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Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2020 8:25 am Title: Chapter 34

😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 6:18 am Title: Chapter 34

They can't even make it through dinner... such a lovely couple lol

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 34

They are not nuts. They have completely lost it. I love how the family is handling it. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 6:58 am Title: Chapter 34

That chapter is funny enough to be a standalone fic!! Seriously, you outdid your silly on this, lol.  


It doesn't appear they are surrendering, but who knows. Perhaps an engagement photo in cosplay? Lol I'm just not seeing the GLC Davina wedding as working for Linds, lol.


Fantastic!!!


 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 3:54 am Title: Chapter 34

I had to delete my first review cause I confused it with another story <bangs my head against the wall>

I do believe that the GLC should be decorated with both Michael and Lindsay's taste and the Wedding clothes should be Captain Astro centric.

I also think The Petersons and their friends should be there to witness the spectacle and maybe they can take home a gift bag lol.

How can they want to have custody of Gus and Jenny when they can't even handle them for a few hours without crying Uncle?

Ooo maybe they should do a 3-d  themed wedding or a laser beam wedding like Star Wars meets Beauty and the Beast, or maybe they should have a War of the Roses themed wedding they already have the fighting part down??? (Of course Michael would make an ugly Kathleen Turner, but Lindsay might be able to pull off a Michael Douglas?;))

Can they dance to Its a Deadman's Party? :)

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 34

Oh! I am so loving this! I live for anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay stories and nobody does it better!

I keep telling myself I'll never start reading another WIP because I just can't wait for the updates, but this is so awesome!

Keep it coming!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 34

I don't know how they all didn't vomit.  I can totally picture Debi not being able to keep it together.   What a funny chapter!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 34

I meant to add this earlier that one would think that Ron and Nancy would be happy that Lindsay is marrying a man this time...but then again Michael is not a man; he's a mouse! LOL

Cringeworthy but funny as hell!!!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 34

Hahaha it's hilarious😅😅How long can they pretend until everything went down because from the look of it they can never get along well..

I am so enjoying this new drama of the crazy dou...

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 34

Man...for a nano second there I have a modicum of hope for Michael. Is it bad that I'm almost glad he disappointed me? LOL. I'm actually in shock that he considered going through with this scam. I mean, the really don't even like each other, how can they possibly think that anyone is going to believe this?

I have to say though...I have GOT to stop reading these when I'm at work. I was in an absolute FIT of giggles reading this. Thank goodness I can close my office door, otherwise I'd be having folks giving me the stink eye. Seriously though.......OMFG!!!!!!!! So many hysterical moments in this chapter! Your comedic ability is something that has always drawn me to your writing. Always, in every fic, there are parts that are either baltantly funny, or comedic undertones. Eitherway...you are funny as hell are so talented at bringing it across to the reader, and incorporating it into your stories.

These 2 obviously didn'tthink things through at all. The mistakenly assumed that Brian would provide support, assumed Mel would keep her on the insurance, adn now it seems they have little time to think things through even further as their weddingwill be fast approaching. Seriously...are they going to go through with it?!

Deb slayed me. She's encouraging a quicky wedding between M&L...Hunter waling into the door...Ron and Nancy's regard for Michael...Oh man...the list goes on. 

I seriously can't wait for more of this. So needed this laugh today! I'm going back to read it again. LOL.

THANK YOU for this most entertaining chapter! Absolutely loved it!!!

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 34

Ha ha ha!!! The dream couple! They are together for less than a week and they are already arguing. I could imagine Michael manners with the WASP.

Reviewer: Tena Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 34

Lol! Oh picturing Michael and Lindsay cracked me up bi live that the family is not buying it for a minute but pretending too. Wonderful. More please

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 34

Seeing Lindsay and Michael try to convince everyone that they are a couple is funny.  The fact that they can't seem to adjust to Gus and Jenny staying with them nor the fact that they are unable to support the two babies that Lindsay has in the oven is painful.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 34

Looks like trying to be a pair of sanctimonius slyboots is backfiring big time for the PITA Association! And I couldn't be happier or more sore from laughing all during this chapter! It's simply amazing that they are really trying to execute this plan; trying to force Brian's hand in paying attention to them and supporting them. I really feel bad for the babies in Lindsay's womb right now. Gus and Jenny will be alright but those two virtually have no one. I laughed aloud when Lindsay thought she could make that snide comment about the free clinic and Justin basically told her that her judgment should also be self-directed. Love that the two of them are constantly burning bridges by simply being their usual spiteful, selfish selves. No one has to be against them because Michael and Lindsay really are their own worse enemies....SMH Pathetic and no redeeming qualities to recommend them whatsoever! 

BTW... I didn't miss Lindsay's reference about 'Justin's kids' deliberately negating that they are Brian's as well. What an avarcious BITCH!!! This just proves that Lindsay and Michael are some low-life leeches who will stop at nothing to get what they want which includes using innocent children. I can't wait to see how they will recover from the verbal dropkicks they have both received.

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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