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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 6:29 am Title: Chapter 24

The plot thickens... Second stalker or the first and only one?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 24

Ahoh.  So Michael is the secret stalker?  Or is this another ruse.  Love that Justin thinks about Gus.  Can you get Lindsay arrested soon?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 24

Deb lay off the crack pipe and wake up to reality Michael can't get anyone because he is a Whiny Mama's boy, with the personality of a twelve year and the intelligence of a dirty dishrag.

No one wants a little boy who runs to Mommy when he can't have his way and the decibel level of Michael's voice in full whine makes dogs cry.

Lindsay like Michael wants love, adoration and devotion handed to her on a gold platter, too bad her selfish acts will just get her flat ass thrown in jail.

I agree with Cameron having surveillance on Lindsay is a good thing and will only strengthen the case for the custody hearing.

Brandon talking Michael into turning his attention back on Brian definitely has him at the top of stalker list.

Brian and Justin are just growing closer while some around them are getting more loony.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 23

Brandon is clearly a nut, but is he the stalker??? I don't know, lol.  I'm thinking there's two people, but and I don't know. Mikey keeps ending up where he shouldn't be.  I wonder if someone is using him to throw off suspicion? 

Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 23

The tension is still building up and Brandon made maybe his first mistake.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 23

Brandon is getting more and more creepy by the minute. He's taking things way too far with trying to get Brian arrested. Show's how far he may be willing to go. He may have Carl, and the mayor looking over his shoulder going forward, but if he's unstable in any way, he may think himself immune or smart enought to get away with things.

Jenn is taking strides in trying to fix teh realtionship. Will she continue? Not sure. Old habits die hard sometimes. I do hope for the sake of Justin, Brian and the baby that she does. I don't doubt for a second that Justin will cut ties immediately if she starts up again though.

Not sure about Lindsey and Michael and what they're capable of. Lindsey is only looking after her own best interests. She doesn't care about justin or even Brian it seems. She seems to be very easily manipulated. Michael is just blind and deaf to what anyone says to him. He hears what he wants to hear. If Justin says he's not intersted, it just makes him that much more of a challenge to prove he's a better choice than Brian. Not sure how far he'd go either. Is he really a stupid mamma's boy or does he really have some real smarts and is able to pull off some serious machinations. Will have to wait and see. Not long though I hope!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 3:24 am Title: Chapter 23

This just keeps getting better and better.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:30 am Title: Chapter 23

This is killing me,who's the real stalker?Everyone is getting suspeciou?But anyway i like how Justin told Lindsay and Michael off..They should move fast to throw Lindsay's ass in jail before she can do anything to Justin,bcoz I think she's capable of doing the bad things just to get her way,and worst of all she could get Gus and use him for her advantage..And Michael,when he's gonna grow up and act like an adult??
I hope this time Jennifer means everything she said otherwise she could loss Justin for good.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:23 am Title: Chapter 23

None of this stress is good for the baby.  Justin may have to learn to stay home occassionally. lol

I'm glad Brandon is getting punished.

Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2017 2:09 am Title: Chapter 23

Brandon is looking crazier by the second did he really think that stunt would work?

Now he has Carl really looking at him closely and the Mayor is watching his every move too.

He is getting desperate to be alone with Justin and that means he is getting dangerous.

I want to trust that Jennifer is going to stop trying to control Justin but a part of me can't believe a word she says, right now it is Wait and See mode until she does something stupid.

So Lindsay is still in Pittsburgh I think they should up the security around Gus I wouldn't put it past her to try to take him, or for Michael to try it since they seem to be working together for different reasons.

Will Delusional Debbie be showing up to accuse Justin of the sun shining too bright and it made Wittle Mikey uncomfortable?

There are so many suspects both male and female that I really don't know who the actual stalker is?

You Truly Have Me Stumped About What Is Going To Happen Next :)

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 9:12 am Title: Chapter 22

If Brandon had nothing to do with this he's certainly making himself look guilty.  I'm still thinking it might be more than one person.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 8:33 am Title: Chapter 22

Still my top suspect - Mikey.  He never had Justin to have him stolen from him; he was in NYC and sort of caught; and I think he ransacked his apartment to throw off suspicion.

Im thinking Brandon is a red herring but he may just be the bad guy. If he isn't then he's just a big groupie and wants out Justin. 

Have I listed Cameron? He's bossy and wouldn't share.

I wonder where Lindsay is? Frankly, I think it's Sam.  He's creepy and narcissistic.

Finally, I want to know what Justin ate at the ice cream parlor.  45 mins in an ice cream place, I bet he had a brownie, lol.

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 5:45 am Title: Chapter 22

I hope Carl will act on this quickly.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 5:32 am Title: Chapter 21

Bravo Ted!!! Nice speech.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 5:12 am Title: Chapter 22

Brandon being all creepy and trying to touch Justin while I think Michael spray painted his place to hopefully get Justin, Brian and Ted in trouble.

Brandon could be the stalker after what he tried to do to Justin and what he did do to Blake plus grabbing his gun, he is behaving very irrationally and seems quite desperate to be alone with Justin.

Deb seems quite desperate to protect Michael from any accusations of stalking, too bad it won't work and I doubt Michael is going to stay away.

Where The Hell Is Lindsay???

She can't be the only one to go down for being a dumbass!!

Is it really Brandon?

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 4:17 am Title: Chapter 22

My guess is Michael is the one doing the spray painting.  Now you are so devious, one moment we suspect Brandon, the next it seems it couldn't be him and now we suspect him again.  

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 4:13 am Title: Chapter 22

Good good stuff.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 21

Had to chuckle at Leda. Disappointed that she wasn't considered the stalker. So typically her. Hopefully Ben is still clean despite his cheating boyfriend. 

Good that Mel and Brian seem to be hashignthings out properly. Mel really understanding that all her anger and jealousy should be directed and Lindsey rather than Brian. That she's been unfair towards Brian.

So is Lindsey really in Italy or is that just a ploy? She's in a whole heap of trouble either way. What recourses will be taken against her and Sam? Justin is right. this is his career and he can't just sit back and let this shit go without some kind of consequences. Sam's name will be mud after this gets out. He's already losing his following apparently so this will just end things for him I'm sure. 

Ted with Deb?!?! EPIC! He said the truth that so many would love to say. That woman is delusional with a capitol D. Assuming he'd just rather have $ than keep pursuing Michael. YICK! Loved that the reason was mainly HER rather than Michael.

So not only does Brian need to watch his back but apparently Cameron does now as well. At this point, I have so many supsects going through my head I don't even know where to begin. I think I'll justwait till you divulge it and then I can say either YES! I guessed that person or else I'll read it and thinkg..."WTF?!?!" Eitherway I'm looking forward to it.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 21

I think I've listed most every character as a suspect.  I'm leaning toward split personality Mikey.  

Sam knew he was breaking the law and Lindsay as usual doesn't care.  What a mess!  I love it

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 11:38 am Title: Chapter 21

And the plot thickens.  I hope we can figure out who all the players are soon.  The suspense is killing me.

Please let Mel and Brian get custody of Gus.  Lindsay is such an unfit parent.

Thanks for the update.

Hugs,

Jessica

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 6:03 am Title: Chapter 21

So Mel and Leda are wanting another little one.  At least Mel is backing Brian.  Now we seem to have eleminated Brandon as a suspect.  You love to keep us guessing.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 21

They should make a move about Lindsay befre she can hide...
Debbie,is she crazy or just plain stupid?Really embarrassing herself for what,for the sake of her son?It must be a big slap what Ted said to her.
Aaaaah who could that be?If its not Brandon,maybe Michael but with accomplish right?Anyway whoever it is,he's very good..I just hope he won't start targeting Brian..

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 21

They should make a move about Lindsay befre she can hide...
Debbie,is she crazy or just plain stupid?Really embarrassing herself for what,for the sake of her son?It must be a big slap what Ted said to her.
Aaaaah who could that be?If its not Brandon,maybe Michael but with accomplish right?Anyway whoever it is,he's very good..I just hope he won't start targeting Brian..

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2017 2:27 am Title: Chapter 21

Okay I have no idea who The Stalker is and that just ramps up the tension.

Deb being her normal delusional self isn't surprising perhaps she and Michael can share a padded cell?

Lindsay is in Italy?

Mel finally coming to realize that Brian had nothing to do with her relationship with Lindsay and that the things she did before was just her lashing out at the wrong person.

Brian and Mel have grown up and realized that they can live without Lindsay in their lives, they just need to protect Gus from his mother's manipulations.

Need to beef up security at Kinnetik and around Brian because the stalker is getting closer.

Reviewer: sandid Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 20

Is this still a work in progress.  I sure hope so.  

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