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Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2017 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 29

OMG!!! Michael just needs a rubber room with lots of padding. Mayb Deb does too.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 28

Brian and Justin just can't seem to catch a break they get out one frying pan only to hop in another.

Brian and Justin really need to practice the subtle art of communication and trust so they can avoid all these misunderstandings.

Debbie needs to face her lies and own up to the fact that she forced a fourteen year old abused kid to be Father, Protector, Best Friend and Unrealistic Boyfriend to her spoiled child and that Michael is the way he is because she never wanted him to grow up (I mean we all know Michael is the real Peter Pan who never wanted to leave Never Never Land cause Mommy wouldn't let him) because she can't stand being on her own and neither can Michael.

Michael in typical obtuse fashion is going to run to Brian to fix his problems and Deb is going to put on that old broken record to try to bully Brian and they are going to meet Justin's bad side before they get arrested. 

Perhaps it is time to hit them both between the eyes with the truth before the cops come to take them away??

And if Mel wants to continue to be Lindsay's Bitch then she can do it alone because no one is playing her games anymore.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 28

Mel's going to have to stop her bitching.  Funny how Michael found out about his dad.  Blake investigating does not mean that Brian told anyone about Michael's father.  loving this.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 28

wow... Debbie astounds me with her ability to be able to make everything EVERYONE else's fault, but never her or Michael... she lied, but it's Brian's fault because he knew... BITCH

I understand Brian's knee jerk reaction to seeing the attorney folder, but he really needs to try harder with Justin, but i do believe him saying he wants a future, with maybe more children was a great start!

Mel needs to stop letting Lindsay pull her shit on her!

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 28

Whooooa what's wrong with Mel,it's like she's becoming the person when she was with Lindsay before,but because that cunt was manipulating her but nowthat she has Leda why Mel is letting Lindsay get to her!!??And really using Justin as an excuse for her behavior is not cool at all..And for Justin,that's right sunshine don't let Brian get away with anything..

I love this chapter.Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:21 am Title: Chapter 28

Glad they talked and made peace.

Deb's lie is out now and it's Brian's fault, as usual...

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2017 11:50 am Title: Chapter 27

Yep, time to deal with Mel.  Once all of this is handled Brian and Justin can go back to slowly getting to know each other and enjoying their new baby.  What a crash course ifpn love, so much drama. I love it!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2017 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 27

Mel better get over her constant need to control everything and stop looking for problems it she will lose Leda and Gus.

Just because she can't get over Lindsay is not Brian, Justin or Leda's problems, if you bend over backwards to help Lindsay but can't see that Gus is too young to be treated like an adult that is on you.

I thought Mel was trying to move on?

Seems she went five steps forward to go back twenty steps back and at this point is she really ready to take on Brian and Justin???

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2017 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 27

I'm glad B and J are back and safe... at least from the stalker... Mel starting up again is a bitch... she better snap out of it

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2017 5:38 am Title: Chapter 27

It's nice that everyone is concerned about Gus.  But with Lindsay out of the way I don't see the problem.  Neither does Leda it seems.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2017 5:36 am Title: Chapter 27

If only Gus could have a stable arrangement to share his life with Mel and Brian.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 1:28 pm Title: Chapter 26

Carl, lets rough him up and make him talk, lol.  Ok,  so Sam took Justin and Brandin took Justin from Sam and Mikey would have but didn't get the chance?  Simple? Nope, but perfect.  I am also counting myself as right because I had everyone as a suspect, lol.

I'd  like to hear the why.  Then perhaps Brian and Justin can relax and have Bella.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 3:01 am Title: Chapter 26

seriously?  Sam and Lindsay took Justin, but Brandon actually WAS the stalker??? so many twists and turns... I love it!!! :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 2:54 am Title: Chapter 25

I thought Deb got a clue, but then she tries to back pedal HIS way out of it

 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 2:47 am Title: Chapter 24

I'm sure Debbie can find an excuse for all the obsessed pictures

Lindsay is another one who has no basis in reality

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 2:34 am Title: Chapter 23

I can't imagine Michael being smart enough to do any of this... Deb maybe, but it wouldn't get her Mikey anything, so I doubt it

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 22

of course Debbie and Michael see that nobody else could do this... small minded assholes!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 2:13 am Title: Chapter 21

this stalker is just getting insane... I can only guess it is Ethan and we just haven't met him yet... unless it is someone totally new... creepy!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 20

Debs just pisses me off... intentionally ignorant!

So glad our boys are seeing it's LOVE

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 1:40 am Title: Chapter 19

way to go Em... but gee, will Deb listen? doubtful

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 1:10 am Title: Chapter 18

It almost seems to easy to be Brandon... I have my doubts

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 12:57 am Title: Chapter 17

I don't want the blonde hair gone... better only be temporary lol

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 12:43 am Title: Chapter 16

I'm glad Justin and Brian are getting to know more about each other and stick by each other

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 12:24 am Title: Chapter 15

wow, Jen is worse than I thought... and Debbie needs to take a step (or a hundred) steps back!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 30, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 14

the fact that Brian offered himself to Justin, even without prompting, was THE BEST

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