Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 8

yup, I don't like Lindsay.. but I'm so glad Mel is there as a GOOD backup.  Her and Brian may not be best friends, but she is honest and was good for Justin to hear what she had to say. and Gus seems to know the truth too :) 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 8

Well now...this is interesting! Love this switch up. Mel is with Leda. I like that idea. Ben is now father to Mel's Annie. I like that as well. He'd be such a great father. Also good that in this he doesn't have HIV. Definitely makes for some change ups. Surprising that Mel is so supportive of Brian. 

Poor Gus. Must be so mixed up. I knows that his Mom, (Lindsey) is useless and seemingly uncaring as a mother save for how she seems publicly. He's simply a tool to get what she wants from Brian. That seems pretty obvious from what Gus has said as well as their interactions. He's not close to her, yet he's still hearingwhat she says about Brian. I hope he's willing to give Justin a chance.

Lindsey....well, I guess she's trying to discredit Brian as much as possible. Doesn't want him to have a life outside of her. (or Michael). Her giggling responses about his tricking were completly infantile. At least Justin is mature enough to not take in what others are saying and allowing his own impressions of Brian take a front seat. What's with her attitude towards Ben? Aaaaahhhhhhh. I guess she doesn't like being told she's a shitty mom? Typical. I look forward to seeing more of that. 

Not sure what to think about this Terry dude. I know he's Justin's agent, but he seems to be over stepping. Justin has already made a name for himself and could paint anywhere, and just show up for shows etc. something about him is niggling at me. How close is he to Lindsey? Is she trying to manipulate him somehow in order to have him interfere with him and Brian's relationship? Yea....not trusting him at the moment. Again, looking forward to reading more on that.

Thanks!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 3:10 am Title: Chapter 8

Ouch take that Lindsay!!Brian should have dump your asses a long time ago together with some of the so called friends and family..
I like Mel's character in here,she seems not to let Lindsay get to her and she's with Leda is just a bunos..And Ben as a father to her kid is something new and even better than the whiny brat...

As for Justin,yap that's our little spitfire and ever so polite wasp twink..Good for you sunshine always dealing with that cunt in a deadly waspy way is better and more effective...

Thanks for updating😙

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 2:58 am Title: Chapter 8

Lindsay was her usual charming self I can see why Gus doesn't want  to be around her, Mel is with Leda and Ben is spending time with his daughter Anne?

Mel wants to be friends with Brian? Hello Bizarro Land lol

I love that Brian is standing  up for himself and fighting for his chance  at happiness instead of just taking the crap the others dish out.

Terry would be wise to remember that he handles the art but Justin is in  control at all times and if pushed it won't be too hard to find a new agent or a new friend.

Notice Lindsay didn't freak about the baby did she tune that out or has it not hit her yet?

Can't  Wait for the Next Chapter :)

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 2:23 am Title: Chapter 8

Loving this turn of events! Mel and Brian getting along; Justin putting Lindsay's pretentious ass in her place; Mel with Leda which is a MUCH better fit and Ben is a Dad!!! Not only that but the selfish cow is on the outskirts of her children’s lives and even they don't want anything to do with her! Poor Gus to have Lindsay’s DNA!!! If only there was a way to remove the strain...

I find disgraceful yet funny that she continually fixes her lips to point out Brian's 'lifestyle.' Yet the man owns two successful businesses while she is constantly chasing the temporary D*ck Sam's slinging. Talk about a trifling tramp!! Yeah, it's definitely time for Brian to drop some dead weight beginning with Lindsay and the Novotnys. I'm still on the fence about Emmett but Mel can definitely hang around. I'm wondering about which side of the issue Terry will fall on though. Hopefully he won't end up like another Jennifer In all this. I can understand looking out for his client's career but Justin does have the ability to see what he wants and how to get it. Perhaps he should keep that thought in mind when Justin finally calls him back.

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle