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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:04 am Title: Chapter 24

I hope Ben wises  up

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 24

I knew it didn't feel right. These two are nuts if they think they can go against Brian and Mel. How are they planning to support themselves?

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 24

WEll, I guess there goes my theory that M&L were on the road to straightening out their lives adn realtionships. And looky there! they've managed to add  Ben into their little road trip to selfishness and entitlement. I must say, I did NOT see that coming. My first reaction is that Ben is a dick. I mean, I'm pretty pissed off at him with regards to Hunter. He of all people should've been more aware and understanding of what Hunter was going through. It shouldn't have taken justin to point things out to him. butnow...to take up with Michael about Jenny!?!? when neither of them can father Hunter? That ben is making completely illogical excuses for Michael's behaviour...OOOOOOHHHHHHH I want to just bitch slap him. I'm honestly more furious at Ben than I am at Michael adn Lindsey. I expect it from them. 

AS for Lindsey...sorry, but it's pretty laughable! She actually thinks she's capable to raising all these kids?  I honestly thought that she and Michael were going to have a spurt of maturity. Obviously not. I would make for a very short angst period though wouldn't it ;)  )  She's a manipulative cunt. (sorry...bad word, but there are times when it's the only description pausible) She manipulative and thinks that she adn her "name" have influence. Wiat till she sees that having the entire family behind Justin does. hehe. she has no idea does she?? Then she goes running to Michael who as usual, shows his true colours, except now, Ben overhears. Will be be able to make excuses? How much did Ben actually overhear? If he sticks with Michael for now at least, what's going to happen? Oh the possiblities! You definitely keep us guessing.

And so anxious now to see what you have for us in teh next chapter!! dying to now Ben's reaction to all this.

Cheers,

Elaine 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

Lindsey thinks that she can win against Brian when she's pregnant from adultery. Does she even have a job, a home?

Micheal and Ben won't have the support from Hunter and that could weigh against them.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 9:35 am Title: Chapter 24

I just want to choke Lindsay and Michael.  Theses are children's lives you are messing with.

I hope Mel, Brian and Justin are able to keep the kids away from that newly formed family.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:58 am Title: Chapter 24

So yet again Ben is putting Michael's needs in front of what is right and Hunter has been pushed to the sidelines again, what the Hell does Michael know about taking care of a baby he barely acknowledged Gus exists because he took Brian's attention away from him.

I don't think there are any comics about taking care of a baby who is going to be spending a lot of time with Deb than either of her daddies.

And Lindsay she could barely take care of Gus when Mel left so she almost married a Frenchman, how is she going to handle three kids with no support from Brian? (Perhaps Mommy and Daddy should experience a Cold Wasp Shoulder?)

Ben is an idiot who wants to believe Michael is pure of heart and refuses to see that Michael only looks out for Michael, I hope he heard every word his doting husband said maybe he will wake up, take off the rose colored glasses and see Michael for who he really is!

Michael and Lindsay deserve the Hell that is about to rain upon them!!!

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:00 am Title: Chapter 24

Wow what an asshole Michael could be!!i hope Ben leave him again,because it turns out the whiny brat has just been using him!!And Ben.,what a nerve coming to Justin's house just to put the blame on him for the whiny's problems??You're better than that Ben?!

So Lindsay you being a cunt and manipulative one,what does it feel.now that your so called confidant is just using you as well..??and now being on Brian and Justin's bad side not to mention Grampy,what are planning to do??I'm sure sooner Sidney would fire you for bringing scandal to his gallery and surely your parents will deny you too bcoz of their social climbing status and doesn't want to get on Warren's bad side,so you're all alone now..

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 2:05 am Title: Chapter 24

Well well well!!! It seems there's NO HONOR among opportunistic, narcissistic jackasses, is there? Good for Lindsay... and plus how exactly did she think she was going to manage FOUR children? Stupid ass!!! I wonder what Ben will do now that he heard that he is basically a means to an end.

I'm glad that Brian and Justin are joining their lives and that they are going to stand with Mel. If Michael thought he didn't have anyone in his corner before, well he certainly does NOT now! Wait until Debbie gets wind of his petition to take the kids away from Mel. WHOO-WEE to be the fly on the wall watching the smacks fly!! LOL I can't wait!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 1:37 am Title: Chapter 24

How Lindsay and Michael thought this would work is beyond me.  They are going up against the big boys and if I'm reading this right Ben's about to jump ship.

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 1:37 am Title: Chapter 24

I love you so much. I'm laughing as I write this. 

 

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 12:27 am Title: Chapter 24

The drama just jumps off the screen!! And with that the yummy love!  Ben was played like a cheap harmonica, I wonder how he will react to the truth?

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