Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm still laughing about the dump ass living in a bathroom..What Ralph could have possibly done to his wine that Michael's stomach grows like a 4months pregnant as the cunt said??but whatever it is he deserve it!!And as for the cunty bitch,i'm enjoying this much how she got ignored and sidestep by Talon who she thought is her friend,hahaha if she only knew...Well all of them is so easily fooled by Talon!!Payback is really is a bitch...I wonder what Luther's reaction about the painting that sold only a dollar??good move Talon🤗🤗
And i can't wait for Zee and the three shark lawyers and genius accountant working their magic of making plan to the Taylor Electronics and another idiot called Craig..He doesn't know what hit him coming out of the blue...
Great chapter and thanks for updating..
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hahahha my stomach hurts from laughing,not just from Michael's scene but most of the episode..
Anyway thanks for answering about my curiosity about jewelry..
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 14
Mostly great chapter. Justin and Brian sex, always great. Weasel sex, not so much. EWWW. Some things are just too gross to even imagine. Love the story.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 13
Michael always did have diarrhea of the month now that it is coming out the other end it should keep him busy for a few more hours or another day lol
Luther and Lindsay You can hold onto your delusion that Zee is still wants her ex, that will backfire Big time when Zee doesn't react and Luther parading Lindsay around doesn't do anything again, who wants creme brulee when they have Jello every night?
Talon has taken care of her jewelry and soon she will be taking care of Luther and walking away for good with her dignity intact.
Wouldn't it be funny if Grady was using Lindsay and Michael to get to Brian who he really wants or Justin? rofl
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
Luther is something else. Says No one likes to share their man yet he's spreading himself around on Talon. Love how Michael is having bowel problems, serves him right. Lindsay getting it on with Grady, is that good or not? Love that Talon sold the painting to Ralph for a dollar. Mel doesn't really hate Brian and Ted won the pot! Now Jennifer is pissed on learning that Craig is trying to run his business down. I know you have something planned for that and can't wait to find out what. What is Ted going to do for Menno?
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
Luther is about as delusional as L&M. How he thinks he actually has influence over anyone. How he thinks that Zee would be upset about Grady. (sorry....that make me want to both vomit and laugh hysterically)
As much as Talon may be scheming against Luther, I don't see her having any altruistic motivations. I don't see her trying to make amends or anything, it's purely selfish. she doing everything soley for her own benefit IMO. I mean I'm loving that she's totally screwing Luther over!! lol, but I'm not sure she'd hesitate to do the same to any of the others to get what she wants. Who knows...
Michael now......can I just sit here adn say BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ROFLMFAO!!! Oh hell.that was EPIC! Priceless!!! Oh man o man. that had me in absolute stitches! Thank you for that.
I'm also really curious as to what's going to happen with Craig and the store. Now that the gang seem to know what he's up to. Ubelievable that he'd be so low, but then.......he's another selfish asshole that deserves everything that's coming to him. and more!
Excellent chapter!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 20, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
How delusional and ignorant can three people be?! Guess we are going to keep finding out if Luther, Lindsay and Michael keep going the way they are... please let them keep going LOL!
We will now join another episode of The Delusional & The Desperate already in Progress...
First let's talk about the asshole with the God-complex.... Luther, Luther, LUTHER!! Get a GRIP! You are NOT the Lord of All He Surveys. In fact there isn't MUCH he can really survey right now except his losing battle. For him (and Lyin' Lips) to think that Zee will be distracted or more accurately pissed off that Slut Butt is humping Golddigging Grady, he really has another think coming. There was a reason that Grady is Zee's EX and why it truly doesn't bother her that he is. Furthermore she has Faal. HELLOOOOOooooooo!!! What the hell would Zee want with Lindsay's male counterpart? This chapter made me even further anxious for Luther to get his comeuppance on all fronts, beginning with Talon. I really hope that Ralph leaves with her when she's finally finished doing her damage to that Lying, Sneaking, Scheming Sonofabitch she traded her marriage for.
Secondly, let's talk about the female member of the LL Ensemble (yes! The Lying Lips Ensemble is what I've taken to calling the Luther/Lindsay Alliance). Loose Lips Lindsay (and yes that statement can be taken two ways if you get my meaning) still hasn't learned her lesson about opening her mouth and her legs yet. What a supercilious SKANK. Well Talon shot her ass right on down to size about her "in" within the art world and Grady... well I suppose desperate times call for desperate measures and that includes tricking with a desperate whore. A stiff prick has no conscience but if he's not careful that Horse-humping Thundercunt Lindsay has is going suck the life out of him and spit out the bones and all for the sake of trying to get the attention and money of someone who doesn't want you or to remember that they once even knew yo' broke ass.
As for the third player in this Miasma of Misery, Michael....LMAO, LMFAO, OMFG ROFLMAO!!!!! I would high five Ralph if I could!! That was a genius way to get Mutton-mouth back and was the perfect accompanying torture to Talon's own brand of revenge. I honestly can't wait to find out what they are going to do next... or to WHOM! I'm sure that list will grow by next chapter but I'm also sure that Michael will remain on the Shit list both literally and figuratively...LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter, Nicole!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2017 5:30 am Title: Chapter 12
Had to comment about how Luther thinks Grady being seen with Lindsay is a step up when she is basically a social praha, even if she does get Michael to drop the lawsuit against Phil I doubt they are going to let her have an in at any gallery in New York?
I really hope they don't drop it because he and Michael taking the stand will be very amusing and the New York gossips would love to spread there testimony around.
Those shoes Zee was wearing and carrying in her lap are Gorgeous and perhaps the reason why Talon wanted to know is because she plans on wearing them when she stomps on Luther's face and out the door lol
I think Craig is going to move that money into his personal account.
You are Astounding me again with this story and all the cruel stuff you do to Michael and Lindsay lol
Date: Jan 19, 2017 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
First off...that spa scene was most enjoyable. The fact that it is currently on a UBS stick is even better. It's teh gift that keeps on giving. I nearly busted a gut reading it and that Talon did all that.as much as I question her loyalies at times, I have to high five her on that one.
Seems Grady didn't get the reaction he and Luther had hoped for from Zee. lol. Na na na na naaaaaaaaaa. Seems they all kind of made asses of themselves. wonder why they'll try to get up to next. Their attempts are almost comical really.
Loving Ralph!! Can't wait to see what he has up his sleeve.
A shout out to Hunter is of course so necessary! Oh to have been a fly on the wall there. Beautifully done!
And Lindsey for a time was in her element, or at least she thinks she is. Oh if she only knew. Love that everyone is against her, some quietly, some not so much. Her parents were a hoot! Definitely put her in her place but good.
And now we find out about they whys of the jewlery. sneaky sneaky! Love it. It seems Talon is just as described. A btich, but an honest one. She seems to be fully on "our team". Can't wit till Luther finds out about everyone being against him and to such an extreme. he won't know what hit him!
Excellent!!
Cheers,
Date: Jan 19, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
ROTFLMAO!!
Oh you wicked, wicked girl. This chapter has te be THE most hilarious one you ever written and the most exquisite torture ever. Never knew hot wax could be this much fun.
So many people got their arses kicked in this chapter. Not only have Mickey but especially Twatzilla got the full blast. She's really out of everbody's good books.
Let's wait and see if both of them learned something from this evening.
Talon is simply marvelous. Playing Luther like that. I hope she gets away with it for she deserves it after being cheated on like that. Good for her to get Mickeys spa day taped. It could become quite a partypiece, wouldn't it.
Did a search for Zee's shoes. They are to die for..... especially in cobalt.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO
Meriam
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thomas and Zeon, I see they are going to be busy getting their lives back together. That means one less brother fighting over how to decorate the Bro-house. It's nice to see Zee and her brothers getting along and how happy Faal is for her. Everyone's off for NY and a showdown with the booby twins. I'm beginning to like Talon, especially with how she treats Ralph. She seems to have done a turnaround. The spa day with Michael was hilarious and if I got it right Talon had them video Michael's treatment. All that chest hair. Yuck. Grady wasn't nearly as bad as I thought he would be. Did Lindsay ever find Melody? Hunter and Miranda did a fabulous job, and Lindsay actually tried to take credit. Love how Steve and Brian didn't let Michael get away with saying shit. I'm still not sure what the coat tag number means. Lindsay's parents are there and they let Michael and Lindsay know that they are leeches. Now I'm glad we couldn't see the video and Michael's little you know what.
Author's Response:
You did indeed with the taping. And Talon needed Zee's coat tag number so she could put the USB port with the video of Michael's waxing from hell in the pocket. Grady gets worse...for some reason he finds them attractive....
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ronald called Lindsay and Michael Leeches! lol
I hope Lindsay and Michael continue the lawsuit it will be so funny when Lindsay gets the cold shoulder in every gallery in New York, but what will make it hilarious is that Grady and Luther are with her every time it happens. (Maybe get Michael banned from every comic book store too?)
Glad I wasn't drinking when I read the spa scene or I would have choked from laughing so hard, must have taken everything Jorge and his helpers had not to throw up looking at Michael and laughing at his twig and really tiny pebbles. (Talon is good and recording it is priceless)
Grady drooling over Brian isn't surprising it's him hitting on Lindsay that makes me sick.
So Ralph got his revenge on Michael I wonder if he has ever done that to Luther?
Lindsay trying to take credit for Hunter, Martine and Justin's achievement makes her look so pathetic.
Luther and some of his cohorts did not have the evening they were envisioning but everyone else had a wonderful time and it ended watching a buffoon getting his comeuppance.
Can't wait for more I could use more laughter :)
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
So happy for Thomas and Zeus.
the quickie in the air was HOT!
but I don't think I'll ever laugh as hard as the waxing scene!!! Lol
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
I still can't stop laughing!!! THIS!!!!!! OH THIS!!!!! Nicole, you are so evil... and I LOVE IT!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 1
You're right I did mean Thomas. Must have Mikey on the brain.
Date: Jan 17, 2017 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well i didn't expect that about Zeon and Thomas??But yeah i guess they're perfect for each other..Now we just have to find someone for Zeph,Zeus,and Zander...Cara's available Lydia and also Cynthia,how i wished for them to be pair up,after all they're gonna be staying in Pitts most of the time in broHouse..I love the name☺☺☺As for Talon,is she still on Zeph and Zee's side?If she is she can dump Luthers ass anytime,especially now that someone cares about her?I think Ralph could be her future?But i'm curious though,why Ralph was asking about her jewellery??
And about Lindsay and Michael,well you got what you're looking for Trouble!!you ask for it,now you definitely can have it,another court battle!!
Aaaah i miss B/J🙂🙂
Author's Response:
B&J back in the next few chapters, had to get the reuniting of Zee and her brothers rolling. Jewellery wise, it's a an oldie but goodie...the soon to be ex wives/girlfriends would swap their real jewels for convincing fake ones and kick up enough fuss when their ex demands it back and walk off with the real thing leaving the ex with the fakes...hope that helps
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 11
Zee and her 4 brothers. It's hard to keep them straight. And it all intertwines. Zeon and Michael, I like that. Which one was Talon married to? Why would she even want to be with someone like Luther? It's good that she's seeing Luther for the bastard he is. Lindsay has been disowned and now they've been handed a counter-suit. Paybacks a bitch.
Author's Response:
Talon was married to Zeph. I hope you mean Zeon and Thomas...because him with Michael makes me squicky!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
I love the idea of a BroHouse it sounds so Stark and just perfect for Zee's brothers, funny that three of them were fighting over the same room until Zee stepped in.
Talon has finally opened her eyes to see that Luther isn't worth the twenty years she gave to him, but that jewelry he gave her should be worth enough to start a new life and a nice FU to Admiral Dumbass.
Ralph is helping Talon so that must mean he is getting ready to pay Luther back to before he leaves with more of Luther's money? (He must have years of information that could be useful?? ;))
Nancy and Ron have left Pittsburgh for greener pastures and a life free from spoilt children who don't give a Damn and would crawl over their dead bodies to take the last cent they had.
Lindsay is seeing Michael as an albatross around her neck and until she has dropped the dead weight will she get what she wants, it's funny how she looks down her nose at Talon but she has more social standing than Lindsay will ever have.
Can't wait for MOMA Friday that is going to be one Hell of a party lol
Zeon and Thomas? Hell Yeah More Hot Men Making Out!!!! Rofl
Yeah Phillip Mitcham is suing Michael and Lindsay I hope he is asking for a lot because those two put that man through the ringer and now it is his turn to return the favor :)
Date: Jan 17, 2017 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
Revenge is indeed a dish best served cold. Stone cold.
Bravo to Ron and Nancy. Finally cutting all the ties with Twatzilla and the other spoiled broad. Let's see how long it will take Asshat and Twatzilla to hit rockbottom. They can't stay around Luthers place forever can't they? Flee infested hovel here we come.
A big Bravo!! to Emmet. That certainly put Craig 'the man' Taylor in his place. I love a strong and self confident Emmet. He sure has grown some balls under Zee's tutelage.
Off to the next chapter.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Jan 17, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 8
Sorry for not reviewing for such a long time. RL sucks sometimes. Taking care of my 82 year old mum takes up a lot of time. And sometimes there is still too much pain to fully concentrate on things.
Now on to the review:
That Stark head of the family is one fucked up piece of rottenness. Vicious, stingy and vindictive. All in all one gigantic arsehole. But I'm certain our "family" will handle him the same way they did Asshat and Twatzilla. Together they are really strong.
OMG, the last scene in this chapter was amazing. I laughed for minutes on end, tears stremaing down my face. Hilarious and what a way to get back at some one.
Girl, where do all these brilliant ideas come from?
The scene between Menno and Solomon....... holy jalapeño. That was one hot, no make that vulcanic scene. Needed a long cold shower after that one.
Off to read the next chapter.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Jan 17, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
So was the rnd moment with thomas and zeon rivaling Brian and Justin? (in the record kissing department)
Love that Taln has woke up about Luther and is working to take down Twatzilla and Wankerboy (love those names!!)
Author's Response:
Almost...will carryover onto the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2017 4:47 am Title: Chapter 10
I do believe Lindsay might be getting tired of carrying Michael and could be looking for an excuse to push him off a cliff.
I can't wait to see what Zee finds out about Judge Copthorne and will Xanthe be making another appearance?
Wonder what Admiral Dumbass has planned next?
Author's Response:
Again get out of my head, in the nicest way of course! But then of course there's Grady to...ahem...fight over.
Not sure I can bring Xanthe back...but watch for Ralph
Date: Jan 16, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh that little showdown between emmett and Craig was EPIC! Absolutely priceless!!!!!!!! Hopefully there really won't be any repercussions from it. I doubt Craig would risk it though. I really do believe that Emmett would follow through with any threat. Besides, he has far too many people looking out for him. Craig would be placing himself in a very large pile of poo if he tried anything.
The other showdown worthy of an award was that between Lindsey adn her parents as well as between her and Zee. Lindsey seems to think that Zee was behind the note. Well...she found out that it was all Ron and Nancy, She realized that tthere really will be no contact. HA! Good on her! Now, I look forward to seeing what she and Michael try to do going forward. What other machinations they try. I mean, they seem to think so hightly of themselves, I'm sure she has some kind of unsuccessful idea up her sleeve. I so enjoy watcheng them both crash and burn at every turn.
Everyone still hasn't figured out that there will be no winning if you go against this family group.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 16, 2017 8:33 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh my god that was priceless!!Lindsay doesn't seem to get a clue when her parents are so obvious but she's living in her imaginary world where everything can be manipulated and believe her craziness..Take that you lousy cunt!!
Hands down Emmett,you put Craig totally down where i'm sure he thought that the floor would open up and swallow him,Bravo Em🤗🤗🤗
Yeah I totally agree that no one can compare to B&J when it comes to make out session,what's more the real thing😙😙😙
Thanks for updating,Love itðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 6:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Well, Ron and Nancy wised up and Lindsay, who thought she could con them out of their home, was left holding the bag. Love how Emmett dealt with Craig. LOL.