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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 38

Michael owes some serious coin to a lot of people and considering how much he has spent on his toys he better get a hat and start panhandling, he would never make as an escort cause no one wants a no ass, tiny dick crybaby.

Cynthia getting some Zeus was HOT!

Faal came to the rescue to solve the problem before Zee decided to get her knives out, now if they just stay away from her for a few days she might start liking them again lol

I admire Brian and Justin for trying to break the tie but they gotta work on being sneaky and Brian's giggles rofl

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2017 3:05 am Title: Chapter 38

YAY CYN is gong to get her some LOVE. I like the playfulness with e1

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 37

I'm sorry i didn't get a chance to leave a review for the past chapters,i've been busy with work and dealing with some family issue..

 

Wow what a big disappoinment for the three clown,thinking they finally nailed it but totally wrong...When is Grady telling Lindsay that he's not capable of getting her pregnant and i'm wondering why??But only Zee knows??

And Daph,wow twins,too bad it won't go to Brian and Justin,but whatever it's still goes to a family member..

So excited everytime you mention food,bcoz you know a lot of recipes that gets me thinking what does it all look like...

 

Great chapter,thanks for sharing.😘 



Author's Response:

And you're back here too.  Happy dancing.  Hope you continue to read.

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:37 am Title: Chapter 37

Well, things are not working out for Grady.  Michael and Lindsay couldn't be more wrong if they tried. Looking forward to finding out what else you have planned.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 36

So much happening.  I still am not sure what Michael is up to.  Like the way Zee's brothers manage to toss Grady, Lindsay and especially Michael out.  It's so sad that Daphne and Vince are giving their baby up, but Emily and Francine are perfect choices for parents.  

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 37

I have been saving up my comments....I love that Lindsay and Michael are still paying their dues, not so crazy about Daphne and Vince though. Later on down the line when they have more children and the twins find out the truth, that's going to hurt on some level. There's always that question of why you and not me? But nevertheless this is all so brilliant and getting so juicy....I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Glad you're back!  Those three are so going to pay it's unreal!  Yeah Daph and Vince had a tough decision to make but they will still the babies in the future and be able to explain why they did what they did.  Thanks for the brilliant compliment, hope I can keep it up.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 37

Yes!! I knew Grady wasn't trying to renew his relationship with Matt after eighteen years out of remorse, he thinks if he can get his rights reinstated then he will have control over Matt's inheritance, thankfully Zee and Faal are smarter than Grady gave them credit for, he won't be able to touch a dime now or in the future.

Michael and Lindsay really should be use to the family gathering together to smack them down, I really don't think Lindsay is pregnant but if she is I doubt it is Grady's, he hasn't had another kid in eighteen years (Unless there is a long lost child out there somewhere he has abandoned for not being the perfect reflection of him, can definitely see why he and Luther got along) and I doubt he would want one with Lindsay?

Michael is really salivating over the possibility of a baby between Lindsay and Grady, while Lindsay is boiling with anger at the thought of Brian having a child with anyone but her.

A child who will take some of Gus's inheritance and her chance to get her hands on that money or back into Brian's good graces.

I can see why Lindsay finds Grady so attractive they share the same brain and the same greedy nature.

It's what drew her and Michael together in this plan to regain their prior positions in Brian's life and into his checkbook.

Wonder what the three stooges will come up with next and if Grady will get the money? (I see he doesn't read paperwork handed to him either)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 37

HA! Take that Grady! I knew he'd try something underhanded at some point. He just played his hand, and now everyone is aware of his intentions. He's no better than Lindsey or Michael. I had this weee little bit of hope that he was going to become a slightly mroe stand up guy. That he would be a little bit of a better influence on Lindsey. Who bye the way is unnervingly quiet of late. At least towards teh family. Not quite as compative at least. Certainly is towards Michael. Have to admit, she adn Grady constantly at battl with him is pretty funny! His one adn only allegience is dropping him like the plague. He really will end up on his own.

Jenny has most certainly grown up to be a lovely young woman. thoughtful and fiercly loyal. Very proud of her. The consideration she's showing Emily and Francine putting together that book is so incredilby sweet. She will be a wonderul Godmother.

All in all a wonderful chapter.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 35

Reading it over again and what ticks me off about the lunch with Gus, Jenny, Matt and Hunter is the fact that not one of the three apologize.

They just sat there expecting to be accepted while dismissing that they had a hand in the reason why they are estranged from their children.

They really did come off smarmy, self-centered and that lunch had nothing to do with making amends, it was all about working an angle on their kids and that really sucks!

Grady, Michael and Lindsay would be smart to stay away from them all but I doubt they are smart.

Reviewer: Tabby Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 36

Sorry, but I just can’t see either Daphne or Vince, as you’ve written them, giving up their child simply because it came at an inconvenient time. There are plenty of female doctors who have children at many points in either their training or careers and who continue to make a difference in the medical field, no doubt some at their workplace who could mentor Daphne and Vince about doing that. There are plenty of other children that Emily and Francine could adopt (and they should have done so years ago) and I really hope Daphne and Vince change their minds and keep the baby and return to being the strong characters that you’ve been portraying them as.

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 36

Aww I loved how you worked your magic

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 36

I see Michael just keeps digging himself deeper every time he opens his big mouth hope he enjoyed the long walk back lol

Lindsay must be so happy about the way Zee and her brothers remodeled her parent's former home, now the place has some style isn't so boring and pretentious <giggles>

Too bad they didn't get to figure out what Grady is up to before Michael opened his mouth.

I feel after their performance at lunch and how Matt reacted I think Grady's motive will become more clear.

Daphne and Vince are doing the right thing for them cause neither one is ready for such a big step, I thought Brian and Justin would take baby but I do believe this is better.

Emily and Francine will cherish that baby as they all will because he or she will be apart of this ever expanding family forever. 

December is going to be quite a celebration...for some anyway ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2017 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 35

Michael can't help himself screwing things up.  You almost have to feel sorry for Lindsay.  Loved this.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 35

Are Lindsay and Grady suppose to be engaged and who started that rumor?

I think after that slip we just might get an answer about the whole pregnancy question???

I love how Gus, Jenny, Matt and Hunter came together as a united front to face these three and find out what they want.

Michael needs to learn he doesn't know everything has no game and that a two-year old playing in the mud has more class than him and even if Zeph was gay he still wouldn't want Michael to touch, flirt or come near him again <shutters> 

All that parental concern was making  me cringe because it really came off so fake and like they were trying too hard to forge a bond that will never exist.

Lindsay, Grady and Michael are not winning anyone over at this lunch maybe they should go back to New York and think of a new strategy lol

:)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 34

I'm surprised that Anouk hasn't learned about Lindsay, surely she must have lied on her resume.  I'm looking forward to reading about the get together with Gus and J.R.  Michael is in for it.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

So I'm going back and rereading. Am @ 25 of BOTW adn have come up with a conclusion......

Justin has a tape worm! Seriously! It's the only way he eats so much and doesn't gain an ounce!



Author's Response:

Well that and Brian of course!

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 34

Looks like Anouk is starting to regret hiring Lindsay for her gallery as a manager Lindsay is suppose to guide the client to make a purchase not bully them into doing what she wants.

Love the fact that she came to Pittsburgh to gloat and shine and she was pushed into the background, Hunter's star is rising while Lindsay's is fading faster every day.

No way do I trust a Luther clone who hasn't shone all his cards yet Grady is up to something just waiting for the big reveal.

The lunch with Michael and Lindsay should be very I

captivating especially since I think Lindsay is going to try to get info from Gus (She Won't!) about Brian, Justin, Faal, Zee (No Way Is She Giving Up On Getting Brian or Faal) and Michael will try Jenny who will get more from him.

Can't wait for their lunch date :)

 

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 34

HAHAHAHA! Loved that ending! Oh Lindsey...still basking in the delusion that she's important somehow. I'm very interested to hear her take on the evening when she talk to Grady. will she bitch and moan about other usurping her moment in the spotlight, or will she make like it was all on her? Hmmm.

Lunch will definitely be interesting. Again, fly on teh wall please!! And I'm REALLY interested in Grady's interactions with Matt and Hunter. That he even stated Hunter being his son in law surprised me. I also think he will more than likely greatly underestimate Hunter's intelligence and influence. This whole aspect is definitely something that could either turn out to be a positive thing, or yet one more person who is taken down by the entire gang. Grady is a curious creature. Definitely had his reasonings starting off with Lindsey, but am wondering if there's actually something more now, especially since Lucas's influence is greatly depleted. I just can't wrap my head around it. Or...I'm making a bigger deal of it than necessary. ;)

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 33

Menno and Solomon were making me sad with their goodbye at the airport, thankfully Zee was able to figure out a solution so that they can be happy and no more ties will be ruined lol

Could Lindsay be Prego or could she be tired because with this job she actually is doing the work instead of calling off sick and foisting her obligations onto others???

Michael lost his precious toys again because he is an idiot and Talon's collection keeps getting bigger rofl

Lindsay yelling at Michael to get a job is funny she loved his laziness before but now that she is back with Art Set she wants to make a good impression.

Notice she hasn't called or barely thought of Gus or Jenny in fact neither of them have, they haven't seen or spoken to Gus and Jenny in months their level of emotional concern is really touching.

Happy that Kiki will be living in Craig's house I bet it will look Amazing when she finishes.

I can't wait to read about the blessing and wedding I expect to be quite teary-eyed and happy.

Reviewer: mcm Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 2:13 am Title: Chapter 33

So loving this story

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 1:34 am Title: Chapter 33

I'm so glad you got Sol and Menno together.  A ranch is Ohio sounds perfect.  Michael not wanting to work has got to be stopped.  How will you manage.  Is Lindsay pregnant?  Love that Matt and Hunter are sharing their blessing with Tobias and Darius so that everything gets cooked.  So looking forward to that.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2017 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 32

justin's negotiation skills are impressive! and extremely HOT! 

Jenny & Hank...not surprising, but in my mind, she's still about 10 not 16. I keep forgetting. :) Thankfully the parent's aren't panicing and are just encouraging "safety 1st" I remember when I found out about mine and did my damnest to do the same.

Craig. Well all I can do is point and laugh! couldn't happen to a better guy really. He's out millions, in jail, lost his lawyer adn is reduced to a court appointed attorney. Best of all...Kiki is getting the house!!! Your mind is just delicious! While he may wish he could "die here", I think he deserves to have to live through it all! :)

Interesting bit of history there with Zee and Faal. He certainly learned what he needed to. I was actually a bit disappointed in him at first when he continued to bring those friends around. I also would've found it very disrespectful. she warned him and she followed through. Like was mentioned, it was only a car, easily replaced. Good thing Steve seemed to catch on in the end. ;)

Anticipating Matt and Hunter's intereaction with the idiot twins. Definitely worth waiting for! Watching those 2 go down is always a treat to behold and more now so coming from the younger ones. 

Brilliant!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 32

Well Craig got what he deserve finally!!I guess it's true that payback really is a bitch..

Zee sure is brave,never let anyone despise her even her own husband,that's why Faal loved her to death. .

 

Bedroom scene was HOT,and i'm bouncing from happiness when Justin called Brian with pet names..Please let them keep calling each other some sickening sweet pet names..

 

Great chapter as always..Thanks for sharing.😘 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2017 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 32

The kids having sex!  Disrespect, things aren't that way anymore.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 32

Craig wishing for a death that isn't coming anytime soon (Unless he pisses someone off?), he is getting exactly what he deserves and it isn't going to get easier.

That was HOT the way Justin got Brian to promise to stick to getting the smoker and bbq, Brian would basically stick to a promise but this way Brian will be sure to remember and get a reward for keeping it lol

Zee just did what most women would love to do to get her point across, those guys weren't really Faal's friends they just like stirring up trouble, Faal dropped them like a bad habit and has a wife who will stand by him, love him, defend him and kick his Ass <giggles> he figured out what was more important and is happier after the lesson Zee taught him.

I look forward to Matt and Hunter taking on Lindsay and Michael they need to do this for themselves.

Another smack down for Michael and Lindsay will be fun :)

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