[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 2:16 am Title: Chapter 10
Holy Schnickies!!!
Ron and Nancy gave gave Lindsay a severe kick in the by telling her they were moving out of Pittsburgh, then the one two punch by selling their home quickly to Zee roflmao
About Time they finally dropped the dead weight and let both their daughters deal with consequences of their actions, especially Lindsay who feels the most entitled and self-absorbed.
I like that Faal thinks it would be a great place for Zee's brothers when they come to visit, just got to redecorate and get rid of the feel of entitlement, snobbery, jealousy, envy and Lindsay.
Bravo to Emmett for taking on Craig and knocking him down a few pegs, he is another person who deserves exactly what is coming to him ten-fold.
Perhaps Jennifer would like to do to Craig what Delia did to Luther? lol
Michael and Lindsay are back hopefully this will be a short visit?
Date: Jan 15, 2017 4:01 am Title: Chapter 9
With all the tension and stress the clown group causes just vanished with what Brian reaction about their encounter with zeon and how he's triumphantly excited that he remembers them..And Zee knows about it all along is just priceles..I'm loving this family more and more every chapter..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Can't wait for Moma showing??I'm it would be a blast!!
Date: Jan 15, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 9
Now that sounded like the Brian we know.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2017 3:43 am Title: Chapter 9
Amazing how you have this all wrapped with Lindsay, Michael and Luther going to Hunter's NY opening at the MoMA. With Matt's father to cause confusion. Then you have Zee owning 100 percent of Stark Industries. Last but not least Zee knows about Brian and Justin and Zeon. Lordy, lord.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2017 2:51 am Title: Chapter 9
Hold on, Lindsay wants Michael to treat Talon with respect because they are guest in her boyfriend's home? BITCH PLEASE!!!
Where The Hell was that when they were being disrespectful to Zee in her home or to Justin, Faal, Brian, Alice, George, Deb, Carl, Hunter, Matt, Mel, Leda, Ted, Blake, Gus, Charles, David, Hank, Jenny, Jennifer, Tucker??
So Talon is an honest Slut? She is helping by giving information to Zander to take down Luther, guess she is smart and has some morals.
Can't believe Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer can come to Pittsburgh now, hope Adam and Solomon can reverse that and send them scurrying.
Talon his about to use her powers to cause some trouble for Grady and Luther?
Will Lindsay be given the cold shoulder by The Art Set and The Wasp Net??
Oooooo I wish the party was tomorrow night I just love when Lindsay is humiliated in a room full of her peers lol
I knew Zee wouldn't freak about Zeon sleeping with Brian and Justin I agree with Brian they are just that good and very memorable ;)
Can't wait for the next update :)
Date: Jan 14, 2017 1:45 am Title: Chapter 8
OMG, Em is Fantastic, Craig should just jump off a tall building and be done with it.
Fabulous update, can't wait for next.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Jan 13, 2017 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
Genius I tell you!
Date: Jan 13, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh My God my stomach hurts from laughing at what happen in evil Craig's dinner😅😅😘served you right!!
And as for Luther,the same situation you deserved it,as what Delia did,stripped you off more money that you can imagine...!
And the best part of this chapter is the Hottest Scene...Between Menno & Solly & Brian & Justin,i say i got my dose of my daily dreams or fantasy for the day...Hotness overload and i love you for it MsMerlot.😘😘😘I love it and how i wished i could be the floor where Menno and Solly was going at it and not the least could be the mattress where B/J was turturing each other...Hhhhmmmm i'd love to read more of the hot scene..can't just get enough..as Brian said 'no such thing is enough'so i guess we're not gonna get anything as enough..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Great chapter!@Thanks for updating..😘
Date: Jan 13, 2017 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Honey this chapter was EVERYTHING!!!! First, something tells me that Cara and Thomas are going to be very good friends, much like Zee and Em. I think he is going to make a wonderful addition to the growing staff of E&Z HOD. I really want to hug Kiki for finding him!
Secondly, Cara had me cracking up and repulsed on her behalf by turns. First, some dude named Guido who is associated with Craig Taylor in any capacity- from janitor to personal assistant- is bound to be a slimeball. Aside from his overt bigotry, Craig is a major blight on mankind in general and probably should have an intentional dip in a pool filled with lava to boil that evil out of him. Craig is the type of asshole that would think he could go down into Hell and overthrow the government. But then look at the actual company he's keeping....Luther Stark.
Now there is another one who will probably end up sitting at the right hand of Satan's pitchfork. What an arrogant asshole!! Not only that but he's an arrogant asshole with absolutely no taste or discernment about who he lets stay in his expensive house. Couldn't he tell that Lindsay and Michael were vermin immediately? Guess not if he is so blinded that he couldn't see the guttersnipes for what they really are. Well now what are they going to do because Malachy has told them that regardless of the amount of money they have or spend, there is no way for those verdicts to be overturned. Furthermore, I think Delia is about to deplete Luther's funds even further and I suspect that whatever is left, Talon will take care of. Craig and Luther deserve each other!!
Speaking of Talon, GO GIRL!!! That cartoon-character t-shirt wearing manchild better learn the difference between an expression and an order. One would think that since he's been getting shot down since he's met her that he would learn she's NOT a woman he wants to tango with. I mean...look at the last 'Stark' woman he thought to do battle with. Has that icerock improved the quality of his voice? Hmmm...NOPE, he's still the same whiny bastard he's always been.
As for Lindsay, if she sucks up to Talon any more, she's going to taste what Talon ate for breakfast five weeks ago! But then again, Lindsay might like that but she better concentrate on trying to soothe and lick her own ass because of the asskicking that's coming her way from the King and Queen of the WASP nest. I would feel sorry for her once Millie and Harold descends on her but you know.... the way my feelings are set up....
Solomon and Menno are some HOT boys. Go ahead and fire up my screen anytime with them! But then you turn around and give me a Dom Brian scene.... Girl!!! Have I told you lately how much I love you? Orgasm denial is one of the HOTTEST acts in BDSM and takes concentration, skill and patience to pull off masterfully. Between you and Brian, I think Justin is a VERY happy man!
Speaking of Justin.... I think they are doing to the right thing to tie up the loose end of Cody Bell before Luther or Craig get ahold of him. Between him and the- wait! Why am I suddenly thinking of Ethan?? YICK, BLECH, ECK, YUCK, JINKIES!! Anyway, before anymore of Justin's past can be used to torment Justin, I think the Family should close all those avenues. It would also force Craig and clueless Luther to face Justin like the man he is instead of being little pussy boys trying to use others to do their dirty work.
Back to Craig for a minute.... EMMETT!!!! OMG!! What BRILLIANCE! Not only did he embarrass the hell out of the bigoted bastard but I think he ruined a number of prospective business associates as well. Based on Em's actions, no one will believe that Craig Taylor isn't a closet case and a two-faced liar. I mean at least the gay men he's trying to hurt live in their truth and regardless of how the straight men they do business with may or may not feel about that, they still respect Brian, Justin, Ted, Em and Drew's 'fuck'em all' personas. I doubt very seriously Craig's former associates have as much respect for him....period.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
Emmett I bow to your Greatness!!!
Delia get your money!!
Luther get a clue because you are an amateur trying to take down King Kong with a pebble, I wonder how much money he has because before this is over he will be lucky to have two dollars to rub together which will make everyone happy.
Talon putting Michael in his place is funny, Lindsay having to suck-up to Talon is hilarious and I hope there will be more from these three.
$6000 for moving without giving notice? Ouch!!! Rofl
Watch out Brian and Justin, Faal and Zee because Menno and Solomon are gunning for Hottest Couple lol
Millicent and Harold are coming for Lindsay they are going to do what her parents can't or won't do.
Hunter and Martine are just soaring wait until Lindsay finds out. ;)
Date: Jan 13, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
LMFAO!!!!!!!!! Omg..Emmett's idea for Craig's party was.......I can't even say priceless as it goes MILES beyond that! That...was...THE BEST EVER! I'm currently sitting in my office and completely lost it at that ending. Thankfully I'm on my own today. Jeebus Christmas....I have no words for the brilliance that is your mind.
Seems much of what Luther wants...Luther ain't getting, despite what he seems to think on the subject. Seems he DOESN"T get everything he wants! Yet another epic show down. HA! Just like Delia said, he didn't know whathit him. Looking forward to even more perils coming his way.
Such an enjoyable chapter! Thank you for posting!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 13, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
That was so mean.Ha ha
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 8
Looks like Thomas might work with Em & Zee, I hope so. Now about the party for Taylor Electronics. That could be a problem. What does Emmett have planned? Something evily delicious I hope. Naked waiters! Never saw that coming. And he taped it. OMG. Hahaha. Mikey and Lindsay owe $6,000 for moving. That's rich. Solomon and Menno! Now that's a combo. Michael has a lot of nerve, but Talon set him in his place. I must have missed something, which is hard to believe, but what does Cody Bell have to do with any of this? Malachy is well out of it, but with this crew one never knows. Poor Ralph. He can't seem to win for losing. And Luther doesn't know what hit him. Hunter is doing great!
Date: Jan 13, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
Luther can try and try and try... he assumes since he has money he gets ANYTHING he wants... tough toodles!
I'm glad he has no clue that our family has a heads up to his plan
That dinner party was FABULOUS... I'd personally LOVE to have that dinner lol
Date: Jan 13, 2017 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh thank god I didn't take a sip of my coffee because my poor laptop would be getting cleaned off.
Emmy Lou, you have been hanging around Zee too long. That was right up her alley.
Poor Luther (NOT), not having a good day today? Keep turning the screws Delia.
Sending virtual chocolate to keep the muse content and happy.
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2017 12:44 am Title: Chapter 7
Chris facing Brian and Justin head on is good because it shows he is willing to admit to his crime and accept the consequences meaning Brian's fist, Mark is standing by Chris to do the right thing and warn Justin what Dumbass Craig is up to.
Luther is thinking Lindsay will make Zee Jealous? Bitch Please!!!! Who would be jealous of that lowdown, one penny Skank and her whiny Bitch sidekick?
Zee has more class in one pinky than Lindsay could have in her whole body, Grady can have her because Zee will be too busy crying tears of laughter than tears of jealousy.
I understand Justin wanting everyone to show their hands but I think this plays more for their favor than Luther and his cronies.
Hope Talon is trying to help cause Zee wants her Ass And would be happy to lay her flat.
The Dickless Bastard (Luther) may find that his small appendage can't make everyone woman he meets into idiots.
Now the Idiots he has in his home might wish they had stayed in Canada I wonder what Malachy is going to do about their case and will he need a ice pack for his giant headaches? lol
Brian and Justin slept with Zeon? Way to Go!! lol I kinda worry how Zee and Faal will react but I hope there will be more laughter than threats?
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
Love how Chris is gay too, since we all knew that already. Wonder what Luther plans since they won't be able to use Chris. Nice that Mark thinks they should warn Justin. That's the icing on the cake. So six years ago in P-town Brian and Justin met Zeon? Who would've thought. Malachy, Malarky, whatever is going to regret working with Luther. It looks like Talon is seeing things differently about now since Lindsay seems to think she's a maid. Perhaps she'll soon join the rank with Xanthe? What is she going to tell Zeph?
Date: Jan 11, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
So Chris obviously isn't going to be intimidated by Craig or any of his threats. good! Glad Chris has come to terms with himself and has gone forward and found happiness. Impressed that he actually worked for his relationship with Mark. While as was mentioned, Mark may not have forgiven him, he's willing to work at it. Mark has obviously made Chris work for it and will keep him on the straight and narrow. Good on Chris for having the balls finally to face his past and talk to Justin. Further impressed with both Justin and Brian for listening and also moving past it and forgiving him.
Oh Luther Luther Luther....it's amazing how people who are so incredibly narcisissitic don't forsee their own demise. They actually think that nobody would dare cross them. Oh wow...is he in for a surprise!! For one thing, that he thinks the stupid twosome are really going to be any help is hilarious and in all honestly shows his real level of stupidity. Now these 2 are trying to convince malachy to see their side of things. Not sure about this guy. Who's he calling? I'm hoping their previous lawyer to give him a heads up, but again, not sure of his loyalties. I had to chuckle at Michael's naivete... "We didn't win" hehe. what an idiot.......
Talon is another we should keep an eye on perhaps? she's stated that she hates Zee, and now she's calling Zeph. however, Luther still thinks that Zeph is standing my him right?? (Trying to keep it straight)
Wow. Tons to think about and figure out. Can't wait for more!!! The whole thing with Zeon was funny! Now I really want to know what Faal's reaction is going to be. I'm thinking Zee is going to laugh about it. Faal may too. I guess we'll just have to wait and see what you have up your sleeve.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 11, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh My God!!!what a small world,imagine Zeon with B&J hilariousðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜Can't imagine the twins faces when the boys tell them about P-Town years ago..I just hope it won't upset Zee and Faal..
Good for you Chris trying to redeem yourself of what you've done to Justin..It's great that you found yourself a husband who loves you enough to stay by your side..And as for Craig,wrong move,very wrong,you should burn in boiling oil for trying to bring your son down..
Now everyone's trying to help the family,even to go behind the enemy's back,like Xanthie and now Talon..well good luck Luther you sure need it because it's your own snake who's gonna swallow you first..!
Oh i'm looking forward of what you got on C9...🤗🤗🤗
Great chapter again..Thanks for updating😚😚
Date: Jan 11, 2017 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
LMFAOOOOoooooo!!! Well the 'Chis Hobbs' angle to get to Justin is officially CLOSED!! Hell that even threw me for a loop, LOL. But now my anxiety just ramped up again about what Craig is planning for Justin's next show. I really wish the earth would just open up and swallow him. But regardless, I'm sure that Justin is going to be ready for the asshole or at the very least, able to recover quickly from his machinations and wage war against Craig for himself.
Malachy probably feels like he's loss some valuable brain cells having to deal with Michael and Lindsay. That foot-in-mouth disease Michael has comes in handy some time. And then for Lindsay to ask if they can take Phil to the board....That BITCH!!! If he agrees to any of their demands, he'd better be prepared to get his ass handed to him. Millie isn't going to let family go down for the Wonder Twits!
The scene in the office with Hobbs and his husband was so damn emotional. I found myself tearing up as Brian, Justin and even Ted's pain jumped off the screen. As violent as Brian was, I think Chris should thank his lucky stars that Jennifer wasn't there to deliver the punches. I don't think Chris would have been able to leave under his own steam if she'd been there. Justin, as always, was brave and level-headed during the whole scene. I think him having that small bit of closure during his Pink Posse days helped him to face Chris standing tall while keeping Brian from possible murder charges (no doubt Ted, Justin, Frank and Austin would have helped him hide the body but still...).
As always, Michael and Lindsay's sense of entitlement was front and center but they messed with the WRONG woman!! I don't think the Stupids are ready to feel the claws of Talon. The nerve of Lindsay and Michael to think she was the maid....WHAT?!?!?! I think I would have tossed their asses out right then and there but apparently Talon is a woman of great restraint. But then again she must have to be to get involved with Luther Stark. And she called Zeph.....WHOO-WEE!!!! They ain't ready!!!!!
Speaking of Luther....LMAO!!!! Not so much the big shot and charmer he thought he was...LOL I'm glad that Xanthe is going ahead with her life and that she has done pretty much everything to cut Luther out of her life. It was time that someone taught him just how expendable he really is. I have a feeling he'll be learning that same lesson in a million different ways by the end of TROS!
As for Brian and Justin's personal connection with Zeon.... LOL!!! Brilliant and Hilarious! Well one thing is for certain and two things, for sure, Zeon must have an awesome story to tell. I don't think that he's forgotten Brian and Justin but just had to relegate them to the back of his mind....for now. Either way, I'm soooo looking forward to that conversation!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:41 am Title: Chapter 6
Great work. LOVED Chris's answer.
~Lorie
Date: Jan 10, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
Had to wipe the water I sprayed all over the computer screen at the last part. OMFG! Fuck me that...........WAS UTTERLY BRILLIANT! I kind of had a feeling something like that would happen, but the way you wrote it....Priceless!
Back to the top though...Jen has layed it out to the those 2 boys clearly and did not mince words. It really doesn't matter who anyone is, they will never stand a chance against that group. They are family, whether by blood or not. Jen is a lioness with all who she considers her, and Lord help anyone who tries anything.
Very heartwarming reunion for Thomas and his folks. Kiki is a gem. I'm so glad she's been getting such great parts in these stories.
Zander freaked me out for a second there, but all fears were alleviated. HA! Oh Luther....I'd almost feel sorry for you if you weren't such a completly hateful bastard. He deserves everythign coming to him. What a joy it will be to watch. I'm there will be much angst before the inevitable happens, but in teh meantime will make for fantastic reading! Having Luther actually meet L&M is going to be another fun filled adventure. I'm sure afte r10 minutes he's going to regret ever signing them on. The suits and charges etc won't be overturned apparently, and he's going to soon discover what utter pains in the ass those 2 are. How utterly useless they will be in his plans.
Loving this and looking forward to the nex update, Thank goodness you are so regular!
(still chuckling over Craig and Chris..."Mark"BWAHAHAHAH!)
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
Lovely and what's her name?
Mark.
I dearly rly love you. I burst out laughing.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Hahahhah i can just imagine Craig's reaction to that😅😅😅So Chris finally dealt with his sexuality?I just hope he doesn't agree to what the evil Craig is offering him..
Zee is so sweet,all the years that he fight with her twin but still she remembered about his allergy,wow that's a real love..
And Zeus is kind of afraid of Jen.Well he should have when mama bear try to protect her cabs she won't care who's the opponent🤔🤔
And last can we have a vivid detail of Menno and Solomon inside the office?? (blushing here)i think it would be so HOT watching two huge guy going at it like there's no care in the world..But most of all i missed B & J in action😘😘😘
Another great chapter,thanks for updating...
Author's Response:
Oh you're going to love C7 and C8....
Date: Jan 10, 2017 6:19 am Title: Chapter 6
That was good.