobbs and Dixon! Daphne is a real best friend.

Brian taking care of Gus is quite funny and sweet at the same time.

Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next part.

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for being the first to post a review on this chapter - on either website.<3

We're glad we succeeded in putting you through a gamut of emotions in regard to Hobbs and Dixon, Daphne, and Gus. :)

We're thrilled you're enjoying our story.

~KaBrynn

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