[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 6
Chris Hobbs I would Kiss You if I Still Didn't Want To Kick Your Ass!! (Is Mark Hot, Does he know the whole story and how did the Parentals take the news?)
Perhaps it is finally time to put the ghost of Chris Hobbs to rest?
I don't know if Justin and Brian are ready to be in the same room as Hobbs but maybe a letter or phone call could help them all move on?
Happy that Zee's brothers are stepping up to stand by their sister and make their father pay.
Mel always knock!! rofl
Solomon is ready for New York I don't think Michael and Lindsay have realized that a change of venue won't help their chances but it will be funny to watch:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 6
My goodness what a fantastic chapter. First off I'm gonna go with Thomas being a chef and Emmy and Zee needing help. Now that they have Cara all they need is Thomas. Then on to Luther and everything falling apart for him. Xanthe has him on the hang up list, Solomon has New York locked up so that what ever he has planned for Lindsay and Michael won't work, then we have Ted siccing Tobias onto Craig and last but not least Chis is married to Mark!!!! Perfect.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:10 am Title: Chapter 6
It seems that all these devious plans they have are backfiring right out the gate. And we all knew how deep in the closet Chris was...
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:02 am Title: Chapter 5
I forgot to say how much I like the Thomas and Kiki parts from the last chapter. And now we have Luther with his daughter-in-law and someone else? Good thing Xanthe has enough scruples to leave Luther high and dry and give one of the brothers a call. With four brothers all starting with Z I'm getting them confused. Zeon is allergic to appricots? At least Zee managed to keep him from eating. The messy feast sounded mouthwatering.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:48 am Title: Chapter 6
You brought tears to my eyes with Zee's brothers ready to rally around her. Then just about gave me a heart attack with Hobb's reply to Craig. OMG you are so good!
Fantastic upate, thanks for sharing. Wishing for an update very soon please and thanks.
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2017 3:38 am Title: Chapter 4
It appears that it's going to take awhile for Zee to forgive Zeus. Shame that Ron and Nancy fell for Lindsay's bull and sent her money. Too much money in my opinion.
Date: Jan 10, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 6
Chris -1, Craig - zip. Can just picture Craig's jaw on the floor.
Zander and Zee - 1, Luther - nada. Luther is going to be unimpressed with the Doublemint Twits.
Do we get to see Talon getting a clue?
Glad to see that the brothers are banding together to be the big brothers that htey should have been.
Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ahhh...Craig and Luther won't know what him them
Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Had to laugh with regards to Xanthe. score 1 for the girl. Now....I'm wondering how long before Talon figures stuff out. Will she follow the same course as Xanthe or will she stick by her money maker?
As for Nancy and Ronald.Oh dear lordy......When will those 2 learn?!! They've been screwed over enough by Lindsey, yet their first instinct is to throw money as soon as she cries for help. Once they realized, it was too late. How many more times will it take for them to just STOP?? I want to smack them up side the head Debbie style.
Luther and Craig in cahoots is no surprise. Luther kind of reminds me of Trump. So incredibly narcissistic that he assumes he can do anything without any repercussions. That whatever rules he creates, must be followed by everyone EXCEPT himself. He can do whatever and whoever he wants. That people wouldn't DARE go up against him, and if they do....they'll pay. Sadly, it's typical school yard bullying bullshit. Hypocritical and entitlement issues in abundance. In the end, they will get what's coming to them. Craig on the otherhand, is simply the bullies sidekick. A bit player real;ly. He'll go down faster than Luther I would imagine. I highly doubt he has any idea what he'll be up against when he tries to take on Justin, Brian, Jen and all the rest. He'll take teh fall long before Luther does I'm sure. Like the typical bully though, Luther will hang him out to dry just to save his own ass. It's going to be such fun watching Luther, Craig and whoever else go down.
Lindsey and Michael thuse far are pretty much still blips. I assume they also will get involved with Luther and Craig. That should be fun. lol. They aren't intelligent enough to take on the RTOAF. They also stupid enought to think that Luther would "look after them" if they side with him. Please...the man would throw them under the bus before either of them could even blink.
The intrigue in this third part is and is going to be fantastic!! A real cat and mouse game to see who is in the forefront. Seems that Zee's, Zeus's and Zeon's connections will serve them well though and will hopefully keep them one step ahead.
Absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!! Very exciting!! Oh I can't wait for more!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 09, 2017 7:11 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooh it should be interesting when all of them face each other....Luther doesn't know that his enemies is step ahead of his game,thanks to Xanthie..But i'm really worried about JustinðŸ˜Just hoping he can overcome facing Hobbs and Craig again with the help of the family specially Brian..
Zee was so sweet and adorable when she's angry to Zeon but risk like everything just for him not to get hurt🤗🤗
Thanks for updating😚
Date: Jan 09, 2017 4:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Boy, you have all the villans in this one, hope they ALL get their arses kicked to HELL.
Fabulous!
Thank for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 1:15 am Title: Chapter 5
Luther is going to wish he had stayed in bed...in Siberia
Starks are talking and that is not good for Luther and his idiot cohorts.
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 5
Luther is such a Hypocrite!!
Neither Talon or Xanthe are pure black yet it is okay for him to sleep with them, man I want to punch that man in his smug, arrogant face.
At least the family can see Craig and Chris coming this time so no one will be blindsided, does Luther plan for Lindsay to get involved with Zee's ex cause I doubt she will pay to tear the apart and he deserves what he gets for even being seen with Lindsay.
So Luther is only a millionaire (More like way shy of a billion right?) and he is giving money to Craig how will the RTOAF deal with that information?
Zee, Zeus and Zeon are in the same room the next chapter is going to be very interesting.
Author's Response:
I was thinking he is more along the lines of an arrogant misogynistic fuckwit!
Oh RTOAF are going to deal big time...and 3 Zs become 5....
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2017 1:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Ron and Nancy how many times are you going to let Lindsay make a fool out of you and con you out of your money?
Next time just hang up unless you plan on declaring yourselves incompetent and just letting the spoiled brats run the world?
Not surprising Luther lied to his son (Craig and he must be old golfing buddies) he would never give up control to any of his children and I bet he got off playing them against each other and especially Zee.
Zeus and Zee are slowly make some headway but it is going to take time to forgive all the heartache and pain.
I hope Thomas will be ready to see his parents and that they can leave the past alone and just build on a future where they are all happy.
Michael and Lindsay must be high twenty thousand isn't going to last in New York it wouldn't have lasted in Canada the way they spend.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: Jan 08, 2017 1:26 am Title: Chapter 4
Love it. Linz and Mikey did all of this to themselves, Fabulous!
Nice small stepfor Zee and Zeus.
Ronald and Nancy will never learn.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next!
JoAnn
Date: Jan 07, 2017 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Del sure can smack really hard if the bruise on Zeus face is still visible..That's the mother never to tolerate a son's stupidity...Unlike Nancy just jumping on her daughter's riscue without learning the real story first..
Hoping Zeus and Zee would make up sooner,and then when Zeon comes they both could deal with him together..
Can't wait for the next chapter..Thanks for sharing😘
Date: Jan 07, 2017 11:36 am Title: Chapter 3
Yaaay it's getting more interesting each day🤗🤗Woow so Zeus and Zeon both got tricked by their greedy father,oooh i hope they let him pay good for what he did and for what he's about to do🤔I'm worried about Justin though when Luther contact Craig and Chris,bcos both their presence still effect Justin..
Date: Jan 07, 2017 11:13 am Title: Chapter 3
So Zeus is really on Zee's side.
Boy Mikey and Lin are really getting around.
Fantastic update, thanks for sharing. Anxious for next, please.
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2017 5:39 am Title: Chapter 3
I forgot to ask what did Lydia do to Robert Craswell and will we be seeing him and that slime Campbell Lutz again???
:)
Date: Jan 07, 2017 4:45 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG, I love the deportation!!!! Someone had to put a bug in immigration's ear about that one... AND to have someone waiting at the airport, PRICELESS!!!!
Date: Jan 07, 2017 4:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Luther using Justin in his vendetta to bring Zee to heel? He won't have to worry about her. Brian is going to rip him apart limb from limb and if, IF there are any pieces left, then he'll give him to Zaden. You know, I almost feel sorry for Luther.
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2017 3:18 am Title: Chapter 3
So Luther wants to bring Craig and Chri Hobbs into this fight to rattle Justin, he is going to learn painfully No One Messes With Sunshine!!!
Zeus may not be a A-hole but he still has some groveling to do, looking forward to meeting another Stark brother. (Time for Mama Stark to try and fix her family?)
Michael and Lindsay got kicked out of Canada and Pittsburgh that is Hilarious, no one wants to deal with their trifling Asses anywhere, Zee was smart to get that restraining order they will be stupid enough to try to sneak back into Pittsburgh again and I hope they will get arrested.
Like all idiots Luther doesn't know Who He Is Fucking With!!!
Will Joan, Claire and her kids be making a appearance too?
Building up to something good :)
Date: Jan 07, 2017 3:01 am Title: Chapter 3
If it were only that easy to get rid of them.
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2017 2:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Okay it seems Zeus isn't the bad guy we thought he was. Lindsay and Michael didn't learn anything if they are up to their old tricks of calling in sick. Nice to see they were deported. Now how do you manage to stop them from going to NY?
Date: Jan 06, 2017 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow they didn't recognize Zeus,bcoz maybe they never meet any of Zee's brother specially the one who's the spitting image of her twin brother..But poor Zee it's still hurt her that her own twin left her behind to deal with Luther..
Author's Response:
You're right they've never met/seen either Zeus or Zeon...that's going to change big time...just to clear up something. Zeus is the elest brother and Zeon is Zee's non identical twin. Sorry if I confused you.