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Reviewer: Keykoles77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2019 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 16

On the edge of my seat the whole time!!!

Loved it! 💋💋💋😍😍😍❤❤❤

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2018 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 16

Omg loved this story it was so sad in places....poor Brian. Fabulous read

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2017 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 16

Holy crap what a chapter! I kinda wish Michael ended up in jail. True asshole til the end...my God Deb! They definitely got what they deserved though. Great story, really enjoyed it, well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Glo. I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I appreciate the feedback:)

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2017 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 16

I absolutely loved this story. You have a writing style that totally draws me in. Thank you for sharing your work with us. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Susi, thanks for the comments, I appreciate it a lot. It's rewarding to know that someone liked your work, and thanks for letting me know:)

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2017 12:41 am Title: Chapter 16

Read the entire story in a short time. I had to force myself to switch off the laptop and go to bed at night. Girl, this is one good story.

I love the softer and gentler Brian in this story. He felt so relaxed and happy with his life.

A big thumbs down for Michael. An arrogant, self possesed, cruel and egotistical little bastard of a manchild. To play with his best friends mind was an absolute no no for me. And Debbie? She should learn to count to ten before jumping in to solve matters for her precious little boy. Well at least Mickey got what he deserved.

Thanks for a wonderful read.

XOXO

Soirsa 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, I truly appreciate it. I'm so happy that you liked the story. 

Godbless:)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2017 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 16

Excellent storytelling! Totally binge-worthy! Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag. Thanks for the comments, I loved each one of them. I'm so glad you liked the story:)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 16

What an amazing story!!!

Thank you for posting it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking time to write a review, I appreciate it:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2017 1:42 am Title: Chapter 16

This is a fabulous ending.  Michael and Deb couldn't just accept things, they both had to go and mess things up.  I'm surprised that Carl was able to overlook their manipulations.  I'm so happy to see that Brian and Justin are still friends with Ted and Emmett as well as Ben and Sam.  I've enjoyed this story but even more so this last chapter.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

With Carl, love is blind, I guess;)

Thanks you so much for all your reviews, I truly appreciate it.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for a happy ending. They should have sue Michael. He is always given va pass.



Author's Response:

I kind of like the idea of karma, what goes around comes back around. It's more painful to see the people you tried to destroy living a happy and successful life with someone. That's the worse punishment, I think. And Brian would have agreed with me;)

Thanks!

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 16

Brava!!!

I liked the inverted story telling.  I think Brian and Justin deserved the happy ending they received.  Lindsay got off easy, but I understand that Gus needs his mom, and she did choose Mel finally. As for Deb again a slight pass for grief and being a mom, but I think playing fast and loose with facts is her trait.  

Mikey Mikey, Mikey - he got what he deserved.  When it came down to it and he stole Justin's money, and lied about having other money it ruined the defense of "Oh but I love you".  This Mikey was the perfect monster.  

Thanks for this roller coaster love story, I trully enjoyed it. 

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review, greatly appreciated it:)

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 16

I don't even know where to start. I'm honestly not sure that my mere words could sum up all that this wonderful fic encompassed. It was a daily joy to await a new chapter and it never once disappointed. Incredibly long and emotional chapters. I LOVE long chapters btw. 

B&J get the ending they so well deserve. Brian has come a longway. What a journey it was for him. Leaving so much of his old self behind and embracing the man he was destined to be. Becoming the man he so wanted to become. Acknowledging the challenges that may or may not lay ahead of him and Justin just shows his maturity and his depth of feelings for Justin. He took a look at all he once was and who he had bcome in teh past couple of years and made the decision as to who he wanted to be to make him a better made, husband and father. 

I have to say, I was impressed with Lindsey's honesty. She faced him head on and cam clean with everything from teh time they met forward. That too a lot of guts. While Brian was initially angered by her levels of deceipt, he chose to move forward from it, mind you with a touch of leeriness. They seemed to have developed a much healthier realtionship over time. she's put Mel, Gus and Jenny as her prioroties adn seems to be reaping the benefits.

While I expected most of the behavior from Michael, admittedly a few of his actions threw me, but whatever. Michael will always be Michael sadly. It was Debbie that disappointed me beyond words. She never fully learned her lesson. blindly running to his defense without any knowledge as to what happened. you'd think after what he did initially, she'd be more apt to question the whys and wherefores, but now....she surmises that someone has done her son wrong. I was actully pretty surprised that Carl even stuck it out considering everything he foudn out. He's much more gracious than I could have ever been.

Ted and Emmett truly tried to be "Switzerland" and be friends with everyone, even once B&J compoletely cut ties, but the vitriol that continued to spew from Michael's mouth must've just shake their heads.

Again.....no words. I'm ready to put it onto my Kindle now and am looking forward to the weekend where I can curl up in my comfy chair, relax and read it all together. I know it's going to be one that I keep going back to and re-reading.

Thank you so very much for sharing this treasure with us.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

And thank you so much, Elaine, for the support. It really means a lot to me. It's so rewarding when readers liked what you've written and you guys are more than awesome in making me comfortable posting a story even sometimes I doubt that my work is any good-- with the grammar and everything. So, cheers, guys, and thank you all so much! It's an honor to share my stories to all. 

Hugs~Nadine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 16

Not surprised by the way Michael and Debbie have acted towards Brian and Justin they are just two selfish people who look like grown ups, but are actually the same exact age and feel that everyone should bow down to them and what they.

Who cares who they hurt just as long as they get what they want even finding out everything Michael did to the girls, Justin and how he barely supports his daughter but still she sees Michael as an Angel.

Brian and Justin shoving them both off the cliff and deciding that their happiness is more important than dealing with the constant whining.

Lindsay admitting the truth was a step in the right direction she is owning up to her mistakes and letting Brian set the parameters for their friendship, while she devotes her time to being a good wife and mother to her family.

I doubt Deb is going to be married for very long Carl is only going to take so much of the Deb and Mikey Show before he walks out the door for good.

Brian is finally living the life he wants on his terms with the love of his life and he happy.

A wonderful ending to the story of Brian and Justin that I will enjoy reading over and over again :)

 

 



Author's Response:

I think, Deb was a good person, she just got too blinded when it comes to her son and she always acted without thinking. She also spoiled Michael a lot and that was a major factor on how Michael grow as a man-- or didn't grow, for that matter:)

Thanks!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2017 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 16

LOVED LOVED LOVED this story!!!!

sad that Michael and especially Debbie just never learn... I expect it from Michael, but shame on Debbie for just jumping to defend Michael after what he had already done and just assuming he wouldn't lie... cause he's so known to tell the truth at this point, right? ugh

So happy that Brian, Justin, Ben, the girls and kids (and I think Emmett and Ted) all stayed happy... even if E and T were only there a bit, the only ones who had to be cut off were Michael and Debbie.

I loved this story so much, I was hanging everyday for the next chapter!!!!   more please lol



Author's Response:

I think Debbie gets irrational when it comes to Michael. That's how Michael grows up into thinking it's okay to do whatever he wants because he always gets a pass from his mother since the time he could remember. I strongly believed, that developing a child comes majorly from the house.

Thank you so much!

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