Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2020 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

Love it

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Angelika,

Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed our story.

~Nichelle & Lorie

 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2019 5:05 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

Nichelle and Lorie,

I have to commend your combined talents with this story. It was so very good. I found it to be a new level of hatefulness for Lindsay and Michael. Craig, too. At least you rid the world of Craig's hatefulness, sending Michael into his own world of life close to a vegetable. Can you imagine solitary as a paraplegic? It would be bad enough if you could get up and walk around, but to just lie there with four brick walls, allowing your mind to never shut off. 

Lindsay... what can I say? Grandma's the Queen... and you have years of slavery. Serves you right!

I was glad Laura got a second chance for a new life. Yes, I didn't like her to start with, as I'm sure most didn't, but she was a product of her upbringing, which was tough.

Melanie... maybe it's because I read this in pretty much one sitting, but her hatefulness, to me, didn't quite get the punishment she deserved. She willingly went along with the plan... to have... "Brian pay through the nose, and get them out of debt." Extortion. And the verbal diatribe afterward, toward Brian and Justin, was awful, mean, and of poor taste. She out loud blamed Brian because they weren't his babies. Yes,  she couldn't practice law for a long time, but she was still able to work with the judge. But, whatever. As I said, if I had read the story as posted, and had to wait between chapters, I might not have felt so strongly.

Brian and Justin... a new level of friendship and lovers. Husbands and fathers. And I loved the baby's names. They were so very Brian.

Yes, I commend you both, the story was very well done, and worth the reread.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

 

Cathy,

We have a great time working together. Glad you enjoyed our story.

~Nichelle & Lorie

 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2019 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

good one, never likeed Lindsey

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

Aaaaaamazing story....thank u for sharing....great work.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2017 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

I'm glad you wrapped it all up so neatly. I like knowing what happened to everyone. Thank you for sharing your story. 

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Susi

So happy you enjoyed the story.

Thanks for reviewing

~Nichelle & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2017 1:15 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

Wow i actually drop some tear of this,its just so beautifully done and written well...I'm gonna miss the boys surely,their chemistry,passion and love for each other is just overwhelming at times..And how they lost two of their member is so devastating to see but the best part is they gain more than you can count..

Loved everything how this story ended.

Thank you for sharing.😘 😍

Author's Response:

 

April Danielle

Thank you for the compliments.

The boys, the kids and the family will have a great life.

Thanks for reviewing

~Nichelle & Lorie~

Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

Really good story everyone got what they deserved but sorry to see it end. ❤

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Lorna

Very glad you enjoyed the story. 

Karma took care of everyone.

Thanks for reviewing

~Nichelle & Lorie~

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

What a wonderfully complete ending to this fabulous tale.  Thanks for letting us know where everyone stands.

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YumYum

Wanted to make sure to wrap it up so everyone got what they deserved.

Thanks for reviewing

~Nichelle & Lorie~

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 14: EPILOGUE

Wonderful story!

Thank you for sharing

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SNO

So happy you enjoyed the story

Thanks for reviewing

~Nichelle & Lorie~