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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 5:55 am Title: Chapter 31

What a celebration!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 31

Maybe that talk with his father will help Michael. But I don't really believe it. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 1:17 am Title: Chapter 31

Awwww... Hunter's getting a car... Lol. Ok that talk was a great way to keep the focus of showing Hunter a better way.  The new kids will be just fine I'm sure, the foster parents are going to spoil them rotten.

 Aww, Justin HIPPA violated Bruan, that's so sexy.  Actually, violating the law for love is sexy.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 31

Wow! I think this is one of the first times that someone put it to Michael so clearly. Did he ever have a belief that wasn't Brian's...THAT was most brilliant Star!!! I hope he actually takes it to hear. He really needs to figure himself out soon. While he's not necessarily "bad" in this one, (ok, the diner scene was definitely bad!!) he's definitely frustrating. I want to pull a Deb and smack him up side the head. Perhaps that's teh problem...she's smacked him too many times and caused damage? LOL. ;) I get the impression that Daniel may be one of the few people to ever get through to him properly. He may never be the father that Michael had always hoped for, but he could definitely be a friend. An positive influence in his life. Someone that won't let him get a way with crap.

Am LOVING how Brian and Justin's realtionship is developing! Now the have the added 2. Now that was lovely and so heartwarming! that Michael and Lindsey confronting him the way they did was terrible, and completely selfish. Michael has a tendency to run off at the mouth without thinking. I think he may have learned a bit of a lesson at the diner!! Lindsey though...she's just a totally selfish bitch. Shes' pissed because Brian won't lie for her. She's being forced to be accountable for her own actions. I mean the nerve!! ;) But B&J though...coming out stronger and stronger every day. Brian is incredibly nurturing in this. I love it! Justin is of course as well, but it's almost expected of him. Yup...these 2 are going to be amazing together.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 31

I love the new relationship between Mel and Brian. They still tease each other, but it's not mean anymore.

Hunter seems to enjoy this new family.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 31

Loving it couldn't stop reading the whole story is very amusing looking forward to more. 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 11:21 am Title: Chapter 31

Perfect chapter.  I love the little family they are making together. 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 6:23 am Title: Chapter 31

That was Hot!!!and doing it raw too....

I can see Mel and Brian bonding with each for the sake of the kids but this time i thnik it's more like they really like each other..

Michael no words can explain,he's just an hopeless case..

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 5:51 am Title: Chapter 31

Brian is embracing being an adult because now he has people in his life who want to see him happy.

Michael just wants to continue to act like a child and let everyone do the hard work while he reaps the awards.

That's why he and Lindsay are frenemies neither one wants to earn the accolades they just expect everyone to love them and do whatever they want while continuing to excuse how really nasty, mean, spiteful, vindictive, jealous, lazy, greedy, self-absorbed and cruel they really are, plus they will use each other to get what they want and then stab the other in the back to win.

They really can't see that they got left behind years ago and that no one is going to be their doormat anymore.

Brian gave Hunter some good advice that will help him as he makes his way through this crazy thing called life.

A very hot romantic moment between Brian and Justin that continues to cement how perfect they are for each other :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 31

This as all your other chapters is perfect.  

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