Date: Feb 27, 2017 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Instant family. Lol. TAG
Date: Feb 14, 2017 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad it was that easy for Brian and Justin to get custody. I hope it stays that way.
Author's Response:
Susi
Justin is their father so he has the right to take them.
They will be raised and loved by the boys.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 13, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
fabulous chapter! I love how everyone is so happy for the boys and all want to beat the munchers. seriously Deb's description is perfect. beat one bitch with the other LOL
Author's Response:
Cookiebun
Everyone knows what wonderful lives the babies will have with those two as fathers.
Deb is pissed at what the girls did, no matter how much she loves the babies.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 09, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
Now they're one big happy family... Love the babies names!
Hugs Kathleen
Author's Response:
Kathleen
The boys will be great dads.
Nichelle came up with the names.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just love how this family protect their own members..
Atleast Melanie knows not to pissed off the little sunshine if she doesn't want her ass to be sued..
Great chapter as always. .
Author's Response:
April Danielle
They are family because they care for each other.
Melanie has at least some common sense.
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 08, 2017 1:15 am Title: Chapter 9
So many great moments. I would like to see how Deb would talk some sense to the munchers.
Jen will be so happy helping them to find a house.
Author's Response:
SNO
Deb won't even waste her time on those two.
Jen is thrilled for her sons
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~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
After reading this chapter I wish Brian, Justin, Christian and Tiffany endless peace but we all know they won't get it because Mel and Lindsay won't stop trying figure out a way to get Brian to pay for their lives, Lindsay won't stop trying to insinuate herself into Brian's life, Michael is going to renew his efforts to get Brian to pay attention to him and once he finds out about the babies he is going to do what he can to get rid of Justin, plus Craig hasn't given up trying to get revenge on Brian and Justin so when he finds out about the babies, the marriage proposal and new house he is going to try harder.
I wonder what Jennifer and Harriet have planned for Lindsay and Mel cause there is no way those two are going to let them get away with this? (Have to prevent Deb from going to jail :))
I love that Brian stepped up to protect his family and that he came up with the names for the babies, the daycare at Kinnetik is brilliant, I love who they chose for godparents and that everyone is going to do what they can to protect this new family from anyone trying to destroy them.
I was moved, angry and happy with this chapter and look forward to more :)
Author's Response:
BlueMyst
Endless peace would be great but wouldn't make much of a story.
There is much more interesting stuff to come.
Brian loves having a family all his own and he will do what is necessary to protect them.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
Date: Feb 07, 2017 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
I literally have no words. OK...you know that's crap. I always have tons of words... ;)
I started off this chapter with a lump in my throat and near tears and the level of love, communication and commitment between our 2 boys. Never mind Justin falling in love with Brian even more, I fell even hard for them both. Justins' fears are put to rest with Brian's committment to him adn the children. Oh how I absolutely adored that.
That feeling of warmth and love however turned drastically to such red hot anger! I'm honestly trying to wrap my head around Mel's thought process. Not only in thsi chapter but in the the previous one as well. As much as her hatred abounds for Brian, how on earth can she possibly think ANY of it is his fault. That she has the unmitigated gaul to confront him they way she did! that both she and Lindsey could just toss those 2 babies away like common trash is beyond me, never mind their reprehensible machinations leading up to the situation!! It's beyon amything my brain can compute. (The fact that you are able to come up with this aspect of the plot is mind boggling! Kudos to you both and just WOW that you are able to cause a reader to have such a florid amount of emotions shows just how tlaented you both really are!) Heartbroken for Brian at that though. That someone he considered such a good friend, his "Wendy" could be so profoundly devious to come up with this idea, just for the sake of an open checkbook is beyond the skope of my imagination. I can only hope that such legal action is take thatn both women pay an ultimate price for what they've done.
Naturally Jen and the rest of the family (save Michael of course) (OMG!! When Michael finds out!! LMFAO!!!) are supportive and will circle the wagons around this new family. Lord help anyone to tries to go against them, who tries to threaten them in any way.
Am am sooooooo looking forward to what else you have in store for us! This was an absolute BRILLIANT chapter! Mere words cannot express. Kids, proposals, a new house, all that's going to happen at Kinnetik........So much happening in 1 chapter!! It must have been exhausting writing it.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine
Cracked up at the first lines of your review.
Their love for each other is what makes them work, it's always there and unconditional.
Mel is trying to fight back without thinking of how things happened to cause what she sees as Brian screwing them over.
To come up with these things you just have to think of the cruelist things anyone could do.
In a way it just opened Brian's eyes to what he never wanted to admit about the two people he would have done anything for, that he may have been their best friend but they were never his.
Karma will fix a lot of things.
The family is thrilled about the new additions.
There are more surprises to come.
We have been writing this for a while, The organizing (most of which Nichelle does) and the touch ups are mostly all that's left.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love everything about this chapter. Do wish that Melanie and Lindsay get punished somehow for their actions. Those babies are going to have the happiest lives.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
The story isn't over yet, much more with the bitches.
Those are two very lucky kids. They will be well loved.
Thanks for reviewing
~Nichelle & Lorie~