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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:24 am Title: Chapter 27

This plan is awesome!!! Finally Ben gets a clue!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 27

This is amazing. I'm having so much fun seeing Michael and Lindsay struggling. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 27

You know...as much as I feel bad for ben that he heard the truth of things straight from Michael's mouth. I hope he doesn't play the victim. He was just as big an ass as Michael and Lindsey were/are. they totally manilpulated him, but everyone else around warned him. told him he was screwing up, but he didn't listen.

Lindsey is useless. Still feeling entitled. sheeeesh.

Michael just wants Jenny to have a real connection to Brian. they could "raise their kids together"...again pfffffffffffffft.

cheers

Elaine

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 27

Well well well they're so eager to get Jenny from Mel but unable to take care of her and expected Debbie to watch the baby???They don't even know that Deb was not at home...Michael really is a stupid dump ass, (sorry )and now he's all alone bacause seems Lindsay doesn't care about his plan but her own agenda..And at first i was pissed with Ben when he cornered Justin but i guess now he heard the reall reason for his so called husband for getting back with him he finally get it..it must a punch to his guts..

Aaaah Brian is so sweet and adorable the way he acts toward Justin..Picking  him up from work,bcoz he doesn't want him to drive from working at night like it was Justin's first time..??I'm sure it's just a way to him first thing in the morning..😍😍

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 27

You know, I was totally going down the road of Ben losing his hearing a and never finding out the Mikey used him, but no, Mikey just needed to say it loud enough.  Poor lovesick Ben.  Mikey playing the family card is hysterical.  He still thinks he should be rich, so he really doesn't even understand family.  I love how Lindsay is so concerned she hasn't even tried to come up with a plan for Gus beyond trying to go out with Brian to meet Grampy. 

Mel lucked out cuz, Granny and Grampy are putting those two in their lanes.  Brian and Justin are in love and united, no complaints.  The gala is coming, lol.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 11:55 am Title: Chapter 27

I love that Brian and Justin are not taking any shit from anyone. 

Michael, Ben, and Lindsay need to grow up and take responsibility if they want to see their kids.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 4:45 am Title: Chapter 27

Excellent! Michael is burying himself.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 27

Yay, Ben finally got it.  I feel sorry for Jenny, Michael would have let her starve.  

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 3:12 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh No Ben You Don't Get To Walk Away From This Wreck, You Hitched Yourself To This Train So Enjoy The Ride!!!

Ben can't really be surprised Michael is using him he had years to deal with Michael running after Brian and Let Him, he treated Hunter like crap repeatedly and Let Him, now that Michael wants to play Daddy he should just bend over and Let Him continue to step all over his back.

Michael is expecting Deb to take of  Jenny while he sits on his flat Ass and read comics, he is ready for the responsibility of a baby like Ben is ready for the responsibility of a teenager.

I wouldn't be surprised if he got on the witness stand and blamed Danny for the reason why he is a crappy father, Brian may not have wanted to be a father but unless the girls started bitching he never willing turned his on back on Gus and left others to handle the hard stuff.

Michael wanted a kid to improve his status quo and to in a way link him to Brian but he never wanted to be an actual father, he wanted the title without the responsibility and in a way so did Ben, they liked spending time with Jenny but loved sending her home so Mel could deal with everything else.

Justin told Ben the truth and after hearing from Michael why they are actually back together he wants to believe I say Too Little, Too Late Dad.

Brian is doing the right thing by combining the halfway house and school so these kids can have somewhere safe to go and a chance to better their lives with people who really do care and want them to succeed.

Can't Wait to See What Happens Next? <Does happy dance>

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 2:21 am Title: Chapter 27

OH so NOW Ben wants to hear?!!! LOL Well I guess it was better late than never. Looks like the Entitled train is finally pulling out of the station and Michael and Lindsay are FIANLLY getting left behind. About damn time! 

Really Michael and Lindsay deserve each other and Ben deserves both of them for being stupid!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2017 1:57 am Title: Chapter 27

Michael is an ass. How is he going to care for a baby, he can't take care of himself?

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