[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Very nice start.. i like it..thank u.
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:23 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I agree with Justin that Brian donating sperm for the girls would be a disaster - but will they be able to steal it anyways? Ack! As for Michael, he really does need to learn to deal with the consequences of his actions on his own. But will he? Hmm. Let's read & see. TAG
Date: Feb 14, 2017 8:47 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I never thought Debbie could be that strong and would listen to all sides. It's a great development.
Author's Response:
Susi
In the show Debbie could be strong with everyone else, now she needs to be srong with Michael.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 11, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Thank you ladies for this wonderful story.
I loved it.
Be it good or not so good, everybody got what they deserved. And yes, Karma's a bitch which Michael and Linday will confirm. I just felt so sorry for Debbie to "loose" her son like that.
I loved how everybody else ended up happy. Especially Ben and Mel who really needed a clean break from their partners. May they live happily ever after. I'd love to see how Brian and Justin will cope with their children growing up. Christian and Tiffany have the best parents a child could ever wish for.
Thank you ladies for sharing this story.
XOXO
meriam
Author's Response:
Meriam
So glad you enjoyed the story.
Debbie may have lost a son but she gained so much more.
Those kids will grow up with the greatest parents and family.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 10, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I do not like MIchael, he is beyond delusional and cant even consider that he is EVER wrong.. he is the ONLY one who is right... duh... not sure why we can't all see that! lol
glad Deb took the time to find out the truth and make Michael deal with his own shitstorm.
I do have my own theory about what Lindsay is planning and to say it will backfire is an understatement... bet she can't fathom Justin being the top! (am I right?) lol
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Michael will always be Michael.
Deb has finally gotten a clue about her son
Keep reading
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 2:39 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Loving this Thanks for another great story
~HUGS~~
Teresa
Author's Response:
Teresa
Glad you're enjoying this story.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2017 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Ok. All caught up & ready to read. Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
Tag,
Hope you like our newest baby.
Thanks
~Chelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 05, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Whoa, for once, Debbie is not following Michael.
As for the munchers, I don't like what they are preparing.
Author's Response:
SNO
Deb finally sees Michael for what he really is a whiney, bratty, overgrown child.
The munchers will learn.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 04, 2017 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I'm so excited to start this sequel,can't wait for what the munchers are planning to do..And Michael well,he got it all wrong,thinking his mother is there for him to the rescue as usual.I just can see his face when he learn that she's not there to defend him..As for Craig,why does he hates Justin so much?and now he's still after him..and I thought Laura learned her lesson but i guess she needs more humiliating and put her ass in jail before she stop.. April Danielle Deb finally sees Michael as he really is, a whiny, self-centered, childish brat. Craig hates Justin for several reasons, he's gay, he found out about his affair, and he is now successful in spite of what Craig tried to do to him. Brian and Justin are very much in love, they just belong together. Thanks for reviewing ~Nichelle & Lorie~
And about our lovebirds,well they just plain sweet and adorable,and so in love with each other..
Author's Response:
Date: Feb 02, 2017 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I know I'm the only person who does, but I actually hope that Lindsay gets Brian's 'genetic material ' and gets pregnant by him. Not because I like her, cause I really don't, but because I can't imagine Brian's life without Gus. That beautiful little boy was everything to him. And unfortunately, there can't be a Gus without a Lindsay. As for Mel having a baby with either Brian or Justin's stolen baby makers, (cause let's face it, Lindsey will screw up and wind up with Brian AND Justin's stuff, or ONLY Justin's stuff) I think JR would have been better off with one of those two ( or hell, even Emmett!) as her father. Ok, everyone can start looking at me like I have two heads now, lol!!!!!
Author's Response:
Jaspersgirl
Brian would be a wonderful father no matter what. Any child would be truly blessed to have those two men as fathers.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 01, 2017 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Excellent beginning to the next part. Deb has declared her side. Mikey and Linds are frightening. I wonder how Linds will solve her problem? Will Justin drop the suit? Will Mikey lose everything? Will Brian die from pleasure? And, will Justin gain some weight somewhere other than his ass? Can't wait for answers to these and more.
Author's Response:
BellaDonne
Deb realized what Michael is really like. There will be more to come from both the weasel and the bitch. It will be interesting. No Justin will not drop the suit. We'll see. Maybe (jk, would never let sexy die). Justin uses the best exercise to burn off what he eats, with Brian to look at who wouldn't? More good stuff to come.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Loving it.
Glad Deb is the sticking up for Michael
Lindsey and Mel I see nothing but trouble coming.
Looking forward to the next (all) chapter.
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Author's Response:
Lorna,
There will definitely be trouble coming, from several places.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 01, 2017 2:27 am Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Oh shit now!
Author's Response:
JP,
Hoping that means you like it. It will be an interesting journey.
Thanks for reviewing
~Chelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Hopefully you have a way to put the kubosh to Mel and Lindsay's manipulation. Love how Emmett steps up for Brian and Justin. Am also pleased that Debbie is seeing her son for the way he really is without making any excuses for him.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
Mel and Lindsay, well they have a lot to do. It will be an interesting ride for them. For Emmett, being strong and honest is the best way for him. Debbie is finally sick and tired of her son's manipulations and sees what others see in her son.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
Proud of Deb for not flying off the handle and taking Michael's word she went to Brian and Justin to get the truth and now Michael is going to learn to deal with the consequences of his actions.
Justin knows Lindsay and Melanie pretty good but I don't remember if they know who Justin is and what will happen to them if they hurt Brian.
Perhaps it is time for the three babies to learn that hurting Brian and Justin has dire consequences, and for Craig and his trollop to learn that they should leave well enough alone.
Bravo for coming back to this story and building up the tension, will have to read the first all over again :)
Author's Response:
BlueMyst,
I hope you will like how this plays out. There are a lot of surprises to come. A lot of people don't take well to being fucked with, as certain people will find out.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 8:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 With Prologue
I am so happy that there is a second part of this story. I really loved "Bound by Fate" and reading the last chapter of it I could not stop thinking what was going to happen next.
Love you and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Steph,
It took a while between real life and the holidays, but we have been working on this since we finished Bound By Fate. Most of it is already written. Very glad you like this story.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~