[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lindsey and craig both are pathetic...i hate them..awesome going.
[Report This]Date: Feb 27, 2017 10:32 am Title: Chapter 2
Sounds like Craig doesn't have much of a chance to get to anyone around Brian or Justin. Good. TAG
Date: Feb 14, 2017 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
Craig is an ass. That's all I have to say. And what the hell will Lindsay try to do? Fishing the condoms out of the trash?
Author's Response:
Susi
Craig is only thinking of ways to help himself.
Lindsay is determined to get what she wants. Any way she can.
Thanks for reviewing.
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 11, 2017 12:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Craig shouldn't get far
and I REALLY think my Lindsay theory is so true... blonde + blonde does not + mini Brian LOL
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Craig is an ass and Karma's a bitch.
Keep reading
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 05, 2017 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
So many plots at the same time, so many evil people.
Author's Response:
SNO
It gives you more reason to keep coming back.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 05, 2017 1:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just wished Daph parents could open up their eyes for what their daughter really wants..How they kicked her out is anyones guess..?But atleast she is a fighter as Justin is and survived as well during those difficult times..
And now that evil Craig is on the lose to destroy them,i don't think so,if Harriet and Jennifer have anything to do with it,Craig is planning a useless plan..
As for Lindsay,why can't she just work her ass off rather than planning to steal some sperm from Brian so that he wouldn't have a choice but to support them?Is she delusional,and Mel how she just gone along with it??!!
On thr way to chapter 3..
Author's Response:
April Danielle
Daphne wasn't kicked out, she left. It will be explained at the dinner.
Karma's a bitch.
Lindsay thinks she is above that and should be taken care of, to her money is expected, not earned.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle and Lorie~
Date: Feb 04, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great start to this story. I love the way Craig is being blocked by nearly everybody.
I'm can't wait to see Lindsay breaking into the loft to get to Brians sperm. I;m looking forward to the look on her face were she to end up with the wrong sperm and one or even both ladies ending up giving birth to a little blond bundle of joy. But then again I could be wrong.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
Meriam
Glad you like the story.
All questions and suppositions will be answered eventually.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm assuming that Craigs little talk won't go well. As for Lindsay, just supposing she gets in and convenscates a used condum who's to say the jizz is Brian's? lol.
Author's Response:
YumYum
Craig's talk will be interesting. Lindsay will learn some new things. We are almost finished writing the story, but we can't give away too much. Trust us, it will be a fun ride.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 01, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
OK, so, gotta say. WOW! and a side of Holy Shitballs! A ton is happening already and it's only chapter 2.
Craig is seriously...I don't even have words. Hateful doesn't begin. You know that feeling, before you toss your cookies, that bile that churns and burns and then eventually finds itself in the toilet, only to be frlushed. Yeah...that's Craig.
I have to chuckle and shake my head when Craig described Brian as "weak-willed adn easily influenced" Can we all just sit and say BAHAHAHA! I was a bit concerned at possible outcomes that Craig my devise, but when I read that, and realized his true level of complete delusion, my fears are laid a side somewhat. No doubt he will do anything and everythign in his and anyone eles's power to bring his nemesises (is there a different plural for that ? Nemisi? Neminseseseses... ;) ) I am actually looking forward to how you and Lorie bring about his, huh, downfall is too kind of a word really...his nuclear meltdown? Either way, dear me, having him be a spectacular failure is going to be most entertaining to read. this he assumed would be on his side, he will quickly learn are no longer in hsi allegience. Other he may find will simply use him to gain more information in order to bring about his demise faster (and better).
Lindsey...I'm seeing a possibility here. Justin's kid instead of Brian's. Oh teh fallout would be sublime! Mel would shit her pants! I can even imagine the legal ramifications from that. Even if say it was Brian's...same thing. He would deny any allowable insemination. He's still go for custody. He's sue the hell out of both of them. Criminal charges?? Oh the possibilities are endless.
So grateful that Brian and Justin have su much support. They're going to need it even for teh emotional aspect of it. but I can foresee all of them circling the wagons around our boys and doing everything in their powers to fix any scenario.
Feel bad for Deb though. she's going to suffer greatly in this. she knows her some is a fool and has become a self righteous little bastard. How eve got away with disrespecting her as much as he did is beyond me, but it will end here, and everyone around her will make sure of it. the little bastard.
thank you for this!!! Excellent chapter to what is going to be a brilliant 2nd installment to the Boundless series. Can't wait to see what happens next! Definitely want to read about that dinner!! what happens with Michael next? Staying tuned in!!
sorry.man I'm long winded in these things aren't I?
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
Craig will try to cause trouble as usual. Lindsay... it will get interesting. Deb... the boys will be there for her. Things will get interesting in this story. There's a lot to tell.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Looks Like Harriet and Jennifer are going to be busy at the country club once they find out what Craig is up to, perhaps the Chanders can get in their daughter's good graces by apologizing and helping to deflect whatever Craig tries to do.
Since Brian has up the security around his business, Justin and Daphne I hope he has security around the loft because it would be nice to have evidence of Lindsay breaking and entering. (Just wish Melanie and Michael were with her)
Perhaps Harriet should keep an eye on the Petersons because I don't see them not getting involved.
Glenn is one persistent young man I hope Daphne is appreciating the lengths he is going and after maybe talking to her parents she puts the man out of his misery and goes out with him. lol
Michael has been to quiet wonder what he is up to and does Ben know about the lawsuit yet?
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
Jen and Harriet will have a few fun adventures. Daphne's parents love her and want the best for her. The security will be with them but not at the loft. Harriet keeps track of whatever is necessary. Glenn should be able to wear her down. Michael is not finished causing trouble. Ben finally sees the light.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~