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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2017 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

I hope Emmett can find his way in all of this. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm upset with Emmett right now... he's being obstinant.. he knows he screwed up, but he just wont back down :( 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 7

I like Justin's character,being so independent and blunt...Standing up against his mother is really new to our always polite and obidient son..I don't like much Jen here,it's like anybody can dictate her what to do,but listening and agreeing to Debbie is beyond me..Not the Jen we know and love..And so is Emmett,what happen to the bright queen who can always see through Brian's b""""""t??It's a good thing Ted didn't tolerate his being disrespectful toward Brian and let him know about what he felt about his bestfriend depending the whiny brat..Go Ted,i cheer for your loyalty toward Brian,you're the best one to get the title Bestfriend of him..

Loved it,thanks for sharing!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:36 am Title: Chapter 7

Loving the way Brian and Justin met and are willing to see where a possible relationship may take them despite of the baby.

Jennifer really needs.... a dildo, a man, a brain, ALL OF THE ABOVE but most of all she needs to find herself AWAY from the Novotnys. It's quite funny that she took Debbie and Michael fishing for information as interests. I do declare that Justin's financial independence makes him the most attractive of all.

As always, Michael makes me want to write a bulldozer into YOUR story to run his blank-brain butt over! How the hell does one arrange an orgy in someone else's house and then call mommy when the expected reaction doesn't go their own way? Yeah... Only Michael MITCH Novotny could do something so underhanded and stupid. Is there really any wonder why he is of no interest a self-assured man like Justin? I doubt very seriously that David dropped Michael because of Brian's interference. It was surely because of Michael's constant obsession with all things Brian and he no longer felt he should be a placeholder. In addition to that, Michael's intelligent-deficient and childish ass is beyond off-putting! Who the hell would want to be involved with a manchild who is still attached to his mother's tits?

Well now that Brian has removed himself from Michael's orbit, what will be the excuse that the asshole can't get a man now? As for the other idiot who can't let Brian go, Lindsay's going to turn into a green-vomit-spitting devil when she finds out that she isn't special anymore and that there is another blond who is keeping Brian's attention and having his baby through the good old-fashioned way. WHOO-WEE!! Brian, Justin, Terry and Daphne are about to really have their hands full. I hope Brian has an iron-clad agreement in place for Gus because we all know that Bitch ain't gonna be happy!

Definitely looking forward to the rest of this story!!

happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:31 am Title: Chapter 7

Well, the talks could have gone better.  But after trying to fix eggs and sausage I don't see how.  I am loving Ted in this.  Emmett, while sweet, is backing the wrong horse. Maybe he should stay with Mikey and Deb?

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

He called their moms? Who does that?  Mikey you will never get Justin this way.  And planning an orgy is just wrong.  Brian has self control even if you don't believe that.

As for Jen and Deb, wow, I hope they see the light and cut the cord. Brian was right to threaten Deb.  Jen needs to listen to Justin she has no say in his partners. Emmett better wise up! 

I love that Justin is bitchy.  I love that he yelled at them and put them out.  Brian seems to know what he wants and Justin is it.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

Emmett wake up and smell the reality Michael doesn't need a friend he has his mommy to fight all his battles, stop opening your mouth and open your eyes Michael isn't a friend he is a user.

Deb should no better then to take on Brian he knows the key to her closet  and if she keeps spewing her vitriol not only would I open it, I would invite what comes out to Family Dinner.

When are people in Glass house going to learn not to throw stones?

Jennifer is going to lose her children and any access to her grandchild if she doesn't remove her head from Michael and Debbie's Ass!

Treating Justin like a child is not the way to garner his respect and at this  point she is walking a fine line of being tossed to the sharks.

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 7

Finally, Brian tells Deb and Michael part of what is on his mind. As it won't be enough, I can't wait what will happen next.

Jennifer is too much like Deb, but Molly is not going to stay silent.

Ted is to die for: honest and faithful, and so much more; a true "best friend".

Emmett is still digging; if he continues, the tide will arrive and he will drown in his own stupidity. Too bad because he's a sweet guy who doesn't want to take side. Sometimes, it's mandatory to do so.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

Not sure if what Justin said to Jen will actually sink in or be at all effective. I think he's serious about not having a relationship with her, so she'd better listen up. He's right in that Deb and Michael weren't being inquisitive for the sake of getting to know Jen adn Justing etc, they're quite simply busybodies just like he suggested. Perhaps Deb was already planning to try to get justin and Michael together, especially knowing his background and current status.

Debbie needs a smack like she gives to Michael. to think she actually believes that brian wanted Michael. Admittedly, I shivered in revulsion at the thought....yick! She also needs to realize that Brian will spill the beans if she's not careful. I think however that he will just end things with both of them. He's had enough. Can't blame him, and they've brought it upon themselves really.

I want to shout from teh rooftops that I adore Ted in this! He's telling Emmett exactly what he needs to hear. Now we have to see if Emmett will listen. Like he said, his mouth keeps getting him into trouble, but there are ways to stop it. He just needs to start thinking first. Stop assuming the best of Michael and the worst of Brian. Ted standing up to Emmett, supporting Brian was most excellent. Emmett certainly wasn't expecting that at all. While justin will attempt to smooth things over, he'll only put up with so much. He's going to let Emmett know that he won't put up with any crap. Emmett can stay friends with Michael if he so chooses, but he can't bring Michael into his home, his life or his relationships.

Many truths brought home in this chapter. Now we get to see of anyone listens or actually believes what they've been told.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Emmett stop digging you're about to hit China!!!

Really, Jen is that anyway to get Justin to let you back in?

That is what  I have come to expect from Deb and Michael SMH

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