Date: Apr 04, 2017 4:43 am Title: Chapter 21
Love.. just love! The frankness of the conversations pulls me right in
Date: Mar 22, 2017 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aww, they said it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:26 am Title: Chapter 21
Can't interrupt Michael when he is in full blown 'Woe Is Me' mode I swear he and Lindsay should just sit in a room and lament how bad their lives are while hoping that Brian will come to save them...again.
Brian staying away from both of them is a good thing cause it's time for them to act like adults and fix their own problems.
Brian is out of the 'Saving Michael and Lindsay' business it is a never ending cycle that sucks the life right out of you.
Gus saying I love to Justin was so sweet because even with all the uncertainty in his young life he knows that his daddies love him and will protect him no matter what.
Mel walking away from Lindsay shows she is stronger than she thinks and that she is putting herself and those kids first.
There are those who want to grow up and others who love living in the past.
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2017 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 21
I love how your characters point out the obvious yet certain people don't see the truth. I also love that Brian realizes what he feels for Justin is love and Justin feels the same way.
Date: Feb 20, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 21
I was hoping Mikey would give his Dad a chance, perhaps understand the part his mother played in keeping them separate, but, nope. True to form Mikey is focused on the completely wrong thing. Grampy let him have, poor dumb dumb.
Brian is projecting about Drew because ultimately there were so many factors that dumping the fiancé wasn't easy. You can only hope Drew loves Emmett, which us the same position any couple should truly be viewed in. Even when love is obvious, it may not be love.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 21
Michael might have gone about things the wrong way but he’s right that Drew’s fiancée is the victim in this mess. Brian is right that Drew should have broken things off with her before getting involved (sexually or otherwise) with someone else so Drew was in the wrong there. And since Emmett knew that Drew was engaged he was in the wrong too by having sex with Drew. But since they did what they did, instead of manning up and owning their mistakes and at least apologising to the fiancée and trying to make restitution they’re trying to make themselves look good instead. And I’m very disappointed that Warren and Justin are encouraging that when instead they should be encouraging Drew and Emmett to do the right thing by the fiancée and at the very least apologize to her personally and hopefully even publically as well! I now dislike all four of them. Since everyone is telling Michael to own up to his mistakes they should be applying that to Drew and Emmett as well.
Date: Feb 19, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 21
What a family reunion!
Date: Feb 19, 2017 3:29 pm Title: Chapter 21
Fabulous Chapter!!! Michael and Lindsay have shown that they can't be helped and need to be left behind.
Glad that Mel and Ben made the decisions that are right for them. Helen is an absolute dream!! I really love the way she got Mel to both think and say what she needed to.
I love that Lindsay is going to have to learn to stand on her own for once instead of looking for hand-outs. It's something that should have happened a long time ago!
Warren and Brian's talks are endearing. Brian is finally getting the father-figure he's always needed.
Michael trying to guilt Justin into giving him the attention he wants backfired big time. I loved the way he acted as Michael's mirror and pointed all of the supposed grievances back where they belonged.
But most of all I loved that Brian and Justin declared their feelings for each other.
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Feb 19, 2017 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aaaaaaaah finally declaring their love for eachðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Wow Michael really is fantasizing about having everything in a blink of an eye because he's related to Justin??Does he even think that his father might have nothing or so little compare to Justin's family?but No...So immature and childish and expect everything will be handed to him..
Good for Mel taking a stand and not letting Lindsay manipulate her again..and too bad for Lindsay no one's gonna come to sit beside her and specially not Brian not even helping her..she's on her own,it should be a lesson for her...
Date: Feb 19, 2017 11:32 am Title: Chapter 21
Swoon...I love you both!!!! lol
I know I tell you all the time but I love this story.