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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 10:29 am Title: Chapter 43

Poor Gus.  I know he isn't going to understand why Lindsay is leaving.  I wish she could just disappear without it affecting him.

Reviewer: Mariana Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 10:22 am Title: Chapter 44

This was an amazing story. I love every word.

Are you going to write a sequel? Please......There is so much

to tell about their life.

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 6:48 am Title: Chapter 44

Thank you for this wonderful story!

The part with Gus and Justin was beautiful and difficult to read. Brian is an amazing father.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 6:34 am Title: Chapter 43

Michael seems to be on the right path with Ben.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 5:55 am Title: Chapter 44

Loved the ending..You always do know how to put a happy ending for our boys..💜❤

Thank you for sharing and great job as always😍

Looking forward to start the new one🤗🤗

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 4:11 am Title: Chapter 44

*sniff sniff* What a lovely ending. Grumpy is a hoot. Just love him. Ted is going to get over his hyperventilating soon enough I think. 

Glad Michael is visiting Ben. 

B&J getting remarried was the perfect touch. 

Really wonderful story! Thanks again for sharing.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 4:01 am Title: Chapter 44

Sorry to see this end but I enjoyed the ride and the introduction of new very interesting characters this story had a lot heart and I know I will be reading it again. Thank You :)

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 3:40 am Title: Chapter 44

Another beautiful story...Thank you for making this week less awful, what with our incredibly weird storm with nothing but wind, not tornadoes, just wind causing almost 1000000 to be without power. I am glad Gus will have his siblings.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 3:40 am Title: Chapter 44

Noooo.  I have enjoyed each and every chapter and while I'm glad that the babies will be with Ted and Blake I want to read more.  You make the best universes.

Reviewer: brandi1111 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 3:40 am Title: Chapter 44

I have read all your stories multiple times. But I think I am saddest this one is over. Very well done, heartfelt, and entertaining. Already addicted to the new one and hoping for the next one. Congrats. Bee

 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 3:37 am Title: Chapter 44

I must admit that I was in fact bored... usually 10 mins after reading an update.  I guess anticipating is a better word.  :). This was a realy fun story with vivid characters and situations.  I hope you can see that your writing is improving its a joy to watch as you flex your muscles. Have you had 300 reviews yet? Cuz you do now, CONGRATS!!!!

Brava and Thank You!!!

Bye Grampy and Granny...

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2017 3:02 am Title: Chapter 43

Perhaps one day Ben and Michael will make Fantastic Grown Ups.

I do wonder what Lindsay says to Gus and how he will handle her leaving?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 43

Looks like things are looking up.  Now if only Lindsay doesn't screw things up with Gus.

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 43

What the hell!!!! You made me have warm fuzzies for Ben and Michael?? I even caught myself saying"Awwww"...Where is the fun in that? (JK) I am still loving Justin. Another great chapter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 7:43 am Title: Chapter 42

Lindsey is so devious! Nice for Sam to stick to the plan.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 2:51 am Title: Chapter 42

At least it seems like Sam is trying to do the right thing. TAG

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 2:05 am Title: Chapter 42

Sam and Lindsay disgust me.  Have a nice life together.

Everyone will rally around the kids and they will feel wanted and loved.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 1:01 am Title: Chapter 42

Lindsay still trying to keep a hold so that later when Sam kicks her (And we all know he will) to the curb she can come back to reclaim her place and then later her kids.

Lindsay can save her tears because the only one moved by them are her and any fool gullible enough to see her as a damsel who needs saving, instead of trying to be an artist she really should have become an actress she has quite a talent in fooling people and assuming a role to get what she wants.

Michael was smart to bring a lawyer with him because he would have signed and not cared about the consequences, he may finally be embracing the life of a grown up and seeing Lindsay for the viper she always was.

I wonder how long Sam will be married to Lindsay before he leaves her high and dry for his next captivating muse?

Sam and Lindsay are greedy they want all the attention, adoration and respect  focus on them and when they don't get it they go look for someone who will feed their ego.

Great Chapter:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:53 am Title: Chapter 42

Love how Michael thanks to Warren was smart and brought a lawyer to the meet.  Wonder what it was that he told Sam to do.  At least Michael won't have to pay a housenote.  So he's getting something.  And Lindsay can't try anything with the twins.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 41

Awwww... more parking lot tears... it was way better than better than Brian saying "I'm rich b!tch!"  Grampy considers him a son.. Beautiful!

Theres no rules so Miley is welcome to try to do the right thing.  Like the kids said he needs to think.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 41

It's nice that Michael has finally got his head on straight.  I can see where it would be hard for everyone to believe him and surprisingly I think Michael gets that.  He's not looking through rose colored glasses anymore.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 41

Awe what a touching moment between Brian and Grampy.  I still don't trust Michael.  I guess I'll wait and see what happens.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 41

That whole scene with Brian and Warren got me all teary-eyed I just loved that part.

Warren was right about Ben he thinks because he takes the moral high ground he is superior but it is just taking the cowards way out so he doesn't have to fight.

He stood by Michael while he abused, mistreated and was cruel to everyone around him in his bid to be the center of everything and he didn't stop it until it personally affected him then Zen Ben couldn't get away fast enough.

Loving someone doesn't mean you excuse their behavior until it hits you, it means being honest and helping each other be better.

Michael liked that Ben excused his behavior because it meant he could continue to act like a child and Ben liked that everyone saw him as a different version of Brian.

Only problem is that Brian was honest  with his actions while Ben hid behind his Zen master mantra.

I hope Ben and Michael can grow up and face the problems in their marriage so both can show Hunter and Jenny what a family is.

I also want to believe that at long last Michael is ready to face life like a grown up instead of reverting back to fourteen again whenever he doesn't get his own way??

Wonderful Update, Thanks :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 41

Whoa, Michael really is making efforts to be better.

The end is so emotional: Brian finally has a true father figure. Someone he can lean on, beside Justin.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 41

OK, so those last few lines....major lump in my throat. That was really really lovely and something Brian I'm sure really needed to hear.

I guess now we can honestly trust Michael apparently. He's been very straight forward. Kind of impressed. I took in what others said to him, didn't get all pissed off when they were skeptical, and finally understood what all his mother did for him growingup, and also, just how much a father Carl has been. 

I think Emmett may take a bit longer to forgive Michael. Can't really blame him. Unlike wiht Justin, what he did effected more people and did far more damage.

Cheers,

Elaine

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