Date: Feb 01, 2017 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 24
Eeeeeww i cringed the way Bethany and Evelyn talks about their partner like some kind of a pet..But when you talk about Copthorne and Luther,well they are worst than a pet,atleast pets have compassion with their owner unlike those two they're doing unimaginable things to people..
When's the family meeting the horible judge? Can't wait for the showdown and Zee and brothers stripped the so called father from everything..
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 1:36 am Title: Chapter 25
Michael just lost his best friend and his home again he really should be use to this part of the story by now.
Never insult the Cash Cow unless you have a backup plan!!!
What game is Grady playing we all know he isn't really interested in Lindsay, I mean most men don't enjoy ice on their dick and a frigid princess in their bed so what is he up to??
Bethany use to be Copthorne's Ho but know she has moved up?
Bethany might not be enjoying her number one status for much longer, perhaps she and Evelyn can find new sugar daddies together?
Craig better get use to eating Shit and enjoying the taste because Luther is not going to stop.
Two Awesome Updates in one day, love that :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 25
Looks like Lindsay is finally realizing that Michael is not only stupid he does nothing but take take take. Craig is finding out he has no choice. He's lost his business and if he doesn't do what Lucian asks he'll end up paying from his own funds. Nicely done.
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 24
Let me see if I got this right. Bethany was Elias girl friend and dropped him for Luther? Lindsay is getting along too good with Bethany and Evelyn and finally seeing that Michael is a drain on her reputation. Zee's family seem to be fitting right in and Brian is going to need to go on his treadmill for a couple of hours.
Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 25
Hmmmm.....not going to lie, not crazy about how Lindsay is seemingly getting off the hook here. She needs to suffer just as much as Micheal is. Being treated to shopping trips and spa dates as well as being afforded a new romance is just a bit unfair. But I'm sure that you have something in store for the little witch.
Author's Response:
Jazzpoet...worry not she's not. She's got two nasty surprises coming her way. I promise!
Date: Jan 30, 2017 7:34 am Title: Chapter 23
Wow now Harold and Millie knows how to play with the dump duo....Lindsay on the other hand is planning to dump the whiny ass just to save herself from going down any farther,the question is when the people she thought would be there for her dump her ass as well at the end though where would she go?and Michael,well it doesn't take a genius to figure out what he could be doing rather than watching movie and read comics as if his life depended on it..
I'm so enjoying this story much..!Thanks for the quick update and sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 4:40 am Title: Chapter 23
$2000 a month? They can't even afford the fair to ride the subway!!
Millicent and Harold were masterful to get them to drop the lawsuit and sign paperwork that proves it.
Lindsay getting tired of supporting Michael? Are they going to break up the duet? Oh What A Shame!! <laughs evilly>
Boy are these two dimbulbs in for a few surprises in the next few weeks.
I like that Jenny, Gus, Hank and Phil wanted to help it is just better the way everyone made sure to send Craig and Luther scrambling.
The rats continue to follow the scent of cheese to their doom lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 23
Amazing. Between Bethany and Millie I think Lindsay is getting a clue. Michael not so much. So the Utube was the catering or something else? I look forward to each and every post.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 22
Love how the brothers are over the moon about their mancave. I think Thomas will be a stabilizing person for them. After awhile I warmed up to Talon and now it appears that Bethany is also someone I'm enjoying. Telling Mikey that his toys need to go back where they came from and charging rent is a good start.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 22
Harold and Millicent are going to need invest in lotion and new sheets because their sex life is going to get Alot more vigorous. lol
Not surprised Brian, Justin, Faal and Zee are competing for who has the most sex just surprised the whole family didn't know about it.
Blake may divorce Ted if he doesn't give him time to rest lol
Bethany has just become my new favorite person and it seems Michael should have been nicer to Talon, guess they better get out the want ads because I don't think Bethany is playing about them paying rent. roflmao
This may be made favorite chapter...so far ;)
Date: Jan 29, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 22
In love when they get bitch slapped.
Date: Jan 29, 2017 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loved all of it...Great chapter as always!!Thanks for updating and sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 6:14 am Title: Chapter 21
I Swear I knocked Miss Merlot lol ;)
Perhaps we are linked every few chapters rofl
Author's Response:
And I answered! Hope you still enjoy both xx
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 4:30 am Title: Chapter 21
So much goodness. Ralph and Talon, like this. Then the aquarium for Zee's brothers!!! So cool. Then Craig turns a cool million over to Molly. Things can't get any better.
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2017 4:27 am Title: Chapter 21
Jennifer did walk in there and rock it like a Boss!
Especially when she recorded all of Craig's info so now they can closely keep tabs on Craig.
The insurance company is looking into his claims which means more trouble for Craiggy, the gallery and Uncle Luc are going after full restitution for the damage he caused.
Ralph was smart to keep Talon from instantly reacting to Michael it is always best to kick someone when they are down on the ground, besides if you give Michael an inch he is going to take an yard and run a mile to try to win.
Too bad Michael isn't smart enough to see if he loss against Talon before they ever met.
The perfect revenge for Grady is him and Lindsay being embraced by everyone until December 20th then everyone turning their backs on them everywhere they go, being social pariahs would be the cherry on their Christmas celebrations lol
What does Millicent and Harold have planned for Lindsay?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Jan 29, 2017 2:24 am Title: Chapter 20
I loved everything about the gang and about Talon meeting everyone..Another one added to the growing family or should we say two including Ralph. ..Ooohhh Love is in the air,i'd like to see a picture of the two of them...And i love how Zee is cheering and encouraging them both..
As for the others,i say karma strike when you less expect it,so just wait when it comes your way,you know who're you bcoz it will hit you hard i'm sure of it..
Thanks for sharing.😘
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2017 4:46 am Title: Chapter 20
OMG! What a fantastic chapter. Luther is on his way out thanks to his son and Talon. Talon and Ralph? I like. Lindsay and Grady? Not so much. I'd like to say I feel sorry for Michael, but I don't. I'm glad that the Stark family minus Luther is together and happy. Now if only I had some king crab and lobster puffs.
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 20
As much as killing Luther would be Wonderful there is no point in any member of the family going to jail for that worthless slug!
The best thing to happen for a man who loves power is to take it away from him and to destroy everything he stands for.
The fact that he is willing to pay $35 Million to make Zee suffer makes me wish I could jump into the story to castrate him.
Talon is a genius to put in the fine print that Michael forfeits his collectibles but Lindsay will be a maid makes me so happy!!
She and Ralph will be happy together in Canada living off Luther's generosity, I was wondering when they were going to realize they more than liked each other? lol
Grady how many times do you have to sleep with Michael to know he is a bad lover?
Top or bottom Michael couldn't satisfy his own hand much less his partner.
Being with Lindsay isn't going to be better cause no one can warm up a cold heart, and if Lindsay thinks Michael is going to sit back and take it then she obviously doesn't know him at all.
Love the way Ralph and Talon left Luther I bet it stings that they both bested him at his own game lol
The next few weeks are going to be very interesting
Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 19
Luther has Craig over a barrel. that was amusing! Since he's currently going under the name of "Zebadiah" all transactions will be considered null and void right? Now that the gang is aware of that, I'm sure they will use it to bring about Luther's end, financially anyway. There will of course be further legal ramifications, long standing ones, I'm sure seeing as he has been doing this for so long. He has proven himself to be sub human and in dire need of as serious ass kicking. Something I know the gang and their ever growing comrades will happily particpate in. I am so looking forward to how you do this. Will be such fun.
Michael and Lindsey, ineviatly fighting over Grady's attentions is already getting to be a great sport to watch. I stand by my earlier thoughts that Grady is going to get everything he deserves. LOL. While may have been Talon that planted the seed in his mind, she did it such a way that she'll come out smelling like roses. She's playing all three, (4 if you include Luther) sides brilliantly and like the master manipulator she apparently is. The gang will more than like really come to appreciate her abilities at some point. Lets face it, she learned from the best.
Again, excellent chapter.
Lots of info coming out at every update.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:54 am Title: Chapter 19
Michael is an Incubus, Lindsay is a Succubus and they both plan to drain Grady dry whether he is asleep or awake lol
Luther is so disgusting and what he has coming his way is going to make what happened to Michael and Lindsay look like a love tap.
The level of his betrayal against his wife and children is so horrendous that there is no chance of forgiveness there is only destruction and taking away everything he values.
There isn't a hole big enough for Luther Stark he makes the devil look innocent.
I was not expecting that, good surprise twist there :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:29 am Title: Chapter 19
Arrgh! I am so pissed at Luther. I can't believe the shit he gets away with. But I think Talon is taking him down a peg. He's downfall is going to be massive if Zee and the family have their way. It's funny how Michael thinks Grady would want to continue to see him. He seems to latch on to people like a limpet.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 18
Forgot to comment on this last night I was just so excited that they finally got info about Copthorne.
Gus and Jenny called Leda Momma I bet she cried later with Mel in their room.
I got a bit teary-eyed when I read it the second time Leda will be the mother Lindsay was supposed to be to Gus and Jenny instead of thinking only of herself and she will protect them both with her last breath.
The four of them are a wonderful family with a great support system to keep them all safe every second of their lives.
Plus Mel has finally found a partner who is her equal instead of another child she had to look after or avoid like the plague.
Out of this pain true happiness won :)
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wrote own the ingredients for those smoothies. ;)
Jenny and Gus, both calling Leda Momma....oh how that must've made her feel! But it just grapped on tight to her heart. Really lovely. I think Lindsey is going to absolutely freak out when and if she ever hears that. Her loss however. The kids both know what she's really like. they may love her as she's a parent, but they don't like her as a person and they certainly don't respect her. She's lost so much, yet she just doesn't see it at all does she.
Grady is getting nothing more that what he deserves. Aboslutely hysterical tht he's being chased by both L&M! They are going to turn on each other at any moment because of this. Now that will be monumental and can't wait to see if it actually happens. I do believe that that was Talon's idea all along. She really is a manipulative little thing ain't she? LOL. Have to say I'm enjoying that part.
then there's Craig. LOVE IT!!!!!!!! OMG I busted a gut laughing at his situation! Kicked out of the hotel, news camped out at his home and then 2 little birdies was kind enough to let the media know his current location. AS for his getting bail. Hmmmm. Curiouser and curiouser. The assumption that Copthorne is someway involved in yet another legal manouver certainly is something to give one pause. I'm not sure why Luther is aiding him, but there has to be a good reason. Luther needs to tread carefully. Mind you he really has no idea what the others are all up to, nor how it will eventually come around to bite him in the ass. Looking forward to that.
Oh what tangled webs there are in this. So much fun waiting and watching how things go for the idiots and evil doers.
Hooray for Zee having the house now! She's over the moon. Very happy for her.
Can'twait to see what else you have up your sleeve!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 18
Ok i really want to meet this Copthorne,he sounds bad as Luther or maybe worst..But now that he got the attention of the gang especially Zee,he better watch his back..He has no idea what hit him..Good job Xanthie for sharing that information with family..
Now as for Grady,well it's a big Gross!!sleeping with Lindsay but not satisfied bcoz maybe she lacked dick,but when he slept with Michael not satisfied either??I think he's the biggest perv i know😅😅😅How Zee falls for him,is a big mystery??
I loved all what's happening in Paris,the best one is Jenny calling Leda "momma"is just cuteðŸ˜i wonder what would Lindsay feel about that when she hears it??But the hell with her,nobody cares anymore...
Oh My God Zeon is priceless,didn't see that coming😀😀😀I'm sure he's struggling to keep a straight face while talking to craig at the same time mocking him...Can't wait for press to get in the evil's office...
Thank you for updating and sharing.😘
Date: Jan 26, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 18
Hope he gets it good. What is Grady thinking his Dick will run and hide first Lenz then Michael, how gross.