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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2017 6:54 am Title: Chapter 39

Honesty works again. Mikey is just lucky that Brian was able to talk to the girl

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2017 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 39

Well at least Michael was there to help. It could be a start. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:22 am Title: Chapter 39

Seriously, Mikey you should keep a sucker in your mouth so at least you'd have to take it out before speaking and maybe those seconds will filter some of the stupid.  You get points for trying to help.

Im glad the opening went well.  Everyone should be pleased with the progress.  

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 39

Damn it Michael: shut your mouth or stay home!

Brian saved the day and Justin must feel overwhelmed.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 39

What a gorgeous heart warming chapter. Brian naming it Justin's Heart was so touching. Paying tribute to his husband this way was lovely. It show's just how much Brian has changed. How open he's become, not just with Justin, but he really showed it at the opening of the center by talking with, who he thought was the street kid. Opening up to her like he did. I'm glad that part turned out OK! Loved the intereaction with Zack and Nat. REally showing that they don't want a hand ut, but want to work at and honest job. they don't want handouts. amazing the difference in attitudes between these two and Michael, who would be quite happy to have everything just handed to him without having to earn it.

Michael needs to seriously learn how to use a filter on his mouth. I'm honestly not even sure he realizes how condecending he really is, or if he really does look down his nose at these kids. What was his real motivation to go to the opening? I can't see it being for true altruistic purposes. He's far too selfish. Was it just to try to hang with Brian? Was it so he looks better in the public eye, or to look better in Brian's eye? Whatever his motivation, he's still a stuck up little prick whose entitlement issues are misplaced! I seriously don't get where they come from.

Nice article that Nancy wrote. 

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 11:23 am Title: Chapter 39

Awe..."Justin's Heart."  Brian is so head over heals in love with his husband.

Michael does need to learn to keep his mouth shut.

I'm glad it was a reporter and not a real street kid.  It was real sweet to see them all pitching in to take care of Zach and Nat.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 39

Excellent chapter!

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 1:07 am Title: Chapter 39

An excellant chapter and once again Michael almost steps in it.  But Brian's trying to talk a girl out of leaving brought tears to my eyes.  I applaud the center and wish there were places like this in every town.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:50 am Title: Chapter 39

Really nice

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 39

Maybe if Michael had to struggle he wouldn't be so quick to put down others who have to survive on the streets.

He had Deb who worked until she was to tired to get so he had everything his little heart desired, he never once had to fight to make it one more day because he had Deb, Vic, Brian to protect him from the real world while he could live in his comic books and fantasies.

Michael lived a life of a little Prince while Deb worked and saved to give him a better life so he would never know how utterly cruel and draining life could be and how did her son pay her back?

He treated her like crap called her embarrassing, talked down, criticized, humiliated and cast her aside unless he needed his battles fought.

Michael took one step forward to come to the center and help then he opened his mouth and moved twenty steps back, luckily it was a reporter and not an actual kid coming there for help.

Justin's Heart is going to help anyone who wants a chance for a better life, Brian should be very proud of all he did behind the scenes to make this center possible and everyone who helped should be happy aswell.

Very Good Chapter :)

 

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 39

I loved it.Great job <3

 

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